IM BACK MY PEEPS! Ya this is my 2nd chapter to Who says vampires don't have feelings?

Unknown POV:

I remember her when we would sit under the Oak tree on a hill her hair and eyes made her the most beautiful vampire ever. Now because of my stupid parents I'm another city away from her, my most loved queen. Gone. Um I'm so ticked off, I'm away from the only other vampire I know and she probably already has a BF. How is he so better than me? I think he should be here and I should be-ohmygod I can do that! My queen will return to me and all thanks to that one kid or I guess almost adult. Marceline here I come, I'm coming home.

Back in Ooo:

" WOOH dang Finn im so glad we are doing this." "WOOT me too" as they both slide down the ice kingdom on a oversized turtle shell. "This is the best moment of my life!" they trip on an ice bump and land on each other. Finn helps up Marceline "THAT WAS MATHEMATICAL!" "ima go tell Jake!" "wait Finn" Marceline said grabbing Finn's arm, she blushed. "Yeah Marcy?" she started to think about him dying and started to think 'should I ask him?' 'yeah why not.' "Marcy?" "oh yeah umm wanna be um a vampire so I can have someone to live with and love with?" "MATHEMATICAL LEMME TELL JAKE!" "wait Finn I just want YOU to make your own decisions because Jake's not going to be here with you forever." "Oh, well maybe in Glob wor" The Queen cut him off "please Finn don't say Glob World, just please I don't want to lose you." "I'm 20 I'll live for a while" "For a while Finn, not forever, for a while." "Just think about it and call me when you have an answer, because until then we're just friends." "Radical Marcy… Just radical" our hero said as he slowly walked to his house and Marceline flew to hers.

Marceline's POV:

Did I just ruin my chances with Finn? I hope not he's Fish-Flapping-Tastic! I think I may have, but all I ever wanted to do was to have someone to live and love forever. I really hope I didn't, I think I'm going to Finn's Tree-fort now. I think I'm going to do what I should have done a long time ago. This time for good.

Finn's POV:

Ugh that stunk, I wish that didn't happen, she always messes with me though! Gosh I hate it when she does cuz then I can't take her seriously or anything! She's right about staying friends though, but I still love her and she is a radical dame who likes to play games. This is emotionally exhausting, I think I'm going to go slay an iron golem now.