Authors note-

.Oh my god. I seriously did not expect that many review, favorites, and follows in one day. I didn't think this story was even good! Thank you all SO much.

You should probably read this…

FrostFan, I should warn you, that won't be in the story for some time! It will be here but there are so many ideas floating around in my mind! But if you wanna see a fic with reactions to the drowning go to the story Snowflakes by Hatsu Yukiya. I can't remember which chapter but its there!

Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye, I actually never thought of that. SURE, why not? Sounds like a good idea. But it wont be here for awhile.

Karlina101, Sorry you didn't like that part. I thought Tooth's reaction was in character but I'll try not to include to much cooing and awing if it makes the readers happy!

Lord Jashin Follower, I burst out laughing when I saw this. So glad you like it!

owlgirl94, I will give you more! Whether you like it or not!

Virginia, Yes they will, I already planned on adding that! You are going to be waiting a LONG time for the reactions. So, as I said to FrostFan, Snowflakes had the reactions if you don't want to wait. I plan on making him believe until he drowns. You will find out why soon! I am going to make the chapters longer. But I wanted to see how many people really liked it. Live you guys hanging!

I really should warn you guys. I am a really, REALLY organized person. The memories are going to be in order and you will be waiting a long time for tings like the reactions and his sisters death. I will take suggestions if I like them but you have to include age. I had him drown at age 15 so that's your limit for human life. No limit to his immortal life! But seriously I am an organized person so don't expect your suggestions to be in the story the next day. I will tell you if I will use them though!


Chapter 2

Once Upon a December

(December 9, 1704)

"Where are you Jack?" Mary called smiling, tip toeing through the snow "Come out, come out wherever you are!"

There was giggle and she looked up to see bright brown eyes staring down at her from the hill.

"I see you!" She called laughing as his high pitched laugh floated down from the snow covered hill.

Jack stood up and stuck his tongue out at her. He turned to run away only to slip on some ice. He began tumbling down the hill

North winced and said in a flat tone, "You going to have bruise in morning."

Bunny laughed.

"Oh shut up," Jack said shoving Bunny playfully

He landed in front of Mary. He looked up at her, his eyes wide. She stared back, eyes wide in shock. He looked down at his snow covered legs before looking back at his mother and bursting out laughing. He feel back onto the snow and began making a snow angel.

"Come on mama!" He reached a small hand up towards her "Make a snow angel!"

Mary laughed before getting on the ground next to Jack and joining him.

"You are so sweet!" Tooth exclaimed floating a bit above the couch.

Jack blushed as North and Bunny laughed. Sandy was making 'ha, ha, ha' his head.

"Another one!" Tooth said pointing at the screen

It seemed to be the same day as Jack and Mary came into the cottage, faces flushed from laughing and the cold. The cottage consisted of two rooms total. Mary and Richards room and the living room/dining room/ kitchen/Jacks room. Three rooms if you count the outhouse. They stopped as a nice smell hit their noses. They looked up from taking off their coats, gloves, and scarf's to see four peaches and a loaf of warm bread-WARM BREAD-on the dining room table.

"Surprise!" Yelled two voices as Richard jumped from behind the couch and a black haired boy the same age as Jack jumped from under Jacks bed.

"Who's that?" Bunny asked. They all looked at Jack to see him smiling happily if not a bit sad.

"Edmond Monroe," He said still smiling "The only kid my age who was my friend. And the only person who could get into more trouble then me."

They looked skeptical but turned their attention back to the screen.

"Eddy!" Jack yelled surprised as Edmond attacked him with a hug

"Happy birthday!" Eddy yelled before letting go and holding out a newspaper wrapped present.

"Thanks!" Jack said smiling happily. He took the present and began unwrapping it. When the newspaper came off out fell a necklace. The necklace was made of thick, black string. Connected to it was a small, carved, wooden snowflake.

Jack looked at Eddy stunned.

Eddy looked down and kicked his toe on the ground. "I know how much you love winter so I decided to make a snowflake. If you don't like-"

Jack threw his arms around Eddy's neck, surprising him "I LOVE it! I'm never going to take it off!"

"Do you still have it?" North asked

Jack nodded and took the same wooden snowflake on the screen from under his hoodie.

"Never knew why I had it before," He said smiling softly at it before tucking it back in.

Jack stepped back and put the necklace around his neck ginning madly. Eddy smiled softly at him as he went on showing his parents.

"Now!" Richard said clapping his hands, "Time for birthday dinner!"

"Yes!" Jack and Eddy said at the same time. They ran o sit at the little table soon followed by Mary and Richard.

Richard cut the bread into four even pieces. He put a piece of bread on each plate before handing out the peaches.

Richard got the candle in the center of the table and put it on Jacks plate.

"Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear jack! Happy birthday to you!" They sand. Jack smiled as he blew out the candle. The last thing they saw was Jack happily taking a bit into his warm bread.


Authors note-

Good, bad? I tried to make this a bit longer. But I failed. There will be longer chapters, don't worry. Its just really late. Okay so next chapter is about Easter! YAY! But I have a question for you all. Jack will be getting a pet. Should Bunny be the one to give it to him or he find it when looking for eggs? There is a poll on my account but you can answer in the reviews or PM me.

I have to admit to something. As I was writing the part with Eddy my first thought was 'They would SO going to make a cute couple.' IM SORRY. My brain thinks the weirdest things. Don't worry they wont be paired together-unless you want them to be- What? I didn't say anything. Nope nothing at all.