So, recently I've gotten the urge to start up this story again. I can't promise for how long or if I'll keep at it, since I now have a comic book business I'm running. But I do promise I'll try and add to this as much as I can. I've recently created a basic outline that choreographs everything I want to do for this fanfic (at least for the first KH game), so that should help. It also involved a bit of revision on this chapter to get what I wanted to do to work. See if you can spot the difference from the old version of this chapter.


Chapter Two: There's Big Trouble Brewin'

Disney Castle – Throne Room

On a far-off world, a small white duck was walking through the corridors of a ginormous white and blue castle. The duck wore a multi-blue shaded mage uniform, complete with a blue hat that's tip was spiraling inward. The duck walked passed the most curious site: a bunch of walking broomsticks, made even more curiouser by the fact that they had arms that carried a bucket of water in each hand.

The duck mage reached his destination: a pair of large doors that stood three stories high! The duck cleared his throat, and then performed a secret knock on one of the doors, opening a smaller portion of the door. The mage walked through and entered a large throne room that was big enough to hold 2 large high school gymnasiums. The duck proceeded across the room and spoke to address someone on the throne.

"Good morning, your majesty!" the duck spoke happily, bowing his head as he walked. "It's nice to see you this morn-"

But when the duck looked up, he saw that throne of the throne room was barren.

"WHAT?!" the duck bellowed in shock.

Suddenly, from behind the thorn a small yellow dog with droopy black ears, a scrawny tail, and a green collar too big for its throat appeared. The duck mage noticed that the royal dog had a letter in its mouth, and on the letter the king's royal seal. He took the letter from the dog, opened the envelope and carefully read through the letter. After reading it twice for good measure, the duck blinked and proceeded to sprint out of the throne room as fast as his little legs could carry him, screaming at the top of his lungs all the way.

After many twist and turns through the castle corridors, the duck made it out into the courtyard gardens. There were many hedges shaped like animals playing instruments encircling the courtyard, and in the middle, was a giant hedge in the shape of a castle. It was there the duck found who he was looking for: a large black dog wearing knight armor. The dog was laying on its back with its hands behind its head and its left leg crossed over its right. The dog was obviously enjoying a peaceful slumber.

"Wake up, Goofy!" screamed the duck, having reached his companion. "Wake Up! This is serious!"

The dog, whose name was apparently Goofy, continued to slumber away, snoring loudly and mumbling happy nothings as he slept. Infuriated, the duck raised hand and pointed his finger to the sky, letting out a load cry as his did. A small bolt of lighting fell and zapped the sleeping knight.

"Doh-wow!" screamed the electrified Goofy. Now awake but still a little bit groggy, the knight made eye-contact with his friend and greeted him. "Hey there, Donald. G'morning."

"We got a problem, Goofy!" Donald cut him off. He then looked around the courtyard, and leaned into his friend to speak in a lower tone, "But don't tell anyone…"

Goofy, now awake, looked confused. "Queen Minnie?" he asked.

"Not even the queen", Donald said, hands on his hips and shaking his head.

"Daisy?" said a still confused Goofy.

"NOOOOO!" Donald yelled, annoyed by his friend's ignorance. "It's top secret!"

"Uh, g'moring ladies," Goofy said, looking past his friend Donald and addressing someone behind the mage. Donald froze.

"What?"

The mage slowly turned and saw the two figures he didn't want to see right now. Standing under an an arch-like hedge was a female mouse with a pink dress with red trimmings. She had giant red bow tied behind her back and beautiful, golden royal crown on her head. Behind the mouse was a white female duck. She wore a sleeveless purple dress and a small, golden tiara on her head. The female duck was looking at the mage rather crossed, while the mouse simply smiled.

"Hahaha…" laughed Donald nervously.


Disney Castle – Library

In a large library within the confines of the castle, the Queen and her royal subjects read aloud the letter Donald had found.

Donald

Sorry to rush off without sayin' goodbye, but there's big trouble brewin'.

Not sure why, but the stars have been blinkin' out, one by one. And that means disaster can't be far behind. I hate to leave you all but I've gotta go check into it.

There's someone with a "key" - - the key to our survival. So I need you and Goofy to find him, and his fellowship. Got it? Don't worry, I have a feeling they'll all be together when you find them.

I've left further instructions for you in the gummi ship, along with a few gifts that you will need to give to the key-wielder and his fellowship.

We need that key or we're doomed! So go to Traverse Town and find Leon. He'll point you in the right direction.

P.S.

Would you apologize to Minnie for me?

Thanks, pal.

As soon as the Queen had finished the letter, everyone in the room was quite with confusion and concern. After a minute, Daisy was the first to speak.

"Oh dear!" she exclaimed. "What could this mean?"

Minnie was deep in thought. She was concerned for her king and troubled by this news. But the king's tone in the letter suggested that he knew what he was doing and that he was doing the right thing. Coming to an uneasy conclusion, she addressed her subjects.

"It means…" Minnie said, struggling to find the right way to put her answer. "We'll just have to trust the king."

Goofy brought a finger to his chin and spoke with concern, "Garsh, I sure hope he's alright."

"Your highness," Donald spoke up, saluting the queen. "Don't worry, we'll find this "key" and his fellowship, and give them the gifts they need to find the king."

The queen turned toward the mage. "Thank you, both of you."

"Daisy," said Donald as he motioned to Daisy. "can you take care of-"

"Of course," Daisy smiled in response. "You be careful now, both of you."

"We hope for your safe return," said Queen Minnie. "Please, help the king."

Donald placed his hand on his chest as salute to the queen. The Queen smiled at his determination. Donald looked to Daisy, who nodded approvingly. Then, to his surprise, Goofy appeared at Daisy's side and saluted him.

"You're coming too!" Donald yelled in annoyance. He grabbed the dog by the arm and proceeded to drag him out of the library to prepare for their mission.


Disney Castle – Gummi Hangar

Donald and Goofy had just finished preparing for their mission. As such, they were wearing new clothes, the purpose of which was to keep people from finding out they were from another world as they explored new worlds in search of the "key." Had to protect the world order, after all. Donald was now wearing a blue jacket and matching blue hat. Goofy wore baggy yellow pants, a green sweater with a black vest and a long yellow hat. Both animals' clothes were decorated with many pockets and zippers.

The duo was making their way down a long, spiral staircase, lit only by lighting in the shape like that of the head of their queen. They were discussing their mission as they walked. Finally, they reached the bottom of the stairs and walked through a long hallway into a large hangar.

The hanger functioned clockwork-style, with many colorful gears, springs and piping running the whole show. In the center of the hangar was also a large, red and yellow ship with white fins. The duo walked up to a large pipe and Donald began talking through it.

"Hello up there? Donald Duck to launch crew! Anytime you're ready."

Up in a control-tower box were two chipmunks who heard the mage. Both were wearing orange and yellow uniforms with the royal crest on the chest of the uniform. What differentiated the two chipmunks were that one had small front teeth and a small, black nose, while his brother had large front teeth and a large, red nose. The chipmunk with the black nose saluted the duck's order, while the chipmunk with the red nose ran over to the control console and pulled a lever. Two large, mechanical, gloved hands activated and maneuvered over to Donald and Goofy and picked them up. Unfortunately, they had done so that the duo was now upside down as they rode over to the ship. Donald was not amused by this.

As the duo buckled up into the ship, the yellow dog from before suddenly appeared in the hangar and jumped into the ship. He hadn't come alone. As the ship was getting ready to depart, Donald looked out the ship's starboard window and saw Queen Minnie and Daisy had come down to see them off. Daisy looked at Donald worryingly, obviously concerned for the mage's safety. Donald, touched by the female duck's worry, gave her a big smile and a thumb up to let her know everything was going to be ok.

The engine of the ship roared as two sliding doors opened in front of it. A large, bright arrow appeared to let them know they were clear for take-off.

"BLAST OFF!" Donald cried.

Suddenly, another pair of doors opened beneath the ship, causing it to fall straight through into the abyss with Donald and Goofy screaming at the top of their lungs. Thankfully, the fall dropped them straight on the outskirts or their world. The thrusted the rockets and blasted off on their journey.


So this is the revised chapter. I'll promise I'll upload chapter three as soon as I am done writing it.

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