Okas so this is just an authors note but it is very important because i have to thank a person who saved my story through a simple review so here it goes:

Thank you sooo much BlueNeutrino for telling me that there are spelling and grammar mistakes in my story because without you i would have never realised and just left it that way o thank you soooo soooo much xxxx

p.s. also alot of thanks to awsome JiaCullen for adding my story to her community :D