A/N:Thank you so much reviewers. It's only 4 but who cares I never thought that I would get reviews at all. I'm new at this so i have no idea how to PM. I'm going to stick with answering stuff in author notes. And for anybody who doesn't understand the prologue her dad opened the door and then went back to his room ran in when she screamed then attacked her and her mom and ran. I know it is confusing but I didn't realize this untill i read it. Now here is chapter 1!
Chapter 1
6 YEARS LATER
The leaves in the trees were rustling. Branches were shaking. Mishah was running through the trees looking for a mouse or rabbit. Then she stopped dead in her tracks. She heard the shrieking of cats in the distance. She ran towards that noise, her pocket knife out. By the time she got there cats were pouring into a clearing, other cats waiting to meet them. One of them jumped on a ginger tom. He was about to bite the gingers neck. She leaped down from the trees and cut into the attackers side with her knife. She talked in cat. '' Leave or I'll kill you!'' She stuck the knife up to him. '' F-f-ff-f-fine,'' He stuttered. ''Good,'' She said. He ran off screaming '' RETREAT!'' All the cats struggled away from their attackers and ran. That is when she realized all the cats were staring at her, even the ginger. '' W-w-w-w-w-w-what are you doing i-i-i-i-i-in our c-camp?'' The ginger stuttered. '' Saving your tail,'' She said as if it was obvious. '' You speak cat?'' A pale ginger she-cat asked. '' Yeah, or I wouldn't be talking to you,'' Mishah said. '' Thank you for saving my life,'' The ginger tom said.''Your coat is like a flame in the sun,'' Mishah said. '' Thus my nane, Firestar, leader of Thunderclan,'' he continued '' The cat that attacked me was Tigerstar,leader of Shadowclan.'' He spat out the name Tigerstar. '' I'm guessing you have a grudge against their leader. '' Yes, but that is none of your concern. Mishah sat down. '' I would like to know, would you please tell me.'' She asked sweetly. '' Let me talk to my deputy about it,'' He said. Him and a fluffy white tom walked away into a cave with lichen growing over it. They came out about 5 minutes later. '' We have decided to tell you about him and his story,'' Firestar said. '' I came to the forest a kittypet,'' He said. '' A kittypet is a cat with an owner!'' A long-haired white cat with blue eyes said. Firestar continued '' Well he wanted to be leader of the clan, so he killed our previous leader, Bluestar's, deputy, Redtail expecting to be made deputy himself.'' Mishah gasped astonished. '' Of his own clan!'' '' Yes, when his apprentice saw him murder Redtail, he attempted to turn the clan against him,'' He continued '' when my friend Graystripe and I were apprentices, we brought him to a cat named Barley.'' ''Barley took him in and now he lives at Barley's farm,'' He said. '' Lionheart became deputy, but died in a fight with Shadowclan,'' he continued '' He finally achieved his goal but he wanted more power.'' He faltered here.A dark gray crippled she-cat came up. '' It's ok Firestar,'' she cooed. Mishah gasped wide eyed. '' W-w-w-w-w-w-what happened to you?'' She stuttered. '' Tigerstar made a trap by the Thunderpath for Bluestar but I got caught in it!'' she spat. '' I was ran over by a monster and now I'm crippled because of that piece of fox-dung, I'll never be a warrior but I love being a medicine cat,'' She said proudly. Firestar started up again, '' One day he lead a group of rouges to the camp and tried to kill Bluestar but I stopped him and Bluestar sent him into exile.'' '' The next day she made me deputy and Tigerstar went to Shadowclan to become leader,'' He explained. '' Tigerstar sent a dog pack after Thunderclan to get revenge,'' He spat out furiously. '' Bluestar saved me by pushing the lead dog in the gorge and she fell in with him!'' He exclaimed. ''That's all,'' He said. Mishah sat guiltly, thinking how she could of easily stapped him in the throat. '' What is your name?'' Firestar asked her. '' I don't remember,'' She said. This was true, she didn't remember, she suppressed those memories. '' Well you need one, would you like to join Thunderclan?'' He asked. '' I very much would,'' She said. He jumed up on to a rock over the cave. '' This she-twoleg has wished to join this clan, from this moment on untill you earn your warrior name you will be known as Dawnpaw, in honor of your milky dawn fur!'' He declared.
'' Your mentor will be Sandstorm!'' The pale ginger she-cat walked up and whisper in her ear
'' Were supposed to touch noses.'' They touched nose and Dawnpaw rubbe the wet off her nose. '' Dawnpaw, Dawnpaw, Dawnpaw, Dawnpaw!'' The clan cheered her name. '' Sandstorm, there is no need to teach her to fight or hunt, just the warrior code,'' Said Firestar. '' Ok,'' She said.
'' Come, Dawnpaw, it is time to train.
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