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You Can Do Whaaat!?
Coral's POV
"No... No... This isn't right... I must be dreaming... Yes. Dreaming. That's it. Where did I fall asleep last. Ohhh... Someone pinch me." I murmured, pacing back and forth. I pinched myself.
Still here... Oh... What do I doooooooo?
"Take a chill pill, kid." Said the one with shaggy black hair. He didnt scare me near as much as the girl. He shook his wings out. They were black, like a raven's.
Oh my gosh... Other bird kids. Who have obviously been trained to fight. The little one bested me. Mmmmmmmm...
I have to admit. I panicked. My brain overloaded with thoughts. Terrified thoughts. Adrenaline pumped through me. My heart beat faster. My breaths came in quick short puffs. Without thinking, (actually it was more like thinking so many things at once that my thoughts were incoherent and jumbled) I mustered up all the energy I could, trying to focus that energy into my eyes. I closed them for half a second, and before any of them could even suspect anything, I flashed open my eyes lids and glared at the mean girl who answered the door. Horror and awe showed on all of their faces.
"Oh... That's... Look at all the colors... Red, green, purple, pink, blue, yellow..." The darker skinned girl murmured.
They were all mesmerized by the beauty. Except the girl I was staring down. At first she tried to stare back.
Bad idea.
Her eyes shut closed, and she clenched her fists, but the others didnt notice. I forced all that pent up energy onto her. No one else could feel it but me and her. At first she looked shocked, and her muscles tensed. Her eyes locked on mine for just a moment, and I could feel her pain. See it in her eyes.
So much power... I can destroy her... I could... I will...
I smiled wickedly.
. I can't. This power. I... It's too much... I won't... Be that person again...
I released her, trembling. I can't become that person again. The one I was before... Before...
The girls eyes flickered shut, and she crumpled, unconscious.
"MAX!" I heard one of them yell, but then the world turned blurry. Distantly, I felt myself begin to fall. I don't know whether I hit the ground or not.
Max's POV
It's all black. I can't move. Am I unconsious?
Yes. I think I am.
Just... Remember to breath. Remember to think. C'mon you dang heart! Beat faster! I need you to jump start me!
Remember to breath.
Remember to think.
Remember to... To what?
Breath. Got it.
Breath.
Remember to breath.
Remember to...
Remember...
To...
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