It's going to start getting a little cliché so get ready for that. I rewrote the first chapter and changed some things so go read that before this if you want. I'm really hoping this chapter will be less OOC. Read away
I wish I owned Maximum Ride but sadly I don't
Max's POV
Knock Knock Knock. I am going to murder whoever woke me up. "Ella go get the door!" I yelled but the brat didn't hear me. Or she just didn't want to. I'm going with the later. I got off the couch and walked to the door ready to be very pissed off at whoever was there. That was until I opened it and saw a little girl with curly blonde hair and bright blue eyes. "Oh um hi. I'm Max what's your name?" "I'm Angel. My mommy said to ask the neighbors to come over for dinner at... um at.." She forgot the time. I start to smile a little bit until someone walks up behind her. "It's at 6." He said smirking. God I wanted to kill him he's so cocky and frustrating. Its Fang if you haven't figured it out by now "What are you doing here" I said trying to sound very very rude. "Guess what Maxie I'm your new neighbor. My mom's throwing a party today at 6 and she's inviting to whole neighborhood so don't worry you're not that special." I swear if he says one more word in that stupid little tone of his I'm going to kick him in the- "Hi Max who's this?" I was hoping Mom wouldn't come home for another few minutes so I could "forget" to tell her and I wouldn't have to go. "I'm Fang" He said then he held out his hand and smiled at her. Oh of course now he's going to act all innocent. "And this is my little sister Angel." Wait they were siblings? they were pretty much polar opposites. She has fair skin, blue eyes and blonde curly hair. He has tanned skin, black hair and black eyes with gold flecks in them that are actually really beautiful. No bad Max. Nothing about him is beautiful he is an annoying, cocky, self centered, jerk face that uses girls and probably smells weird. "Nice to meet you Angel. I heard what you said, tell your mom we'll be there at 5:30 to help her set up and get everything ready." No mom why you should hate him too you're supposed to be on my side. "Will do" Fang said with a smirk "Bye Max." I just glared at him then went back into my house. My mom called Ella downstairs to tell her about going to Fang's house at 5:30 and I went into my bedroom.
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"Come on please Max" "Ella I said no. You already picked out what I wore for school. I'm just going to wear this anyway." Ella was making a huge deal out of the going to Fang's house by changing her clothes and putting on even MORE makeup. I on the other hand refused to change out of my jeans and t-shirt that I put on after school. It's not like I actually care what he thinks anyway. Oh but you do Max and you know it shut up voice. Yes I have a voice in my head and yes it's weird.
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Sometimes I wonder if my mom thinks at all. She told me to go to kitchen and make pizza. As if I can actually cook. I burn everything I try to make and If I don't burn it then it tastes horrible. "Mom are you sure that's a good idea?" I said trying to help her remember. "Fang can help you won't you Fang?" She asked him. "Oh course" He had the fakest smile on his face. Just another reason that I don't think my mom has a brain. I followed Fang into the kitchen mumbling swear words as soon as I was sure mom couldn't hear me.
After we got inside Jerk-face grabbed the TV remote and flopped down on the couch. "Well you better get started." "Yah nice try. I can't cook so her here you go" Then I shoved the pizza into his hands. It's one that is already made you just have to bake it. "You just have to turn the oven on and put it in. It's really not that hard Maxie." "Don't call me Maxie. But you know what you're right, I'll go do it now." I fake smiled hoping he would buy it. I turned the oven on to some random temperature and shoved the pizza inside. "Where's your bathroom?" "Upstairs, it's the first left." Perfect "Okay thanks." Your probably getting a little confused by now but it'll make sense soon enough. I saw a room with closed French doors and made a guess that it was his parents room. I was right and started looking for scrapbooks and photo albums. I found one after a few minutes and started looking through it. "What are you doing up there?!" Crap Fang's probably wondering what's taking so long. I couldn't say anything because then he'd know I'm not in the bathroom. I took out one of the pictures from the photo album and shoved it back under the bed where I'd found it. I heard Fang coming up the stairs so I ran into the open closet and shut the door so there was only a crack. Dang this is a big closet. Focus Max if Fang finds you you're screwed. I hear him close the bedroom door. After a few minutes I stuff the picture in my pocket and creep down stairs to the back door. I walk outside and go sit on the swing like I was there the whole time. After a few minutes Fang comes outside with a burnt pizza and looking very mad. He starts walking over to me and before I could remember about the pizza he starts taking "What the hell Max I thought you were supposed to cook the pizza not burn." Yah he's pissed. I'm trying really hard not to smile but I don't it's working because he starts glaring even more. "I said I couldn't cook so it's not really my fault is it?" I say mockingly. He looks ready to murder. "Oh of course it's not Maxie" He says with the fakest smile and innocent voice.
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The party is finally over so I start walking to my house which did I mention is right next door? Because it's right next door. I go up to my room and start planning exactly what I'm going to do with the picture. If you're wondering why I grabbed well that's because someone needs to take Fang off his high horse. If you're wondering what the picture is then you're going to have to wait. After a while I have an idea. Off to the library.
Fang's POV
Max is so frustrating why can't she just make a pizza without screwing it up, and I'm pretty sure she did it on purpose. Hmm maybe I should do something to her just to piss her off.
There ya go chapter 2. Please review and tell me what you thought and how I can make it better. I'll try to update soon but no promises
