Chapter 1 is up. And remember, I accept criticism, but flaming is just plain WRONG.
So here you go, chappy 1!
Stormclaw padded neatly out of the warrior's den. He slithered toward the fresh-kill pile and took a magpie for himself, settling at the nettle patch to eat. The young warrior looked around to spot his apprentice, Gingerpaw, stretching in front of the apprentice den. When the young cat spotted his mentor looking at him, he walked silently toward the nettle patch to greet Stormclaw. "Well?" Asked Gingerpaw. "What are we doing today?" Stormclaw suppressed a purr of amusement. "We are going to do battle training." His apprentice's eyes lit up at that. "Really? Now?" "Yes now. Let's go!" As they whipped out of camp, Stormclaw felt as though he was being watched… and he knew that Darkheart was looking at him through narrowed eyes…
Well? Do you like the ending? I mean of this chapter. Don't worry, the ending isn't for a while now. See ya, and R&R really! You can review when I HAVN'T updated! Oh, and I know it was kind of short, but the next ones will be longer. Hasta la vista!
