Chapter 2
Hiya! I got 3 reviews, which is pretty close to 5 so I'll update. It won't be long cause I didn't get the right amount of reviews so deal with it! And if ya can't, oh well. Here it is.
Everything was in turmoil when Sandstorm came through the warriors den doing the hula!
"What's up?" She yelled across the clearing. Everyone stared at her then went back to what they were doing. "Du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du! Du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du, du!" Graystripe played the trumpet and Leopardstar burst in with a crown in hand and placed it onto Ashfur's head.
"I'm old so I am handing my rule over Riverclan to you, young one!" she said and entered the Thunderclan elder's den.
"Yippee!" Ashfur yelled and tripped over a rock and broke his toe.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! My Toe!!!!!!!!!!" he screamed and fainted on top of Onewhisker.
Cinderpaw ran around in circles saying, "Yip, yip, yip, yip, yip, yip, yip!"
"Brightpaw went up to her and asked her what she was doing.
"I'm a poodle! Yip, yip, yip, yip!!" Cinderpaw bit on Brightpaw's tail and began chasing her in circles.
"Greetings young felines!! I come in peace!" said a voice and all heads turned to seeā¦.
Hope you liked it! I don't think it was as funny as the first chapter but still. Keep on reviewing to find out what this strange thing is! And better, review and you get to learn about Brackenfur's kits! Review!!!
