And we're back! And on time, too (despite my best efforts). Thank you guys so so so much for all your lovely comments! (I AIM to reply to all of them I swear... It's just finding time and my brain again *sheepish cringing*) - I'll reply though, because I have all the time in the world right now. Wanted to say sorry these remaining chapters are shorter than Neri's was- she's a word whore, like us, whereas the boys just wanna fuck TBH. XD.

And our continued thanks to Eclectify for the beta. Any mistakes left are probably Shadow's fau-(Hey!)-lt. ;)

We are ridiculously happy that you're enjoying it so far (seriously), despite leaving the last chapter at a horrible point (;D) (We REALLY don't get better at that – Blame Chant :P) Pffff. Blame my OCs!

As promised, this is a Max POV chapter in which he has his cock down Anders' throat for the entire fucking chapter. XD (Gawd, we're horrible!)

Chant (& Shadowfire.)


The Warnings: Oral, a lot of oral... NOTHING BUT ORAL, Four-flipping-k of mouths, cocks, and cunts! (Also a fair bit of swearing in two langues)


Chapter 2

Max

Max's fingers tightened their grip on Anders' silky hair, urging the other mage on as he -finally-wrapped his lips around Max's aching cock and began to suck on it properly.

"Merde, that's it. Fuck yes," Max babbled incoherently, words slipping from between his lips in a fluctuating stream of his native Orlesian and the common tongue.

And speaking of tongues… Maker, did the blond have a talented one!

He had always suspected Anders would be quite good with his mouth; he just had that look about him. That look that screamed 'I'm an experienced cock sucker', it was there in his smug smirks and glinting eyes. But, as they said, the 'proof was in the pudding', and sweet Andraste if this wasn't one of the finest desserts Maxime had ever been served. It was in the small things he did that Max hadn't ever experienced before. It was the way Anders curled his tongue on the back stroke. In the way he took him right to the back of his mouth in a counted rhythm, and for a half second, Max felt the head of his cock teasingly enfolded in the soft tender flesh of the other man's throat without ever breaching it fully.

And it was in how he used his hands too.

His long soft healer's fingers were a very different feel to Rafael's calloused and rough ones, true, and that alone would have been enough to make it feel wonderful for its novelty. Of course, the mage lacked some to the subtlety and dexterity that was Raf's natural forte; but what he lacked there, he made up for in anatomical knowledge. Some of the sensations the healer could call up were boggling, and he did it with mindless ease. Those expert touches had Max seeing star-bursts popping with startling vividness behind his eyes at the most unexpected of moments, from discrete touches to places he'd ever have expected to hold such pleasures.

But the thing that was making this particular blow job so phenomenal was the scene being enacted by Neri and Rafael next to them. Not that the sight of Anders kneeling in front of him, his legs spread wide so he could better sink his mouth down onto Max's length with his cheeks hollowed beautifully, and rosy from working so hard, wasn't splendid in its own right. However, it was nothing compared to the visage that was Neri on her back, squirming in delight, moans pouring from between parted lips with Rafael's dark head buried between her legs, licking and sucking on her like the feast she was, his hands gripping her thighs tightly, his nails digging into her freckled flesh.

Seeing his lover like that…that was the thing that was blowing Maxime's mind, better than anything Anders could do to him physically.

Rafael wrapped his arms tight around Neri's legs, lifting them up slightly so he had better access, causing those whipcord muscles in his arms and shoulders to tense and pop in that way Max had always admired. The little elf's entire body was trembling and shuddering against that implacable hold as Rafael let out more rumbled groans against her flesh, clearly enjoying himself as he eagerly lapped up her nectar.

To his own surprise, Max actually found the sight of the woman falling apart under Raf's ministrations to be pretty hot. Seeing his lover loosening up- enjoying himself without reservation- was turning him on like nothing else and the sound of Neri making such incredible noises in response to his lover's skill... He doubted he would ever forget hearing such things for as long as he lived.

Neri's gaze met his own, her curly hair in an absolute state around her, fanned out across the bed wherever it wasn't plastered by sweat to her face; the damp darkened curls framing eyes near black with desire. Despite looking so totally fucked out of it, she still managed a smirk for him and then lifted her hand from where it had been gripping the bedding to stroke along the curve Anders' back.

Max felt the healer shiver at Neri's touch, as the resultant tremor travelled right through the blond man, and then correspondingly up his own cock. Max moaned and watched as Neri's smirk widened to a grin. He probably should have been worried by that predatory look -like the cat with the canary in its sights- but by the Lady he couldn't help but feel a thrill of excitement instead.

So far, Neri and Anders had played things rather safe -Neri especially- and while Max appreciated them taming it down some and going slow for Rafey, he couldn't help but want to see them live up to their notoriously wild and wicked bedroom reputations. After all, surely there had to be more to it that this with and couple infamously referred to as 'the Terrible Two' in their home Circle. Max wanted to see it.

And -at last- it looked as though Neri was going to give a demonstration.

He couldn't actually see what she was doing but damn it all if he couldn't feel the result of it. Within seconds Anders redoubled the intensity of his attentions, and a rumble of throaty groans began pouring through him; reverberating exquisitely around Max's cock and calling forth similar sounds from his own throat.

"Par la Dame," Max hissed as he shuddered in response to another powerful groan being forced through Anders' throat and the sudden abruptness in which the healer's whole body lurched forward drawing Max half down his throat at the devious little elf's actions. Neri was clearly most pleased with herself and the reaction she had elicited from them both, but her smug looking expression was short lived as Rafael did something equally devious to her which saw her biting down on another curse as her lithe back arched clean off the bed. He did it again and this time Neri came screaming; her entire body convulsing violently with her climax.

Max had never seen anything quite like it. It was incredible to watch -and watch he certainly did, fascinated, as she thrashed and convulsed in the throes of her orgasm, her limbs trembling, her stomach clenching visibly as she practically levitated off the bed before falling back down only to be thrown forward again as another shudder tore through her, her face crumpling attractively as she whimpered in a way that sounded almost pained. Maker, he'd heard about female orgasm being strong, but actually seeing one -being able to watch the whole thing, up close and personal like this? It was indescribable.

Sweet Lady, he was never going to be able to look at her again without blushing as red as his hair for the recall of this moment, although now was hardly the time to be getting embarrassed about such things. Not with his cock half down Anders' throat as it was.

Anders took that moment to be done with half measures and moaned as he swallowed him down properly.

"Mae oui! ," he half-shouted as Anders swallowed around him again, working the muscles in his long throat before he pulled back, letting Max's cock it rub against the roof of his mouth before focusing on the tip again. "You're so fucking good at this," he murmured as he ran his hands through Anders' hair, making the blond hum and sigh around him.

Next to them, Rafael finally pulled back, Neri still shaking before him, as he wiped his lips clean of her thick cream with a thumb, before dragging his palm over his chin to clear the rest from where it clung to his stubble. Max swallowed at the sight and at the way the rogue's eye glinted with bright satisfaction, amazed that Raf had been so eager with Neri.

Rafael smirked down at Neri and Max's mouth went even drier at the sight; he loved that smug little expression. It was one Max usually only saw when he was a puddle on the bed. It was unique to be clear of head as he was - even with Anders' lips wrapped around his cock, it was still early in the game by his standards- that he could actually appreciate the subtle wickedness in the way his lover's eyes glinted and his lips twitched. Right now, with Neri that puddle, Max was free to watch in awe as Anders continued to stroke and suck on his cock. Although, the healer's pace had slowed considerably as he too had been mesmerized by the sight of Neri coming undone like that, but he was back to it now and Max couldn't help but groan.

"Commeça, oui," he mumbled breathily down to the other mage, who moaned back in reply and sucked more eagerly.

The Fade suddenly crackled around them, like a whip about to snap as it was drawn tight and then released. Rafael hissed through his teeth, his back straightening, and that smug smirk was wiped right off his lips. Now it was Neri who was the one smirking as she held out her hand, twisting her wrist and curling her fingers, the gesture reeking of magic to Max. Furthermore, he could feel the magic humming around them even before he could see the effect it was having on Rafael who momentarily began to shudder and sweat.

"Baises moi," Rafael grunted as he opened his eyes and stared at Neri, bewildered. Her smirk turned into a grin and she blew on her fingers and winked at the rogue.

"Such pretty words," Neri muttered as she sat up, her gaze now predatory and a little unnerving, to be honest. Casually, she reached over and stroked Anders' hair, kneading his scalp a bit, and humming approvingly as he continued to bob up and down on Max's dick. Suddenly, Max was aware that everyone was watching Neri, waiting for her next move. Somewhere in the past few moments there had been a subtle shift in the room and suddenly it was very clear that she was now the one in charge. Max gulped, uncertain just what that heralded for the immediate future. His mouth went desert dry with nervous anticipation even as his cock twitched in Anders' mouth, excited at the likely prospect of entirely new experiences on his horizon.

Neri pushed her hand up through Anders' hair, making a mess of it, as she went until her fingertips grazed the tender skin just above Anders' long nose, where she promptly began to walk them up along Max's abdomen, over his chest, collar, and throat before tickling them along his hairy jaw. He shivered at her touch, at those delicate slender fingers and the way they just barely brushed across his face. "Do you want to watch me make your lover come undone, Maxime?" she husked, a soft pink tongue darting out for a quick lip lick.

"Oh Maker, yes," he rushed out.

She grinned and turned those dark eyes to Rafael who was kneeling on the bed, jaw and fists clenched, still caught in the aftermath of her spell. She shifted slightly on the bed and fluttered her lashes at him. "Come now Rafey, you must be hard as fuck right now…" She ran her fingers over the thick bulge straining against Raf's leathers and they both hissed – him from intense pleasure or pain, honestly it could have been both at this point, and Neri from surprise at finding him just that hard and thick. Max doubted she would have felt a thicker cock than Rafael's, unless she had been with a dwarf, and the little elf swallowed audibly, looking a little wide eyed.

"Bloody fuck," she muttered as she gripped him a little tighter through his leathers. Rafael let out his own string of grunted curses at the purposeful nature of that contact and Neri immediately set about undoing his belt buckle. Max watched in quiet anticipation, thoughtlessly moving his hand back to Anders' hair and letting his hips rock gently into that welcoming mouth of his despite his attention being more than half spent on their respective partners. Eagerly, he waited for Raf's manhood to be revealed properly. Maker, but he loved his lover's cock. Loved how it looked, how it tasted, how it felt pounding into him, and now he was going to see someone else playing with it, see them touching it, sucking on it, getting pounded by it. The thought alone was enough to make him dizzy with excitement.

Finally, Neri yanked down Rafael's trews and Max let out a loud bark of laughter as Raf's thick cock immediately sprang free, proud and erect, and almost smacked Neri in the face in its exuberant rush for freedom.

"I dared him not to wear pants," Max chortled, at the look of surprise on the little elf's face as much as at his lover's audacity at actually having come to their little party sans smalls.

Neri glanced at him, her eyes wide with disbelief and then she grinned and looked back at the dark cock before her nose with its pearlescent drops of pre-cum gathered along the slit. Max expected her to lap up those drops immediately, but Neri didn't even touch Rafael's erection. Instead, she ran her hands up what she had exposed of his thighs to his abs, feeling every hard inch of muscle in front of her. She leaned forward, her lips parted, breath ghosting over Raf's twitching cock, causing Raf and Max both to catch their breath sharply only to leave them both holding the air tight when at the last second she shifted her aim, letting her lips bypass his prick entirely as she put her mouth to his hip instead. Rafael's breath escaped him in an odd sort of moaning growl as she licked along the thick line of his obliques, letting her teeth drag over his skin in a way that made his flesh visibly break out in gooseflesh. Raf sucked in his next breath through his teeth as he worked to remain perfectly still, just waiting for the moment she would finally take his aching length into her mouth.

Max half expected the elf to prove a proper tease after a move like that but turned out Neri was just as impatient as the rest of them, and after only few moments more of her happily lavishing his lover's muscles with her tongue and mouth, she lifted a hand and wrapped it around his thick shaft. Such was Raf's girth that her long elven fingers were barely able to wrap all the way around him and looked so slim and small to the point of fragility in comparison. She stroked once, drawing back his foreskin in one quick movement that saw Rafael's eyes squeeze shut, gritting his teeth and breathing hard through his nose. Neri seemed to take his refusal to react further to her touch as a challenge and her smirk only widened.

"Bordel de merde!" The expletive hissed out passed Max's own suddenly gritted teeth as Anders' hands suddenly unleashed a spark of electricity that shot up through his dick like a miniature orgasm. Max's head snapped backward and his entire body drew taut as bow string in his surprised shock at that sudden and unlooked for jolt.

"Oh good," the blond said with a chuckle "glad to have your attention, again." Max merely moaned in reply, unable to form words, as another spark flew over him, this time headed down across his balls; he actually lurched forward because of it and Anders swallowed down his cock right to the to the root before withdrawing again. Max shivered as Anders' tongue rolled over the glands at the head of his cock with undeniable skill and then the bastard let loose a series of sudden sparks… directly from his tongue! Curses flew from Max's mouth, some he was sure weren't even Orlesian or Common as his mind short circuited.

"Merde, baises moi. Putain de merde!" he gasped out.

"Oh so you do like me sucking on your cock?" Anders husked as he stroked his fingers up his shaft, squeezing and twisting roughly.

"Oui, oui," he said quickly, "Please, don't stop."

Anders groaned in what Max thought was a response to his flagrant begging, but Max quickly realised it wasn't because of Max's words when the blond's movements on his cock all but ceased. Max opened eyes he hadn't realized he'd closed and followed the other man's his gaze over to Neri and Raf, and felt his eyes grow wide at the sight. Neri had her mouth on Rafael's cock – more than that she had the damned thing down her throat.

He could see it.

Neri's lips were stretched wide, her eyes watering from the strain of taking in the entirety of so thick a length as Raf's. For his part, Rafael had a white knuckled grip on her mess of curls, his teeth gritted till they creaked and his arms corded and shaking with restraint. It was the hottest damned thing Max had ever seen.

He knew from experience how hard it was to swallow down Raf's cock – and Max had a big mouth – the fact that this tiny elf was doing it was bloody incredible. Max couldn't even imagine how exquisite and tight that slender throat of hers must feel to the rogue. After a seemingly endless moment, Neri pulled back, slowly letting that robust rod slip from her lips, trailing a long string of spittle behind it. She wiped her mouth with the back of her hand and grinned toothily up at Rafael, clearly proud of her accomplishment and the dazed and stunned look it had left on her fellow warden's face.

"Hoooolllyyy fuck," she said as she rubbed her jaw. "Your cock is fucking delicious."

A small smirk twitched at Rafael's lips and he quirked his brow, obviously indicating for her to carry on. Neri laughed and then eagerly opened her mouth for it again. This time Raf thrust into it and Max could hear the muffled groaning Neri let out around it that had Rafael shuddering and biting down on his lip to stop from cursing. It was pretty rare for Raf to give up control in the bedroom, so Max wasn't at all surprised to see those hands of his lock firmly around her head as he began really rocking into her mouth. Neri handled it like a pro, apparently more than used to Anders' longer cock going further down her throat, it was only really the thickness that she seemed to be struggling with but even that was something she seemed to be adjusting to rapidly.

Something in Neri's easy acceptance of Raf's thick cock and the way she'd lured the rogue to lay into her with such abandon seemed to spark some competitive edge in Anders, for suddenly the real sparks of his magic returned, coursing up Max's shaft and forcing him to let out a loud cry of surprise. Then Anders dug his nails into Max's thighs and really got to work, striving for a consistent rhythm and drawing his bent cock in much deeper now than he had been doing before. Max groaned and his hips started to buck, pushing his cock still further into Anders' hot willing throat.

He needed to cum -Maker!- he was so fucking hard and his balls felt like they were going to fall off they were so heavy, although he supposed it wouldn't really matter if they did; he was infertile, after all and wasn't as though he could get Raf pregnant anyway… and he was rambling. Anders seemed to notice his dazed distraction and called him back to focus by unleashing a strong current that vibrated through him. This was again an entirely new experience and previously unconsidered use of primal magic; it wasn't sharp like the sparks, it felt like a gentle pressure that was slowly building, not unlike the start of a storm. Max couldn't help but moan shamelessly as that current buzzed through his center and hit his prostate.

"Sweet Andraste!" he cursed, "Yes, yes, that, oh fuck yes that!" He shuddered, gasping as Anders increased the intensity of that current and sucked more eagerly on his cock. "Fuck, Anders, your mouth and magic are fucking amazing. Merde!" he blabbered out. He managed to force his eyes open enough to look at his lover when he heard Rafael groaning despite his best efforts not to. He was really mouth fucking Neri now, although she seemed to have regained some control of the situation again, for Max realized he could feel a different draw on the fade, separate from Anders' own magical signature, and came to the conclusion that it was Neri using her force magic again which had drawn that unwilling groan form his lover's throat. He couldn't even begin to imagine how that felt; he had only ever seen her use it in combat or the training yard. Lifting people up and throwing them around didn't sound particularly pleasant; then again, he ever would have guessed how pleasant electricity could be and yet here he was moaning like a bitch in heat for Anders because of it.

He was so close now, he could feel his balls tightening, the heat pooling at his groin and the delicious shivers running down his spine as he got ready to spill his load. He could see that Raf was close too despite his circumspect moaning and grunting. His movements had grown more erratic now and his eyes were squeezed tight shut, as his breathing became ever more laboured and ragged.

He looked divine.

Neri and Anders shared a look and a smirk and Max had time only enough to think 'oh merde' before the fade crackled around him, redoubling its previous pressure, and he was overwhelmed with a surge of electricity so strong it tore his orgasm from him and it virtually exploded into Anders' mouth. Hot jets of his seed began to course down the blond man's throat as Max simply continued to come and come and come; his entire body convulsing almost as violently as he had witnessed Neri do for Rafael.

It was incredible; one of the most powerful and lengthy orgasm's of his life and Anders milked him for every drop of it. The healer's hands never stilling as he choked and fought to swallow down the near tidal flood of Max's spunk. Anders worked him until every last drop was spent and all Max could do was collapse atop the other man in mindless heap of satisfaction.


SHADOWFIRE BABY UPDATE (for those who care): So my little one was born via C-section mid-afternoon on Nov the 8th after he kick-started my labour early morning on Nov 7th. I was really hoping this time around for a natural birth, but after THIRTY-TWO FREAKING HOURS OF ZERO PROGRESS(!) I gave in and let them taken him out. Fortunately the experience this time around was much better than the last and the spinal actually took this time and I couldn't actually FEEL them cutting me open, so recovery and so-forth have been much better. We are home now and I'm happy to report that my little angel is not only doing well (*proud mama brags about his perfect A.P.G.A.R. scores at every opportunity*) but has already achieved regaining his full birth weight in less than a week (^^)... Tho I suspect that might have something to do with then cluster feeding that is preventing me from sleeping at night... (O.O)

I am Still slowly working my way through answering all the lovely comments that came in on Chapter One of this while I was cut off from the world in hospital and I shall endeavour to do better at responding with this one, SO PLEASE let us know you're still enjoying this! Max is adorable and I was properly ECSTATIC to get to work with him and I hope you've all come to love him as much as me during this chapter.

Love you all and we hope to see you again next week! (don't forget to comment *bats lashes*. My lashes aren't very long... *puts on fake lashes THEN bats them*)

Shadowfire (& Enchantm3nt)