2nd chapter!
I really appreiate the reviews guys. Thanks it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :3
Also, vote on if i should have some lemon in my story in future chapters!
Hurry though, if there is going to be lemon its going to be, at the latest, its going to be in 3 chapters! i plan to make this story no longer then 12 chapters, and thats kind of stretching it. It's probably going to be 8-10, when i get to 5 though. I am going to start a new story, but i am still going to contiune this one, it might be an other Mai-HiME story or it might be a Kannazuki no miko.
random fact about the author: I love to skateboard, but i hate to rollarblade and ice skate, I actually broke my leg the first time I ice skated, true story. It was very painful.
Oh by the way, I know i don't have to bold when they talk . it was flashback i just wanted it to be easier to read and stick out a bit for the readers . I may be 13 but i am not an Baka.
Also, I am so sick and tired of reading stories of Shizuru getting jealous and Shizuru raving after Natsuki and stuff so i found it quite annoying. Or Shizuru was engaged to be married by or parents or something, so I decided to write something where Natsuki is the one that jealous, and Natsuki has some competition that maybe, shizuru wants? or maybe not xD
no one knows Oo
well maybe i do, but yeah.
i don't count
oh yeah i was wondering, I want to edit something in the previous chapter that someone pointed out well i exported it and i edit it but i really don't get out to put it back in oO
-goes in the corner and does circles with her index finger-
I am just a simple 13 year old... someone help me please? it will be greatly appreiated.
Natsuki stared at them in total shock; she felt a mixture of emotions, Anger, betrayal, disgust, shock; 'and jealousy…?' her subconscious asked. She shook her head fiercely 'no of course not, why would I be jealous of her'she thought bitterly. Shizuru turned away from the car where she was loading her suitcases and looked at Natsuki. The crimson eyed girl waved at her and smiled a smile that was only reserved for her. This sent warmth through Natsuki's body. Natsuki smiled back at her and road her motorcycle right next to the car. 'Okay… so it seems she didn't forget that I was suppose to pick her up, so why is Watanabe here?' she wondered.
"Well, I will be seeing you Watanabe-san" she coolly said. Kaede nodded and pulled her into an embrace. The shocked Shizuru slowly wrapped her arms around her waist and rested her head on her shoulder while looking at Natsuki with an apologetic smile that seemed to be meaning 'sorry for taking so long' Natsuki just rolled her eyes. 'That's not what is bothering you is it Nat-su-ki?' her subconscious teased. 'SHUT UP, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!' She yelled in her mind.
"Is everything alright Natsuki?" Shizuru asked in a concerned tone. The chestnut haired girl looked at her concerned yet curious, probably wondering what Natsuki was thinking about. "Uh… yeah everything's fine Shizuru" She look away embarrassed.
Shizuru looked like she was about to start teasing Natsuki, but for some reason she didn't. The older girl quickly changed the subject. "Watanabe-san do you have my carrying bag?" Shizuru asked now turned away from Natsuki. Kaede smiled at this, her eyes almost seemed to glow as if she had been waiting for her to ask. "hmm… maybe… I might have forgotten where I put it though…" she said smirking obviously lying. Shizuru sighed. "What do you want Watanabe-san?" She cringed as Shizuru addressed her once again in such a formal way. "Well before I wanted something a bit…different, but now I want you to call me by the name you use to call me, the really cute one." Shizuru's eyes seemed to widen at this. "What's wrong with Watanabe-san?" The chestnut haired girl asked.
The violet eyed girl seemed to be bewildered. "What's wrong with it? You're joking right? For one it sounds really weird and I hate it have been trying to convince you not to call me that all the time during the trip, but you never budged so I am going to make you call me the name you called me when we were kids" she said triumphantly .
Natsuki stiffened. 'So she went with Shizuru?' She didn't care though, it's not like she felt like she was being cheated on, even if she wasn't in a relationship, and it's not like she felt betrayed that Shizuru didn't tell her anything. No of course not, she didn't feel like that at all...right?
"Don't you want something else?" Shizuru pleaded. This bag must be very important, because it seemed that Shizuru really didn't want to do this. Kaede nodded smiling. "Alright, can I please have my bag… Kae-Kae-tan?" Shizuru said obviously hesitant and embarrassed. Natsuki tried to hide her laughter. Kae-Kae-Tan?' What was she in 3rd grade or something when she called her that?' Natsuki thought teasingly, she was definitely going to use that against Shizuru later. The older girl deserved a good teasing once in a while.
Kaede smirked. "Why of course Shizuru." She said while she went into the middle of car, lifted the seat and got the bag, she seemed to be carrying it carefully, like there was something that needed to treated with much care, like a baby or something. She walked back to Shizuru to offer her the bag, but right before Shizuru was about to grab it she pulled it back. "You also have to agree to call me that from now on until I say you can stop" she said smiling from ear to ear. "Fine." Shizuru said quietly, Kaede didn't seem like she believed her, but she didn't have much of a choice because Shizuru snatched the bag out of her hand. She quickly opened the bag a bit, as if to give it a bit of air, and then swung it over her arm gently. Natsuki was starting to wonder what was in the bag, but she decided that she wasn't going to ask, she wasn't one to pry. "Ready to leave, Natsuki?" The graceful girl asked. Natsuki nodded affirmatively. Shizuru gracefully got on the bike, yet she sat as far as she could from Natsuki, and grabbed her shoulders instead of wrapping her arms tightly around her waist like she usually does. Even though this bothered Natsuki she thought that Shizuru was just going to wrap her arms around her in the middle of the ride or sooner so she just sped off as fast as she could away from Kaede.
OMAKE:
Natsuki: AHAHAHAHA. YOU GIVE SUCH GAY NICKNAMES SHIZURU!
Shizuru: Ara! It's not my fault that author is mental and can't come up with anything good!
Vulnerable: Hey! I tried really hard to come up with that! Like I had to think about it for 10 minutes straight... I think.
Natsuki and shizuru: -shakes heads while their arms are crossed-
Vulnerable:-cries- You guys are such big bullies! -runs away- you'll regret this!!
Natsuki: Ah, good shes gone.
Shizuru: yep.
Natsuki:... sooo what now?
Shizuru: want to get funky?
Natsuki: sure!
Shizuru: oh no we can't get funky till author comes back!
Natsuki and Shizuru: COME BACK AUTHOR!!
A/N: -Tan is sort of a cute way of say -chan for younger girls, or just to make themselves look cute. In Tsubasa one of the characters use it to tease the other all of the time.
also children in japan usually give close friends shorten names to show closeness and err... cuteness?
It's a bit shorter than the other chapter, but i promise they will start to get longer and more fluff and other stuff-wink wink nudge nudge- if you know what i am saying xD.
You just have to vote for it :3
