Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for the reviews you gave me! I really
appreciate it! As a treat for your reviews, here's Chapter 1 of "Emotions"!
Thanks again for the reviews! I love you guys! ~ Gives everyone a big kiss
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Couple of pointers on "Emotions" - Eriol has magic, but he won't be the reincarnation of Clow Reed whatsoever. He'll be just another teenage boy. Hey, give me a break! I don't want Tomoyo dating a guy that's like 100 years older than him okay! (note: I'm exaggerating with the 100 year old thingy) -They are all 19 in this fic. Making them older is much more complicating. Well, for me anyway.
Oh yeah, I forgot to put the Disclaimer on at the previous chapter, so here it is! ~ I don't own C.C.S. but this story belongs to me since I created it with my head ~
Answers on your reviews:
CherRYbLsSm8: you just have to wait for my next chapter to know if they'll meet again, k?
FinalYinYang: Can you picture Tomoyo hurting Eriol? Tomoyo's too nice to hurt anyone, right? And Eriol. well, he's too mysterious! As for the bed thing, you'll have to wait too, all right?
Well, here's Chapter 1! Please don't forget to R/R!
Emotions: New life
I looked around my surroundings. Yup, customers looking for clothes. "All right guys!" I said, not taking my eyes off the customers. "Zoe! You take care of the bride and the groom!" I commanded. "Yes ma'am!" she smiled at me. I giggled. "Chloe! Go take care of the little kids!" I said. "Ya got it babe!"
She replied, winking at me. "Mark!" I said. "Yes, oh beautiful boss of mine?" he said. I rolled my eyes. "You're just going to flirt with the grooms men, so go take care of the bridesmaids!" I commanded him. He pouted at me, but did as what he told. Yup, I had a bunch of weird friends. Zoe and Chloe are
Twins, but totally different. Zoe is the jokester of this business of ours whereas Chloe is our "Man" because she's a tomboy. Mark is the girly-girl in our group, since he's gay. I could depend on him if I needed someone to do my make-up for me. And me, well, I'm their "boss", since I brought all
Of us closer together. I walked over to the grooms' men and looked at all of them. "Well, who's first?" I asked. A guy with dark brown hair and dark brown eyes stepped forward. I started measuring him. First at the waist, then neck, then waist to ankle, then shoulder to waist, then shoulder to
Wrist. "What's your name?" I asked, still busy writing the measurements in a paper. "Well, I'd like to know yours first." He replied. I stopped what I was doing and looked at him, raising an eyebrow. "Are you serious?" I said in a flat voice. He smiled mysteriously at me. I gave him a disgusted
Look. "You must be kidding me." I said as I pushed him aside and started to measure a guy with auburn hair and blue-green eyes. "Why? Are you taken?" He asked behind me. I sighed in frustration and looked at him. "I may not be taken, but I'm not the type of girl to give in to a guy who's lusting for one." I
Replied. Some of the guys who were waiting to be measured laughed at the guy with brown hair. I heard one of them say, "He got told!" I measured everyone quickly after that and went to the counter, where Mark was. "I'm done measuring the idiots over there." I sighed. Mark stared at me. I
Looked at him, surprised. "What?" I asked, confusion in my eyes. Mark chuckled. "You REALLY have to get over that Hiiragizawa guy." He simply said. My jaw dropped. "First of all, I don't care about that 'Hiiragizawa' guy. I hate him, and I'm over him. Second of all, how can you stand a guy
That can stoop so low? Third of all, NEVER BRING UP THE TOPIC OF HIIRAGIZAWA AGAIN!" I glared at Mark. He smiled sweetly at me and gave me a hug. "I know you're still hurt. I mean, come on! If I wasn't your best- friend, I would've totally missed the feelings you've bottled up inside
You. There's this old saying I know. They say, 'it's okay to remember the past. But don't let the past make you go crazy.'" He pulled away and smiled. "Besides, the guy that flirted with you is so cute." I sighed and giggled and stared at the guy with the brown hair, who was fighting off the
Guys that are still taunting him because he got told by a girl. I smiled. "You're right." I said, turning to him. "I hate you for being right. I hate you for knowing that the guy was cute, and I mostly hate you because you know me too well!" I laughed, punching him lightly. He pretended to be hurt.
"Ouch! My beautiful girlfriend hurt my feelings!" We burst out laughing, sending everyone around us to look at us. We stopped, blushing like mad. Chloe crept up to us. "If you guys don't get back to work and get your act together, we'll lose this one like the time when Mark scared off those guys
Because he made kissing noises at them!" She hissed. I tried hard not to laugh and nodded. Mark glared at Chloe however. "Just because you can't get a girlfriend doesn't mean you have to bring everyone else down with you!" he replied. Then we split up. I walked back to the guy with
Brown Eyes, whom the other guys were still taunting. "Hey." I replied. He looked at me, startled that I didn't scold him. "Sorry for being so harsh on you." I said slowly, not meeting his gaze. "It's just that I'm too stressed. That's all. No harm done?" He smiled at me. "It's okay. So, how about
Dinner tonight?" I chuckled, then turned Serious. "No." I replied and left him, a goofy grin pasted on his face. "Mark can have you." I muttered to myself as I took my sketchbook and went to the bride and groom to show which clothing they like.
Done! YAY! I'm so happy! Anyway, please R/R! I know, everything's OOC, but that's how I'm making this interesting. And I'm sorry that Sakura and them aren't here yet, but I promise, they will be in the next chapter. Well, thanks again everyone and I hope you enjoyed this chapter! See ya!
Couple of pointers on "Emotions" - Eriol has magic, but he won't be the reincarnation of Clow Reed whatsoever. He'll be just another teenage boy. Hey, give me a break! I don't want Tomoyo dating a guy that's like 100 years older than him okay! (note: I'm exaggerating with the 100 year old thingy) -They are all 19 in this fic. Making them older is much more complicating. Well, for me anyway.
Oh yeah, I forgot to put the Disclaimer on at the previous chapter, so here it is! ~ I don't own C.C.S. but this story belongs to me since I created it with my head ~
Answers on your reviews:
CherRYbLsSm8: you just have to wait for my next chapter to know if they'll meet again, k?
FinalYinYang: Can you picture Tomoyo hurting Eriol? Tomoyo's too nice to hurt anyone, right? And Eriol. well, he's too mysterious! As for the bed thing, you'll have to wait too, all right?
Well, here's Chapter 1! Please don't forget to R/R!
Emotions: New life
I looked around my surroundings. Yup, customers looking for clothes. "All right guys!" I said, not taking my eyes off the customers. "Zoe! You take care of the bride and the groom!" I commanded. "Yes ma'am!" she smiled at me. I giggled. "Chloe! Go take care of the little kids!" I said. "Ya got it babe!"
She replied, winking at me. "Mark!" I said. "Yes, oh beautiful boss of mine?" he said. I rolled my eyes. "You're just going to flirt with the grooms men, so go take care of the bridesmaids!" I commanded him. He pouted at me, but did as what he told. Yup, I had a bunch of weird friends. Zoe and Chloe are
Twins, but totally different. Zoe is the jokester of this business of ours whereas Chloe is our "Man" because she's a tomboy. Mark is the girly-girl in our group, since he's gay. I could depend on him if I needed someone to do my make-up for me. And me, well, I'm their "boss", since I brought all
Of us closer together. I walked over to the grooms' men and looked at all of them. "Well, who's first?" I asked. A guy with dark brown hair and dark brown eyes stepped forward. I started measuring him. First at the waist, then neck, then waist to ankle, then shoulder to waist, then shoulder to
Wrist. "What's your name?" I asked, still busy writing the measurements in a paper. "Well, I'd like to know yours first." He replied. I stopped what I was doing and looked at him, raising an eyebrow. "Are you serious?" I said in a flat voice. He smiled mysteriously at me. I gave him a disgusted
Look. "You must be kidding me." I said as I pushed him aside and started to measure a guy with auburn hair and blue-green eyes. "Why? Are you taken?" He asked behind me. I sighed in frustration and looked at him. "I may not be taken, but I'm not the type of girl to give in to a guy who's lusting for one." I
Replied. Some of the guys who were waiting to be measured laughed at the guy with brown hair. I heard one of them say, "He got told!" I measured everyone quickly after that and went to the counter, where Mark was. "I'm done measuring the idiots over there." I sighed. Mark stared at me. I
Looked at him, surprised. "What?" I asked, confusion in my eyes. Mark chuckled. "You REALLY have to get over that Hiiragizawa guy." He simply said. My jaw dropped. "First of all, I don't care about that 'Hiiragizawa' guy. I hate him, and I'm over him. Second of all, how can you stand a guy
That can stoop so low? Third of all, NEVER BRING UP THE TOPIC OF HIIRAGIZAWA AGAIN!" I glared at Mark. He smiled sweetly at me and gave me a hug. "I know you're still hurt. I mean, come on! If I wasn't your best- friend, I would've totally missed the feelings you've bottled up inside
You. There's this old saying I know. They say, 'it's okay to remember the past. But don't let the past make you go crazy.'" He pulled away and smiled. "Besides, the guy that flirted with you is so cute." I sighed and giggled and stared at the guy with the brown hair, who was fighting off the
Guys that are still taunting him because he got told by a girl. I smiled. "You're right." I said, turning to him. "I hate you for being right. I hate you for knowing that the guy was cute, and I mostly hate you because you know me too well!" I laughed, punching him lightly. He pretended to be hurt.
"Ouch! My beautiful girlfriend hurt my feelings!" We burst out laughing, sending everyone around us to look at us. We stopped, blushing like mad. Chloe crept up to us. "If you guys don't get back to work and get your act together, we'll lose this one like the time when Mark scared off those guys
Because he made kissing noises at them!" She hissed. I tried hard not to laugh and nodded. Mark glared at Chloe however. "Just because you can't get a girlfriend doesn't mean you have to bring everyone else down with you!" he replied. Then we split up. I walked back to the guy with
Brown Eyes, whom the other guys were still taunting. "Hey." I replied. He looked at me, startled that I didn't scold him. "Sorry for being so harsh on you." I said slowly, not meeting his gaze. "It's just that I'm too stressed. That's all. No harm done?" He smiled at me. "It's okay. So, how about
Dinner tonight?" I chuckled, then turned Serious. "No." I replied and left him, a goofy grin pasted on his face. "Mark can have you." I muttered to myself as I took my sketchbook and went to the bride and groom to show which clothing they like.
Done! YAY! I'm so happy! Anyway, please R/R! I know, everything's OOC, but that's how I'm making this interesting. And I'm sorry that Sakura and them aren't here yet, but I promise, they will be in the next chapter. Well, thanks again everyone and I hope you enjoyed this chapter! See ya!