How is it so far? Any characters that you want to see, tell me. Remember, Arya is a little bit OOC (Sorry), she's tired, and love-stricken.
Chapter Two
Arya's pride was severely damaged. She and her defenses were swept aside like dead leaves! Now she had been taken hostage, and the Shade (aptly named Deyjas) and its Ra'zac masters were demanding Uru'baen or they would slit Arya's throat. How did this happen? The day had started well enough, she awoke on the beach where she always goes to at night, in vain hope that she would see Eragon. Then she and Firnen headed back to Ellesmera, only to find it under siege. They had done relatively well in battle, until Firnen was knocked unconscious by Deyjas and she was taken hostage.
She went back to thinking about Eragon. She had gone to that beach ever since he left, and every time she went, she cried her eyes out, contemplating what might have been if she went with him. She noticed that she was crying now, and stopped. I must not show weakness, my people need me. It was then that she noticed a massive blue dragon flying towards them. NOT POSSIBLE, she thought. As the dragon got closer, she saw a hooded, cloaked figure on the dragon's back. No, I refuse to believe it. I refuse to hope. It must just be one of HIS recruits.
Then the figure swan dived off of the dragon's back, and landed right on top of the Shade, and stabbed him in the heart with a deep blue colored blade. No, it can NOT be HIM. The figure began to decimate everything in his path. He threw his sword in a wide, horizontal arc, decapitating half of the soldiers, and then his sword flew back into his hand. He turned around, and jumped into the remaining legions, out of her field of view. She heard some shouting and screaming, but mostly just fleshy, gory sounds and splatters. The Ra'zac now revealed themselves, one directly in front of him, one directly behind. He threw his sword like a javelin at the Ra'zac in front of him, cutting its head down the middle. The blade began to return to its owner, and the remaining Ra'zac screeched in rage, and sprinted towards the figure. He bent over backwards just in time for the sword to fly straight into the Ra'zac's stomach. He got up, pulled his sword out of the creature's carapace, and with a light tap, knocked over the Ra'zac's corpse. He walked over to Arya, smiled and slowly removed his hood. Arya's heart skipped a beat when she saw his face, and as she did, all aches and pains, all worries and anxieties, fell away as his hood draped over his shoulders.
"Eragon," she breathed,
and then fainted on the spot.
