Thank you so much for my 5 reviews. bows to you all And for that I will do all of your requests. I'm still taking them,

This is about Cloudtail. Since Flamestar was the first to request. I'll do Ferncloud next I promise.

Bluestar sat in her den, sides heaving pitifully. A bird shreed somewhere far off and she hissed, her fur fluffing. StarClan! She spat. Why is my Clan filled with traitors? She looked around, not wanting a response from her so-called ancestors.

But your Clan isn't all traitors. A voice slid into her den. Bluestar couldn't place the voice, though she thought that it was a male. Young Cloudpaw doesn't believe in those silly stars either! He has his wits about him.

"Yes," Bluestar murmered. "But what about Swiftpaw, Brightpaw, and Thornpaw?"

Pah! Spat the voice. Trained by traitors! And they still grovel to StarClan.

"But Whitestorm is noble . . ." Bluestar murmered.

Loyal! The voice snarled. Hardly! Where is he when you really need him? NOWHERE! He fetches your Medicine cat to take care of you like you're some kit without a queen to suckle from!

"Yes," Bluestar whispered.

Give Cloudpaw his ceremony. You won't regret it.

(a.n the voice in Bluestar's head is just herself. I think that she may have suffered from schizophrenia)

"What should Cloudpaw's warrior name be?" Bluestar mused to herself. "Cloudheart?" She pondered, voicing the last name of Fireheart, "no." she decided. "Cloudfur?" She thought that sounded nice actually. She almost decided upon the name.

"Cloudfur!" She spat, it sounded like he descended from the skies where "StarClan" lived. She wanted something that sounded a bit original. Something that StarClan had no say in.

"Cloudtail," she murmered. Good! Yes! If she called him Cloudtail then it wouldn't sound like StarClan had given him the name. A cat's tail is a very important and distinct part of their body. One that they pride themselves in. Not StarClan.

"Cloudtail it is!" Bluestar purred.

Hehe. This one was a little harder. I don't know how long it will take me for Ferncloud . . . I have no idea what the Erin Hunters were thinking! lol. Reviews. Loved