A/N: I know that it was just the prologue but like 100 people read it and didn't say anything! Come one you guys! We all need opinions on our stories so we can improve or keep it the same! Tell me things that interest you in the Warriors series so I can improve mine to come at least close!
Anyway, :), here is Chapter One! Enjoy!
Chapter One
Thunder rolled in the sky just after lighten struck the ground. Rain poured under The Great Willow's roots causing WillowClan's dens to flood. Luckily, their nests were covered easy to reassemble. Blackkit sat on the ground below the Great Willow, waiting for her father or mother to get her. Gentlebreeze already took Lightkit up into the tree for safety but still hasn't returned to get her. But, soon her father appeared in front of her with a mouse in his jaws. Blackkit was four moons old and eating fresh kill by now. Her mouth tingled as her belly rumbled at the sight of the plump mouse. Her father dropped the mouse in front of her. "If you can carry that, I'll take you into the tree," the large dark grey tom meowed.
She nodded excitedly as she grabbed the mouse in her watering jaws. Her father, Whalefin, picked her up and began to claw her way up the tree with Blackkit dangling in his jaws. Finally reaching the lowest branch, Blackkit set down the mouse as she saw her brother, Lightkit. "Lightkit, look at what Whalefin brought us!" She screamed excitedly.
Lightkit flickered his reflective yellow gaze at her. He brightened up and scooted closer to her carefully. Together, they ate hungrily until the storm cleared up.
The bright sun broke through the thick clouds. The suns light began to reflect off the water that made puddles in the camp. Blackkit licked her lips and stared at the beautiful sight. Drops of water hung on leaves, making them shine brilliantly. Blackkits wet fur began to quiver with adventure. "Come on, slow slugs, the rain has stopped!" She meowed excitedly to her small family.
Her mothers whiskers twitched with amusement as her fathers eyes twinkled at her. Her mother picked her up carefully and carried her down the tree with Lightkit and Whalefin just behind them. Blackkits paws tingled as her mother sat her down on the muddy earths surface. "Ewwww!" She screeched as mud came up over her paws.
Gentlebreeze chuckled, "You better get use to it, dear. Its what we get with living so close to the sea."
Blackkit cocked her head at her mother. Lightkit soon sat against her as her mother continued, "I assume you want to know what a 'sea' is, hmm?"
Both kits nodded eagerly. "Well, you see this puddle?" She began. Both kits nodded vigorously then she continued, "A sea is just a much larger puddle! It stretches across the world, and you can't see the end of it! It just goes on and on!"
"Wwwooooowwww," both kits said it unison.
"Come on, Gentlebreeze, we have to reconstruct the nursery. Again." Another white queen groaned.
Blackkit watched as the two queens padded away with their tails high. "Now don't you two get into trouble. Stay in the camp," their father warned cautiously.
Blackkit spoke up first, "We wouldn't even dream of disobeying you, Whalefin!"
Her fathers eyes twinkled again, but he snorted and flicked his tail on her head. Blackkit watched her father pad away toward Branchstar's den. "Come on, lets go find the sea!" She meowed excitedly as she kicked up mud.
"Do you have hornets in your brain? Whalefin just told us not to leave camp!" Her brother whispered in response.
Blackkit fluffed up the white fur along her spine, "I don't care! I want to see the sea!"
Lightkits yellow eyes grew uneasy then brightened up quickly, "Well alright, I suppose it would be fun!"
Blackkit signaled with her long tail to her brother to follow her. He followed close by her as she crept through the camp wall. Hoping not to be spotted, she burst through the other side bravely. She opened her eyes to see the Willow Forest. Her eyes sparkled at the tall trees and their branches that fell down to graze the earth. "How do we know which way the ocean is?" Lightkit asked as he came trough the bushes.
"Shhhhhhh! You don't want the warriors to hear you, do you?" Blackkit growled with bristled neck fur.
Lightkits eyes grew wide and he shook his head. "Okay then, so hush," she began as she opened her mouth to scent the air, then continued with a point of her tail, "It's this way! It smells really strange, but I assume its the sea!"
Blackkit could feel Lightkit's uneasiness and she could smell his fear scent, but she decided to ignore it. She followed the scent through tall grass into a small clearing, past the clearing, she could see a line of trees then bright, blue water. Suddenly, thunder cracked in the sky. Blackkit threw her eyes into the sky and saw the thick black clouds returning. "Uh oh, I think we should go, Blackkit," Lightkit warned.
Before Blackkit could reply, rain poured from the clouds and drenched Blackkit and her brother. It was raining so hard, Blackkit could barely see past her own whiskers. She turned to where her brother was standing, only to see no one but that bark of a tree. "Lightkit? Lightkit, where are you?" Blackkit screamed.
But instead of the response she was expecting, a low growl sounded a few mouse lengths away. Blackkit's fur began to shake with fear. "Lightkit, this isn't funny, stop playing around," she growled.
She strained to see a figure lumbering toward her, soon, she came face-to-face with the Clans worst enemy. A badger.
A/N: Oh no! Blackkit has gotten herself into a lot of trouble, what will happen to her?! Only one way to find out! REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW! Thanks!
-Nightspirit
