Hey, this is my second story, continuing on from my first, and i hope for your sake the spelling is a little beter than last time,
if not im truely sorry and i will try to get a spell check:)
Dr Who- Rose's Secrets (Tostrial Nefesis)
I opened the door and stepped out.
"NO, ROSE STOP!" shouted the Docter in alarm.
A wave of fresh air ran through my hair as i walked in to the new world.
I opened my eyes and took in my new surroundings.
The docter ran out in painic, "ROSE!" he shouted again then stopped right beside me as he saw what i was seeing.
"oh" he said in both a supprised and confused voice.
It was beautiful, a rich blue sky beaming rays of red and orange from the sun that sat on the horrision,
thousands of tree's, every leaf a different colour of the rainbow, spread out over the land, grass of the lightest green and the most amazing thing, was the air that sparkled like shimmer dust, making everything shine. "Docter, its beautiful" i whispered not wanting to break the momment.
"It is...its all wrong" he replied.
He ran back in to the TARDIS and i followed not being able to make any sence of it all.
"What do you mean, its all wrong?" i asked, suddenly even more confused.
He went to the data screen and pointed at some readings that i couldn't unerstand.
"According to this, out there shouldn't look like out there"
" Well whats it spossed to look like then?" i asked.
" You know bubbling larva, black sky, poisoness air, the usuall" he replied without looking up.
" Ok then why dosn't it"
"Im not sure, but where going to find out" he looked up "fancy a trip to the local town?" he asked suddenly grinning.
"Alright then!" i said matching his enthusiasm.
We stepped out of the TARDIS and the docter shut the door.
"so exactly where is the local town?" i said, looking around at the tree's.
"Hmm...im guessing this way" he exclaimed closing his eyes and pointing in a random direction.
I smiled and we started walking toward the phycodelic looking forest.
We walked casually side-by-side as i admired how the sun reflected of the shimmer dust.
"what is that stuff?" i asked referring to the glistning air.
"there called tostrial nefesis, single celled organisms veiwable only when the sun shines, quite amazing creatures really,
they live of nothing but pure energy soaked up from the sun"
"you mean those things are alive?" i asked cocking my head awe.
"yep, and belive it or not, with the ammount of energy they soak up, there brains are 100 times more powerful than you or me" he frowned at his words, "well actually just you, i cant belive i just insulted myself like that.
I grinned at him and we both sneezed in unison.
Suddenly my head felt dizzy, like i just had a long night at the pub, and my vision spun around in circles, i was stumbling around trying to keep my balance and when i looked up, the docter was doing the same.
"Docter" i managed to whisper through my trembling lips.
"Rose" i heard in the same quivering voice, just before i fell to the ground.
My whole body was numb and i felt like i was going to puke, my eyes were watering and my throat was burning, everything was still spinning in circles, i could feel myself slipping away from conciousness and just before my eyes were shut i saw two things, the docter lying unconcious on the ground near me and a dark figure, its hands reaching toward me.
Everything went Dark.
