Chapter 1 Part 1

The Elegant Man

when lilly was out of school here was a big black car waiting there, everyone was surrounding the car. Then lilly saw the man, the man was dressed all in white, also had black

hair, purplish eyes, and had really pale skin lke lilly. Then lilly got a major headache, so lilly went to the bus and waited til she got home. When lilly got home she got a snack and

started to do her home work in her room. Her mom and dad were at work til nine so lill had to make her own dinner and of course save some for her mother and father. then lilly

was about to go to bed, but decided to get some air before she went to bed. she got on the balcony and looked out over the river. Then some one tapped lily's shoulder , when lilly

turned around it was the man dressed in white. the headache she had was now returning. the man said" are you lilly white ?" lilly nodded to the man half afraid and did not want to

say anything. the man said" good i have a message for you it is from your mother queen rose." lilly was cold and dizzy, then all that lilly saw was black. lilly had faited, when lilly

woke she was in her room. the man said " you had a fever and was cold so i took you into your room." lilly said "thanks and what is your name?" The servant looked shocked and

simply said" dear me i forgot to introduce myself, my name is Edward romous III, but you can call me Edward if you like." lilly looked like that name sounded really familiar. "Ahhh

you look like you realize me i am the servant of queen rose" lilly looked like the name also sound familiar to her. "who is this rose person you keep speaking of?" Edward looked

shocked " you don't remember any thing do you" said edward looking sad. " what are you talking about?" lilly saying with a curious look on her face. "Oh dear it is true you have

forgotten!" "I am sorry if i have forgotten someone important." "it is all right, ok do you want me to explain it to you?" lilly shook her head yes. then edward started to explain

every thing to lilly.

i hoped you liked the first chapter sorry it took me forever to finish this chapter i have been busy working on other things in my life. oh yeah please leave reviews and if you have suggestions for the story i will listen(read)and may write them in my story.