Okay, I'm writing this chapter almost immediately after I have posted the first so I can't exactly say "thank you for all the reviews and ratings yada yada" but I hope my story at least gets more than the one view it has. Please review if you are reading this, an idea of how good it is helps. Sorry for the crappiness of the last chapter as well as this one but I sorta want to get the first few intro chapters done. These chapters will deal with what happens to Naruto as he changes, who else had their soul sent back and why it happened. Sorta just gave a spoiler there as well. After that I can get on to, well not realy any arc but the beginning of the actual story and not the intro. Just to clarify the fact for anyone who wonders, although this is a time travel fic Naruto will not destroy everything that caused him problems before. Okay maybe he will. But think of it this way. A person is a light bulb. They attract small moths, but occasionally a massive on which blocks a chunk of light. If the light is brighter then there's a bigger chance of bigger moths and that makes more light get blocked. Naruto will face stronger enemies which would've been unknown before or he wouldn't have met until later, and having all this power shoved into his body, along with the fact that he will have other changes going on because of his later actions means that hes still gonna get hell as a ninja, just this time pre-timeskip hell isn't playing with its food.
Disclaimer: I offered the maker of Naruto six jammy dodgers and an Oreo for the rights. He declined, this guy means business.(AKA I don't own Naruto :'( )
Chapter two: A new stranger
Naruto ran down the street, thoroughly freaked. He could've sworn the old man had died, then all of a sudden he woke up and the man was alive. No, he couldn't of woken up, he couldn't have been dreaming, it felt so real.
Also he was struggling to control his body, as if he was used to be controlling something bigger, stronger, faster. He could see blue pulses bursting out of his body, throwing him off course, which he knew was chakra from the morning lesson. He didn't pay attention to any of this in great detail though. In truth he was scared. Images kept flashing through his mind. They were amazing, so amazing, but they hurt so much. Why him?
He eventually arrived in a clearing part way through a small forest. As he came to a stop another blue pulse suddenly burst out of him, but no more after.
"Naruto!"
He spun around to see a stranger walk into the clearing. He was tall, extremely tall. He was at least 6"1 but didn't appear to be more than fourteen at most. (AN: I know in real life this is just tall as well but remember if you have read the files the tallest people seem to just make 6 foot or something, with Jiraiya being the tallest along with Kisame and Jiraiya is on 6"2.) He was slim, just the right build to be called lanky. He had grey, blue eyes that seemed to be endlessly deep and dark, like a repentant mass murderers, yet extremely bright like a cheery person. His black hair had a long fringe that was swept to the side slightly covering one eye and reaching his cheek. The rest was spiked up in large spikes between just a centimetre and two inches, on average just between that. Some of the spikes were also curved and thing almost going back to his head. He was wearing a black trench coat with a few blue designs that looked like real lightning. The coat reached his mid calf and it had many pockets. He also wore a grey T-shirt underneath and had a necklace with a double edged sword (sorry, another AN: When I say double edged I mean a sword with an edge one each sides of the blade, when I say double bladed I mean one with a blade on each end of the handle, and think the tsurugi if it was double edged instead of one sharp edge. The reason this description is so long is he is the unusual nin as well as the oc in the description.) that was done in great detail. He had black sneakers with white toe-caps and laces. He seemed to have amounts of chakra at least twice that of a kage, but control so terrible it was leaking out enough so constantly that there was a small breeze at his feet. (AN Before you complain about him seeming stronger than Naruto the chakra breeze at his feet isn't a secret technique or anything, this oc, although powerful and has lots of chakra, has the shittiest control in the whole thing at this point.) Naruto didn't feel scared though, this strange person seemed to be in a lot of the last visions with no ill intent directed at Naruto.
"What do you want, you don't look like you wanna hurt me but I met a lot of bad misters a few weeks back who tried to hurt me again." The stranger was instantly by Naruto's side checking him over for harm. Naruto jumped a little but wasn't too scared, the old man had done this a few times over the past few years when Naruto didn't look good.
"I'm OK, you're acting like the old man mister." The 'teen' laughed at the pout Naruto wore and then started to speak. "Yeah, yeah. Heh. Actually I might be an old man, probably still young though. Bloody demon did a number on me. Never mind that. I'm sorry Naruto, but tonight is gonna hurt. It's gonna hurt like a bitch but you gotta deal with it ok. Any questions?"
"Yeah, what's a 'bitch'?" The young Naruto had a questioning look on his face while the teen just sweat-dropped. Then the teen got up, started walking and gestured for Naruto to follow.
" This is a huge secret Naruto, like in those movies they let you watch at the cinema with the people in love can't tell others or it will be bad." In truth Naruto was able to go into the cinema, but if he went in the day all the audience would riot unless it was a movie they believed the 'demon' would hate under the thought he had been forced in. In return though the cinema owners let Naruto watch one movie at night each week for free with food because they understood that he was not the thing inside him. Naruto merely nodded.
"Well this is like that and if anyone, even the hokage, finds out it will be bad. First off I will tell you this. I'm not from anywhere anyone you know has heard of. I can travel through time, like going to what hasn't happened or has already to be there. I met the future you. You were a very strong ninja, the village was destroyed and the hokage beaten but you saved everyone and beat the baddy. We were in a war with a really old and strong person who wanted to rule the world and only you, me and your friends could stop him." Naruto's face seemed to glow like the sun at the mention of him having friends.
"We were losing at first, but eventually we started to win. When both armies where in the battle that would destroy one side there was a super team selected to go after the strongest bad guy. It was me, you, the girl you loved, your best friend who originally left the village and a few others, but it turned out he had secretly gotten a control seal on everyone except your love, you and me so it was very hard, we saved everyone else by knocking them out but suddenly he got your love and killed her, then when you cried he got you. With all my power" the teen suddenly grunted and his body flickered and black flames ran over his body, but vanished in an instant.
"As I was saying, I used all my power to sent your spirit back to the you, the you that you are now, and it has started merging with yours. In a few hours it will fully merge and you will be super strong. This time we will do everything but it will be easier. By time the war happens we will be stronger. We will win Naruto."
Naruto looked a little shocked, but seemed to understand.
'Thank Kami I used language a kid would understand, it would be annoying to do the clever yet short version then do this after'
By now they had stopped in another clearing.
"Wow super-mister, you gotta be strong the make that chakra do swirly wind around your feet."
"Eerm. To be honest that is because I have more chakra than the hokage, but anyone with at least kage amount can do it, the only reason it is happening is because I am rubbish with controlling it." This just increased the stars in Naruto's eyes even more, the thought that someone that was only a teen looked this strong when he was bad with his control.
A clap broke Naruto out of his daze.
" Alright Naruto you run on home and I will be at your house in about half an hour"
Naruto ran off towards his home with a smile on his face. He didn't however see the fact that Tameko fall to his knees clutching his chest, his irises flickering grey with his eyes having black pigment around them and black flames running up and down his body.
