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Chapter 2
I set out in the morning knowing that finding friends would be hard. I looked around the park. On a bench sat a nice enough looking girl about my age reading a magazine. She had long, blond hair with red and black highlights. She also had many piercings which I didn't think much of. She was dressed in dark clothes. I sat down next to her. I stared at her trying to figure out how to introduce myself.
"Hey." she said glancing at me. She had shocking blackI felt relieved. She probably wanted to be friends to.
"Hi my name is Winter." She didn't respond.
"What's your name?" I prodded.
"Who cares, get out of my business." I felt deflated. I got up and headed toward a tree. I want to quit. I thought inwardly. But a small voice in my head answered. No that was only one bratty girl. There's plenty of other nice people. Don't let her stop you. I sighed. I knew that voice was right. Suddenly I ran into someone. I look up. I saw a boy about my age with bronze-gold shaggy hair, tannish olive skin and deep emerald eyes rimmed with dark long eyelashes.
"I'm so sorry! Are you ok?" He exclaimed. He sounded genuinely concerned.
"I'm fine." I said breathlessly.
"Way to go Jaxen." Snickered a female voice. I look up from Jaxens eyes and saw a beautiful girl. She had long wavy hair the could have been spun from pure gold, beautiful red rosebud lips, olive skin, chocolate milk eyes and a curvy, tall, lanky figure.
"Oh shush Isabelle." He said exasperated with a half smile on his face.
"What's your name?" He asked.
"Winter."
"Winter." He repeated.
"Hold out your hand." Isabelle said strolling over. I obliged and she scrawled some numbers on my hand. "Call me sometime." She said. I smiled a smile that reached up to my eyes. And I knew right then that I had found a beautiful friendship.
When I got home after walking around the park with Isabelle and Jaxen, I told my dad about them. He breathed a sigh of relief.
"Good. Now I can tell you everything from start to finish."
"Ok." I said slowly, unsure.
"Ok here is a few things you should know first: have you ever wondered what your mother and my name is?"
"Ya I suppose but I guess it never occurred to me to ask."
"You mothers name is-"
"Wait,-I interrupt- don't you mean was?" He half smiled.
"I know what I said. Your mothers name is Beatrice or Tris Prior. I am Tobias or Four Eaton."
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Love, Chameleon