(thanks to who reviewed my first story!!! thanks to Abie05 and Twilight Goddess Sage! thanks! you two lightened up my day! please keep review!
and Twilight, thanks for the request. maybe I'll write for story 3! thanks for ur patience!)
Story 2
Title: Don't underestimate Ren
Main Cast: Tao Ren
Genre: General/ Humor (Rated for violence. XD)
Na-chan: don't own. Enjoy!
November, 23rd 1991, China
At one of the most famous elementary school at China, break time.
When the bell rang, all of the students ran out from their boring class. Include 5 years old boy, Tao Ren. He went out from the class alone, without anyone. He was walking, not running like the others. He was silent, not laughing or smiling like the others. Instead of look forward, he looked at the floor while walking, toward the canteen.
Suddenly, he bumped into a fat kid that higher than him.
"Aah… Ren." that kid said mockingly.
Ren looked upward. (na-chan: Because he is short! Duh!) He stared coldly. That fat kid was such a troublemaker in the school and he never liked Ren at the first time. He always annoyed Ren whenever and wherever they met. He named Zin Chen.
"Look! Our little Ren is mad! Aww… I'm scared!" he said again when he looked at Ren's stare.
"You are in my way. Move." Ren commanded coldly. Zin snorted.
"You got guts, Tao!" Zin pulled Ren's shoulders rudely, that made Ren fell on the floor.
Ren always ignored all that Zin did to him. But this time, he couldn't take it anymore. He stood up and said, "What's your problem, Zin!" he almost shouted.
"This," Zin punched Ren's cheek hardly, "is my problem." He laughed with his minions. Then before Ren could stand up again, he kicked Ren's stomach
Ren spitted bloods from his mouth and glared to Zin. "You'll regret what all that you have done to me." Ren said in dangerous tone. Zin's eyebrow twitched a little.
"Ha! Bring it on, midget!" Zin said.
Ren walked slowly toward him, suddenly he disappeared.
"Huh? Where's he?" Zin looked around.
"Zin! At your back!" one of Zin's minion yelled.
Before Zin could turn back, he heard a whisper behind him.
"Watch my speed, kisama." Then Ren kicked Zin's head oh-so-hardly.
Zin fell down on the floor, groaning. Everyone gasped. Ren had stood on the floor safely.
He sneered. "That one is for all of your torture to me." He walked again toward Zin. Zin sat up, ready to attack Ren.
Ren jumped, kicked Zin's head again with left leg. Zin caught it, but Ren was too fast for him. Ren used his right leg then jumped back.
"That is for always annoyed me." Then he punched Zin's cheek. "And that is for punched my cheek."
When Ren about to sent another attack, one of Zin's minion caught Ren's tiny body from back.
"Zin! I got him!" that boy said happily. Zin got up. "Good work. Prepare for your death…" he walked toward Ren. Ren snorted. He hit that boy's stomach with his elbow and kicked Zin's potbelly. "That's for kicked my stomach." Zin puked. The others said, "Eew… disgusting!"
Ren walked to nearest wall to get a broom.
"Wait, you midget!" Zin said.
Without looked at Zin, Ren said, "Ah, you called me 'midget' twice, Zin."
"Yeah! So what!" Zin said. Ren jumped back and facing Zin with a broom.
"Take this, KISAMA!" Everybody's eyes widened in horror, especially for Zin.
WHACK! One hit on Zin's head.
WHACK! Next was on his cheek.
WHACK! The other was on his neck.
WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! It continued from head to toe. It happened in 33 seconds. (33! Got it? XD)
"And that is for called me 'midget'." Ren tossed that broken broom to Zin's minions. Everybody was cheering for him, especially for girls. Such as, "WO AI NI, REEEN!" or "YOU ARE SO CUTE!" or else, no matter he just 5!
Ren walked to the scared Zin and put his foot on his potbelly. He stared downward with a dangerous sneer. "Never ever underestimate Tao Ren. You'll wish you were never born if you do." He said dramatically. Zin was unconscious. The girls were fainted of Ren's cuteness. The boys were yelling for him.
Ren turned back and walked away. He snorted and sneered.
'Yeah, I am Tao Ren. Don't underestimate me…'
-Don't Underestimate Ren, Owari-
Na-chan: how was that? Review! Honestly I wanted to use his Chinese name which is 'Tao Lian'. But…haa…forget it.
Hao: where is my story??
Na-chan: I'll make one if I have an idea. Okay, Hao-sama?
Hao: uh, okay!
Na-chan: You can request what character for next story if you want! See you at next story, minna! Don't forget to give me a review!
