Secret Admirer
Chapter 2
Hi everyone I'm shayxel's little sister and for these little stories I hope someone enjoys this please review and like always I unfortunately don't own kingdom hearts or the characters ok now onto the story!
Part two
Namine kept running down the hallway until she finally reached her room. Number Thirteen, that's all she new about him was that they called him Number Thirteen. She thought to herself I wonder if that's his real name, as she was thinking this she heard a knock on her door. 'I wonder who that could be at this time of night' looks at her clock that reads 1:00 am goes to open door "umm hello?" sees hooded figure from before "uh e-excuse me but w-what are you doing here Number Thirteen?" The boy just simply replied "Look can I just come in or not?" "Uh sure come in, what is it you wanted?" The boy looked up from the floor and for the first time he actually looked at her (since earlier it was dark and he couldn't see very well with almost no light around). He saw her soft, golden hair that rested only on one of her shoulders. He saw how deep a shade of blue her eyes were; he noticed how pale her skin was almost as if she had never seen daylight. Last of all he noticed the pure white dress that she was wearing. After a while he realized that he had been staring at her for some time and saw that she was giving him this kind of freaked out look, "Sorry its just that I didn't get a very good look at you earlier and um… yeah." The girl giggled quietly at him and he felt his face get a little warm though he didn't know why. "So Number Thirteen what is it you wanted, you didn't answer me when I asked a couple of minutes ago." "Well it's just that I saw you drop this and I thought you would want it back as soon as possible." (Holds out one of her colored pencils in his gloved hand) "Thanks." She replies softly and takes the pencil out of his hand. (Her hand gently brushes against his as she takes the pencil from and it sends shivers down her spine)
That was weird both of them thought at the same time."Thank you again, you didn't have to do this you know." "I know but they seem so important to you I just thought you'd want it back." He says while he scratches the back of his head nervously and thinking to himself man what's wrong with me usually I'm not nervous about anything but whenever I'm with this girl I feel like a complete idiot sigh "Is something wrong?" she asked quietly. "Uh yeah I was just thinking about something, well see ya" waves bye to her "uh ok…will I ever see you again?" she asked hopeful. Of course he won't you're just a little memory witch no one ever comes to see you cause they want to they usually have to, Namine thinks to herself. "Maybe, I can't give you a definite answer." He replies in a tone that was different from the usual semi-pleasant one he was using earlier and leaves before she could say anything else. Well that was a little weird she thought to herself after he had left oh I forgot to ask if his name is actually Number Thirteen or if he has a different name and that's just what they call him…I really do need to get some more sleep. So she closed the door and the minute she got back into her bed she fell soundly asleep.
a/n hey again if anyone is actually reading this story thank you and please review.
Also I'm thinking about doing the next chapter in first person and from "Number Thirteen's" cough cough point of view so please tell me what you think about that idea. I'm also sorry that the chapters are so short I'll try to get them a little longer.