here's the first chapter, hope everyone like's it, if not let me know, it can be changed x :)
Music blared out of small white speakers and filled the gym, as 15 year old Jack punched and kicked the bunching bag in the old abandoned gym. He had been doing it for nearly forty minutes when he stopped turned of the speakers, put them into his small black bag, got his phone out and made a call, while he was waiting for a reply, Jack looked out of one of the big dirty windows in the gym,
"Owen where are you?, I've called you three times already, look I was pissed off ok, you know how I am, pick up your phone you Dickhead!"
Jack put his phone away after leaving another message on his friends phone, grabbed his black bag, put it over his shoulders and walked out of the gym.
Jack walked for about three minutes in till he walked across a patch of grass, walked to the side of a building of flats, he picked up a couple of small stones and walked backwards to stand on the grass. Jack threw a stone upwards at one of the open balcony doors while he was waiting for a reply Jack looked to his left and saw his younger brother and two off his friend spray painting on a wall.
"Grey what the FUCK are you doing?" Jack watched as his younger brother Grey turned around and replied like it was the most obvious thing ever,
"duh what does it look like" Jack was about to say something Back, but was interrupted by a man coming out of the balcony door of the flat, he had just threw a stone at.
"OWENS NOT HERE JACK SO PISS OFF!!"
"CAN YOU GIVE OWEN A MESSAGE FOR ME?… TELL HIM I THINK HIS OLD MAN'S A CUNT!!"
"I'M GOING TO HAVE YOU ONE OF THESE DAYS JACKIE!"
"YOU'LL BE SO FUCKING LUCKY!" Jack shouted back as he walked away from the man and his younger brother.
He was walking around the estate, when he came across a couple of boys trying to box, but were doing a very poor job of it, Jack sat down near where they were, he shook his head and gave a little laugh at how stupid they all looked trying to impress a couple of girls that had stopped to watch them.
after about a minute or two of watching them, one of the boys noticed him and saw his disgusted expression and shouted to him
"WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM!!" Jack stood up and walked over to the group while saying
"your rubbish boxing is my problem"
The other boys all started to shout at Jack, when they also noticed him, but Jack was only focused on the boy who had asked what his fucking problem was, a few more words were exchanged between them as well as a lot of shoving in till Jack finally had had enough of the boy and head butted him and walked away to the sound of the other boys shouting after him,
"YEH WALK AWAY" "FUCKING COWARD". "DICKHEAD" "TOSSER" "CUNT"
Jack walked round the estate for a while longer in till he final decided to go home. Jack unlocked the front door, walked to the living room door and bent down to greet the family's dog Dexter. He was petting the dog when he was pushed forward only saving himself in time with his hand so he did not crash to the floor. Jack jumped up and turned around to see who had pushed him and came face to face with his angry and probably half drunk mother Kaya
"Where the fuck have you been?, the police have been round here, saying you broke a guys nose!" Kaya said to Jack, with frustration in her voice, Jack looked at his mother and said
"they started it, not ME!" Jack tried to get past his mother in the small hallway to go up to his room but found his way blocked as Kaya would not move and kept trying to get a hold of Jack arms while screaming at him
"WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!",
"Get of off me mum!. get of off me KAYA!…LET GO OF ME!!"
"NO I WILL NOT LET GO OF YOU!!"
Jack finally got past his mother, receiving a slap around the back of his head as he headed up stairs. when Jack got to the top of the stairs he heard Kaya shout up to him
"WHAT IS YOUR FUCKING PROBLEM YOU LITTLE CUNT!"
"YOU'RE MY FUCKING PROBLEM!!"
Jack slammed the door to his small bedroom, threw his bag on his desk and chucked himself onto his single bed, he looked up at the ceiling, wondering when his life and family got so fucked up.
A hour later
Jack grabbed his bag of his desk, quietly made his way down stairs, when he got to the bottom of the stairs he looked over the banister to see his mother in the living room painting her toe nails with a half empty bottle of vodka on the table. Jack slipped out of the opened front door and walked across the walk way and out of the building.
Jack got his phone out and made a call to a friend of his that could get him what he wanted, when Jack had finished his phone call he walked for nearly four minutes in till he came to the meeting spot where they had decided to meet. five minutes went by in till a older boy around the age of eighteen or nineteen walked up to Jack caring a blue plastic bag, handing it to Jack who in exchange put his hand in his grey baggy joggers and pulled out some money witch he handed to the boy. The older boy ruffled Jack's brown hair and gave him a quick kiss on the head and walked away from him. Jack opened the blue bag and looked in side to see a three litre bottle of cider. Jack closed the bag and walked to the abandoned gym, Jack kicked opened the gym door when he saw someone had locked it and walked in. set up his speakers, took out his bottle of cider and took a drink when Jack decided he had had enough for now he pressed play on his speakers and start to punch the old punch bag to the rhythm of the song, getting faster and faster as he let his anger and frustration out.
A hour later Jack sat on the window ledge looking out of the window, while drinking the nearly half empty bottle of cider. The bottle was nearly finished when his phone went off, Jack jumped down from the ledge went to his bag, took out his phone and saw that it was Grey, Jack pressed the silent button on his phone not ready do deal with his younger brother yet. Half an hour later Jack had finished his bottle of cider and decided to head home to face his mother and see what his brother wanted.
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