Chapter 2 in now up hope you enjoy it
He ran through the forest, he was scared because the forest was really big. Jinx was not looking where he was going a fell in the river. He cried out of help as the river pulled him down the stream, before pushing him under. Jinx heard a splash come from behind him before something grabbed him by the scruff of the neck. Once out of the water he looked behind him to see a cat
"Are you ok?" The cat asked and Jinx nodded "What's your name?"
Jinx thought about what he was going to say, he didn't want to say his kittypet name. He remembered what his mum had said about his dad.
"My name is Wolf" Jinx said
"Where is your family?" The she cat asked
"They are gone" Wolf said
"My name is Holly" Holly said "I guess I could look after you"
Holly picked Wolf up and took him to the barn where she and a few other cats lived. Holly had yellow fur, she had recently lost her litter and when she found out that wolf didn't have a family she took pity on him and decided to look after him like her own.
6 moons later (wolf is 7 moons old)
Wolf was out hunting; Holly had taught him when he was younger how to hunt. He was stoking a mouse when all of a sudden he heard a sound and looked up to see a cat in the distance. He forgot all about the mouse, slowly and quietly he walked up to the where he saw the cat.
In ThunderClan (a few minutes before)
"Skypaw, you are going to go hunt by you self today" Shadetail said
"Ok" Skypaw said before walking out of the camp
Skypaw's brother decided to come with her to keep he out of trouble. They went near the river that marked the border of ThunderClan.
"Brother you should go back to camp" Skypaw said
"I'm going to keep you safe" Swiftpaw said
"Brother you have your own training and I don't need you to protect me" Skypaw growled
"Fine" Swiftpaw said in anger
Skypaw saw a mouse and began stoking it, before she caught the mouse and looked up to see a cat looking at her. She did not feel this cat as a threat but she did not know why. This cat was not a ThunderClan cat. She crossed the river and walked up to the cat before stopping.
"Who are you?" Skypaw asked growling
"You tell me first" Wolf growled
"Fine, I am Skypaw, apprentice to Shadetail" Skypaw said
"I am Wolf, I am a loner who lives at the barn" Wolf said
Skypaw did not feel threatened by wolf and wolf did not feel threatened by Skypaw. Wolf looked behind Skypaw to see a white cat run towards them. Before wolf knew what was happening this white cat had pinned him to the floor
"Brother, leave him alone" Skypaw shouted pushing Swiftpaw off of wolf
"He's a loner, they don't belong here" Swiftpaw hissed standing in front of Skypaw
"I was not even in your territory" Wolf growled before walking off
Swiftpaw turned round to face his sister "What were you thinking?" Swiftpaw asked
"He was not going to harm me" Skypaw said
"They can't be trusted" Swiftpaw said "Your luck I'm not going to tell dad or mum about this"
Skypaw walked back to camp annoyed with her brother. How dare he tell her that wolf could not be trusted; she was going to do what she could to meet Wolf again. Over the 3 moons Skypaw would sneak out of camp to go see Wolf. She and Wolf became good friends and had grown to care for each other.
In Thunderclan (Skypaw and Swiftpaw's warrior ceremony)
Skystar had called all of ThunderClan for a meeting; He stood proud as he called his kits names
"I Skystar, leader of ThunderClan call upon my warrior ancestors to look down upon this apprentice. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as a warrior their turn" Skystar said "Skypaw, Swiftpaw do you promise to uphold the warrior code and defend this clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do" Skypaw said
"I do" Swiftpaw said
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name Skypaw from this moment you will be known as Skysong. Swiftpaw from this moment you will be known as Swifttail" Skystar said "And thunderclan welcome you as a full warrior"
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