Please give me your thoughts.
Chapter 2
Manny and Sid were walking on the side of a river and Sid was talking about a "date" he was on.
"And then she said if I was going to date another person she should at least be the same color, and I thought wow she's going to go praying mantes on me." Sid said
"Look if you're going to date someone then you should be grateful. If you had a mirror then you would see that you should be grateful." Manny said
"Whats that over there?" Sid said pointing ahed at the river.
In the river there was a young woman with pointy ears holding something in her arm. She moved towards them then pushed the bundle towards Manny. Manny bent down and rolled the bundle over to reveal an elf baby.
"Where'd she go?" Sid said when he got up from looking at the baby to see that the woman was gone.
Manny got up and walked away then Sid said,"Where are you going you saved him."
"Thats not my problem," Manny said
"But thats probably his family up the hill." Sid protested
"I said no," Manny said
"Fine be the jerk that everyone at school thinks you are." Sid said and started to clime the cliff Sid with the baby in his arm."
Diego was walking down the mountain when he heard some one yell,"You're an embarrassment to your animal spirit, you know that right,"
"I'm fine I'm fine" The second one said followed by a mumbling sound.
Diego started to walk to them then the elf baby fall and started to run then cote the baby in mid are while a guy wearing a Brown sweeter with a brow scarf and caky jeans.
Diego gave a low growl before clearing his throat and saying,"That baby is mine."
"Actually that baby belongs to us." A small guy said with greasy blond hair
"Us, you to are an odd cupel. Ohh, I see you couldn't have one yourself so you decided to adopt." Diego said with a chuckle, it was obvious that the two didn't know each other or the baby the small one was holding.
"Ha ha you find your self a camidian." Sid said
"Look his family has already left, how about you give me the baby and I'll bring him to his family." Diego said
"Oh you want to help, I don't think so Its obvious with those green eyes that you're a saber and most sabers our age are jerks. Come on Sid lets bring him back to his family." Manny said
Manny was walking around the elves house and it was obvious that they already left, he seat the baby down and looked around to see if there was any one around.
"I told you they already left." He turned around to see the boy in the light brown leather jacket, orange scarf and slightly ripped jeans. The guy just screened saspishis but Manny walked over to him.
"You think you can find them?" Manny asked
"Ya, of corse I can find them. Names Diego by the way." Diego said
"I'm Sid and thats Manny. Sorry tigy wiggie can't come." Sid said, Diego gave him a glare that could turn a rainforest into a desert in a second.
"Actualy Sid, tigy wiggle's going to help us track down his family." Manny said before walking back out the door.
"I'd watch your back some day you're going to have my knife sticking out of it." Diego threatened Sid
"Hay uber tracker up in front where I can see you." Manny yelled, Diego listened and walked up in front. Diego held back his temptation to smoke a sigeret until they could get on a bus so he could smoke without two of the poor kids bugging him about it.
