Chapter two and I found out that I hate describtion and they say I need more of it, so I'm going to kick describtion's butt in this chapter (and probably fail too)
Stormwhisp yowled at the top of her lungs and saw cats had begun to leave camp already, she ran through the clumps of cats and to make sure everyone was okay and saw the flames reach the back of camp, the cries of young kits terrified at the sight of the large flames gave Stormwhisp an upset stomach.
"Help me!" Screamed a voice coming from the nursery, Stormwhisp ran towards the voice and saw that the nursary had become blocked by clumped ferns that must have lallen during the rush.
"I'm coming," said Stormwhisp pushing the ferns out of the way and saw that Russetbloom was inside and had begun kitting, "We have to get out of here, can you move?" Russetbloom shook her head and then winced as she went through more pain. "This isn't good." Stormwhisp looked over to see a tiny kit was lieing next to Russetbloom.
"I called him Firekit," Rasped Russetbloom as smoke began filling her lung and then licked the young kit and smiled, "Take care of him, please." Russetbloom closed her eyes for the final time and left Stormwhisp in silence with a orphan kit at her side.
"I will." Whispered Stormwhisp picking Firekit and running away from the flames that had leapped over the fencing because of the embers and ran to the survivors.
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"What happened, where's Russetbloom?" Asked Specklepelt looking around franticly for his mate.
"She died." Said Stormwhisp,
"No, she didn't she's hiding isn't she, she's just hiding," said Specklepelt looking towards the burnt out entrance, "Come out, this isn't funny."
"I'm sorry." Said Stormwhisp curling her tail around the greoving young tom,
"This is your fault," Hissed Specklepelt stepping foreward and turned to glare at Stormwhisp, "And I will have my revenge." he scratched Stormwhisp on the muzzle leaving a long scratch along Stormwhisp's face.
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"GET WILLOWHEART!" Screetched Stormwhisp as she started to go into labour, it had been three moons since the fire and her kit's had finally decided to come.
"I'll get her." Said Russlebreeze running out of the nursary and then coming back with Willowheart.
"I'm just going to check your stomach okay." Said Willowheart pressing her head against Stormwhisp's stomach, "There's three kits coming," Stormwhisp nodded her head and bit her lip from the pain and a tiny kit tumbled out, "It's a She-cat," Willowheart licked the new-born kit and watched for the other kits and soon another kit came out. "It's another she-cat," Willowheart watched as almost imediatly after the last kit came out, "It's a tom." Willowheart licked both of the kits and smiled as they move slowly towards their mother.
"They're beautiful," said Stormwhisp curling around the three kits "I don't this could get any better."
Yeah I failed at kicking describtion's butt :( but I did kick story lines butt :) so I'm happy.
