Here's the next part
Here's the next part. More reviews I get the faster I work on this. Oh and if you like the idea of kids getting sucked in to smash then try Captain Black Knight's smash story, its her only one so it shouldn't be too hard to find. And KBK, I didn't rip off you're idea; I've had it since I first played the Sub Space Emissary during the summer.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own smash, nor any of it's characters. If any events in this story bare similarities and/or connections to real life events such are pure coincidence, this is a fictional story.
Angie flew by the platform with hundreds of thoughts going through her mind just as fast as she was falling. Is this real? How can I breathe if this is outer space? Why is it me that got sucked in? I'm not even outrageously amazing at the game! Could this be what happened to the missing kids? Angie was almost convinced that this was the end when there was another flash of light. It surrounded her and she felt strange, her skin began to burn, she hurt in places she didn't know she had. Then Angie felt wind againsed her face. She was falling even faster. Angie opened her eyes and saw "SKY WORLD!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????" Angie went past roman style buildings and statues. There were little people with wings every where! Angie went through a cloud and now there was what looked like a planet covered in forests underneath of her "THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!"
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Pit ran down the corridors of the temple. There was a fountain full of water. The small winged boy put one finger in the middle causing it to ripple. The water began to glow and he was an image of a girl falling from what looked like a portal to final destination. And in front of him a gorgeous woman with flowing green hair appeared. Pit knelt in front of her and she handed him a glowing ball. In Pit's hand was a bow and two gold rings appeared around the hand that held it. Pit instantly knew what do.
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Angie was now convinced that this was the end. She began her prayers when she was grabbed around the arms by some one. Angie looked up and saw a computer animated brunette boy with wings! Angie swallowed as he began to fly down wards to set her down. I-I-It can't be him! I mean come on! He's computer animated! Wait a second…! Angie looked at her legs, still clothed in the knee socks she wore at school (yes she was in her uniform on a Saturday DEAL WITH IT). She was CG (high quality computer graphics)!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As the boy put her on a floating stone she fell on her behind and crawled backwards. "Y-Y-Y-YOU C-C-C-CAN'T B-B-B-BE R-R-R-REAL!!! Y-Y-Y-YOU'RE JUST A GAME CHARACTER!!!!!" Pit gained a confused expression. "Gam cherictor?" He asked. Angie pondered for a moment. She thought back to one of the many machinimas she had seen on youtube. She remembered one that said that Pit's game was made in a time where games only had text, and she remembered seeing on TV that Pit's game was getting a series revival. "You must only just now be learning how to talk huh?" Angie said as she stood up and dusted her self off. Pit nodded in return. "Soooo, this is sky world?" Pit nodded again. "OK, not that walking on clouds isn't cool but I need to get back to my world A.S.A.P"
"You're world?" Pit was starting to get the hang of talking. "I don't belong in this world!!" Pit turned his bow into two swords and gave Angie a happy expression. "Don't worry."
"WA-WA-WA-WAIT! I DIDN'T MEAN THAT I BELONG IN THE NEXT WORLD!!!!" Angie said with her arms waving in the air. Pit turned his swords back in to an arrow. "(SIGH) For God's sake, you scared the sh… what are you looking at?" Pit looked terrified, serious, and furious at the same time. "Was it some thing I said?" Angie turned around to see a certain battle ship from her favorite cut scene in the sub-space emissary (not the hall bird, the big one that comes out of that huge portal to sub-space). "Run." Pit said as he flew toward it. "ARE YOU CRAZY???!!!" Angie screamed as she did what Pit told her to do in the opposite direction he wanted her to do it. "ARE YOU NUTS????!!! THE HALL BIRD HARDLY STOOD UP TO THAT THING!!!!! YOU DON'T STAND A CHANCE!!!" Just then many dark shadows began to emanate from the ship. Angie instantly thought shadow bugs and Primids. But they turned in to some thing different. At first what seemed to be bolts of bright purple lightning and then they all spun into cylinders all around Angie. Then in an instant there were wire frames all around Angie! Pit flew down to help but there were too many to get to Angie in time. Then a male wire frame stepped forward. All the others got out of his way. This one was different from the other wire frames. His smash cymbal was dark purple instead of red. He was more slender than muscular too. He pointed at the small portion of Angie's chest that wasn't covered by the polo of her uniform (the tie was loose at the moment), she felt another burning sensation but only more extreme. Then there was a mark, it looked like a silver comet. After a moment it stopped glowing silver and began to change into the color of a burn that had been there for a few years. The mark reminded Angie of the cymbals that all the smash characters had (the ones that show up over their scores after they win a match, like Ness' planet Earth). The wire frame vanished in to more of those purple wires. The others began to close in on her. Right now Pit had no choice but to open a portal to the ground world beneath Angie's feet or let her be captured by the wire frames. Pit fired an unusually bright arrow and it hit right on the ground beneath Angie's legs. "HEY! Watch where you're aiming that thing!" Then suddenly the ground began to glow. The floating stone turned in to cloud, Angie fell through!
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Angie was falling again. It was just as terrifying. She would have rather been fighting off wire frames. At least she would have a SLIGHT chance of survival! Especially when she began to see the ground! Then another unusually bright arrow flew at Angie, it twisted around her a few times. When she was about fifty feet above the ground it spun around her faster and faster until she began to fall more and more slowly. When she got beneath the lowest clouds she was gently floating down. Angie gracefully landed on the grass. Must be the magic of Pit's bow. Looking around at the meadow she saw some thing no Sub-Space Emissary lover could miss. "THE STADIUM FROM THE INTRO!" There it was, levitating fifty feet in the air, cheers echoing from it. I have to find a way up there! Angie started running towards it as fast as she could; trying to ignore that she had no shoes on.
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Angie had been running for quite a while now. The stadium was one of those things that seemed close when it was far due to its outrageous size .It was the afternoon and the crowds were even more excited. "How do the people even get in that thing? Angie then saw a sort of glass tube come down from the stadium as she came under it. "Oh." Angie went in side and a male voice with no emotion asked her to prepare for the fight and hold on to the safety bars in side of the pod. She obeyed and it shot upwards at an outrageous speed. "There has to be a smash character in there that'll hear me out!" she exclaimed. When Angie got to the top there was a blinding flash of light. Then just like that she was in the stadium! But not in the stands! She was in the middle of the battle arena! "Hello folks! We have some one new to smash joining us today!" a Lakitu (those turtles on the clouds) said as he pointed his camera at Angie. The tube vanished from around her. "Wait a sec there's been a,"
"And her challenger is… the one and only… MARIOOOOO!"
"Mario!" The red capped plumber made his entrance. "Oh… sh" not wanting to have to teach any one a curse word "shnisenhower…" Mario ran forward at Angie and blasted a fire ball. She jumped out of the way. "WA-WA-WAIT! THERE'S BEEN A MISUNDERTSANDING!" Mario came at her and drove several blows to her stomach. "GOD DA-" Instinctively Angie crouched and formed a red bubble around her self. "A shield!!??" Angie shield rolled back. Mario jumped at her and she did another shield roll, double jumped, then did a downwards kick. Mario fell down. Do I have the physical abilities that I would if I were an actual character in the game? That would explain why I didn't get tiered running. "O.K! Now we're really talking!" Angie ran forward and so did Mario. Mario tried to punch but Angie shield rolled, then did a spinning kick while on the ground tripping Mario. After Mario got up she delivered a swift heal drop to his head, knocking Mario out and causing him to be turned in to a trophy. I-I-I can't believe it, I beat a legend and it was my first fight! Angie was taking in the applause when she heard a cry from behind her and saw Zelda comforting Peach whose face was buried into her hands. Angie realized what she had done "OH CRAP! I JUST TROPIPHIED MARIO!" Thinking quickly Angie tapped the bottom of Mario's trophy causing him to awaken. He shook hid head and Angie offered her palm. Angie hopped off of the battle stage taking in the applause that she received for her selfless act. She walked up to the two princesses. "Um… Peach, Zelda. Can I talk to you?" Zelda stepped forward Wow, I can only wish that I was that gorgeous… "What is it that you want?" she asked in a Hylian accent. "How should I put this…? I was hoping that you could use you're magic to help me out."
"It depends on what you need me to do."
"The thing is… I'm not exactly from this… world… err, reality. And I wanted to know if you knew some kind of spell to get me back. But before you do you should know that there may be others." Before Zelda could answer the sky turned red and a silver battle ship appeared in the sky.
