Okay one thing for that one reviewer, if you are still reading this.

Look this story has only reached one chapter. There are many stories like this. There are many stories with the same theme but have a different plot line. Like Max is the popular kid and Fang is the new kid. They fall in love.

So You don't even know how this story will even end up like. So back off and stop reading this.

Also sorry for the length of this chapter


They were all staring at Jeb waiting for him to save his own ass.

Yeah right, from what I heard outside the door coming in, is that they are as about as big of fans of Jeb as they are of a huge mound of cow shit being thrown in their faces

(actually I think they would like the cow shit better).

Jeb looked scared like he was going to crap his pants, but hey I wasn't feeling any sympathy for him, and he was getting glared at by both Max and Fang. This is not going to end well, but you know whatever.

"Why didn't you grab her along with us?", Max snarled at him and taking a step forward, intimating him.

"How come it actually doesn't surprise me that you left her? Fang you knew about her why didn't you tell us and we could have gone and got her. We could have gotten her quicker and save all this nonsense currently?", Max was seething with rage by this point. Max crossed her arms across her chest and leaned on her right leg. Everyone and everything was silent.

Then Fang said something that really didn't surprise me at all.

"Jeb told me before he got us out that she was dead. I didn't believe him at first, but then he showed me a picture of her corpse. I left it at that since then, trying to push the fact that I just lost my only sister to maniacs and I would never be able to get her back ever to the back of my mind.", he said so softly it was barely audible.

"It has yet again come back to it being all Jeb's fault. Now I demand you tell me why you lied and didn't grab her too!", Max yelled right in his face. Jeb was scared, his eyes showed it but his body language showed that he was trying to maintain control.

"I d-d-didn't t-take her with us because she was unstable and I lied to make sure you didn't go back and rescue her so you could be safe." Jeb was actually telling the truth for once, but even telling the truth his voice was rattled and rough.

"She had an unstable compound in her that if something did go wrong everybody in a 100 mile radius, would die including herself. Not to mention all the damage she could and probably will be doing here."

"This is exactly why I hate you and all of your whitecoat friends, because you do stupid shit like that to poor, innocent children!" Max was furious and looked like she wanted to tear Jeb apart and dance on his corpse. But one thing kept running through my mind:

Why does Max stand up for me when she like just met me a few minutes ago.

Before she could yell at Jeb some more she, Fang and I punched him right in the face as hard as we could, without causing any permanent damage. I Punched his jaw and Fang lashed out at his semi-large nose. We retracted and Jeb fell to the floor. He didn't put up a fight at all. He was on his hands and knees wiping blood off his nose and shirt.
"Tell me what the hell is wrong with me already you you... selfish inconsiderate waste of a human, jackass!", I screamed at him with all my might, and by the time I was done I was on the verge of crying my eyes out. I knelt down to slap him but Fang touched my shoulders.

"Talon don't, one lashing is good enough." He said calmly. I stood straight back up and went to Fang's side. Jeb stood up again and blood was still running down his nose. He mumbled something under his breath and placed his nose back in place. Fang must have broken it or something.

"Let me explain." He said taking up his seat again. I looked over to Max and she was still fuming and looked like she still wanted to kill him, but she held back the urge.

"Explain now" Max said.

"Okay look. Talon and Fang when they were in the same fetus. One of them was stronger than the other and that one was Fang. Talon was weak and defenseless. We extracted them from the mother volunteer. Under her permission. We extracted them and they were healthy, well one was. Fang was the dominant one and was stronger, much stronger, than Talon. By the looks of it Talon would have died. A whitecoat injected her with a serum that would create more muscle tissue. The whitecoat grabbed the wrong serum and injected Talon with a Arsenicyttriumoxide and a Hydrochloric Beryllstrontium."

I was utterly confused

"With those compounds they fused together and took over Talon's body cells. They only activate when a great danger is confronted by her and is going to affect either the Arsenicyttriumoxide or the Hydrochloric Beryllstrontium. If they do confront a danger force it is like a combustion that reaches a 100 mile radius and will burn, mutate, and eventually kill a person or animal from the inside."

I looked around and everyone had a look on their face that read in flashing lights 'What the h-e-double hockey sticks are you talking about'. Jeb noticed and sighed.

"Okay two compounds went into Talon and if something is greatly intimidating and can harm the compounds then they will go boom and die" Jeb said slowly.

Everyone nodded their head.

"So pretty much Talon is a time bomb that hasn't been activated yet" Iggy said.

"Precisely" Jeb said

"Awesome. Can we like experiment on her or something" Gazzy said excitedly but was soon brought down as Fang glared at him.

"No you cannot experiment with her unless you want to go boom and die" Max said.

"Fine" Gazzy huffed and sat back down. I turned back to Jeb.

"Okay now I know so how do I get the arzetricutrtronium whatever and the other thing out of me before I go boom."

"It is impossible to extract such compounds out, even with the technology we have now. The Arsenicyttriumoxide is highly reactive to the Carbon Dioxide in the air. If it comes into contact with the Carbon Dioxide then it will explode and kill everyone in a 34.6 mile radius." Jeb said and I sat back down.

"What do you suppose we do now. I asked Max to my left.

She looked at me straight in the eyes. Her warm chocolate brown eyes staring straight into my obsidian eyes. Her eyes told the truth as she said this.

"I don't know Talon. I truly don't know"


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And who likes my made up compounds and such. Well I'm not sure if they are made up. I just put in some of the remembered elements in my head and combined them together to make a very weird word.

So anyways There was chapter two and please do not call this a spinoff or something to MadalineCullen's story . Because well it is NOT. And all due respect to MadalineCullen's Story, but this plot is not like it.

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