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hey everyone! sorry i just re-read my first chapter of this story and thought it was really really really lame!! sorry, but i deleted it... oh well! heres how i want the new story to be like! enjoy!


Max's POV

"Nudge! Hurry up! Just being back in this place makes me freaked out and scared!" Angel whispered.

We were all down on our knees behind a big row of old computers.

And we were in, yup! You guessed it, the school.

"Uh- huh. Yea, sure." Nudge said slowly, too absorbed in her work to realize what we were saying.

She had both of her hands on the side of computer as the screen flashed with a billion different images.

"Wow, ok… I got it!" she whispered excitedly.

"Good, now can we get out of here?!" Gazzy whispered already heading for the door.

This place has been deserted for years it looks like.

I mean maybe no one has been here since we blew up itex in Germany three years ago.

You're probably wondering what the hell were doing back in the school.

Iggy got paranoid about that because they haven't attacked us for so long, they're probably planning something really, really, big.

So he made all of us come back down here to check it out.

"Yea lets go!" angel whispered, crawling right after Gazzy. "Fine, let's go." I said.

Nudge grabbed the last of the pages from the printer that she had printed out.

"Fang, follow up the end!" I said as I flew out the door and up in the sky.

Then after me, Iggy, then nudge, then Gazzy, then angel, and finally fang, following up the end as I told him to.

We flew for a couple hours and finally stopped in front of a big beautiful house in the middle of nowhere.

Our home. (Courtesy of Dr. Martinez.)

As they all landed, I called out, "ok guys, lets all go sit at the kitchen table."

We all walked in the door and toward the kitchen table.

We all sat down and total laid down in the blue dog bed angel made me buy for him.

"Alright guys, here's what I found when I was going through the computer at the school," Nudge said authoritatively.

She threw all the papers down onto the table. I picked up the first paper.

"Plan 629," I read aloud, "A. Find Carly Replay. B. kidnap her. C. test on her. D. make her electric. E. if it doesn't work, kill her. Ok. If this is how all their plans look, then it's a lot less complicated than I thought," I said.

"No, trust me, it was very complicated. I just couldn't understand what it was saying, so I made it translate into easier words." Nudge said.

"We've got to save this girl!!" Angel said.

"I couldnt agree more." I said.

Okay then let's get started. I grabbed my laptop from the counter and placed it on the table.

I opened up safari and typed, "Carly Replay" in the Google search bar. I clicked on the first entry.

It came up with, "hey! Welcome to Carly Replays blog!"

"Perfect," I whispered as I kept reading on.

"Whatsup? So, let me tell you a little bit about myself!

Top five things I luv 2 do!

1. Hanging out with my BFFL's!

2. COMPETITIVE CHEERLEADING!!

3. Hot guys!

4. School, yes I know, that's kind of lame!

5. Music!! I absolutely love competitive cheerleading!

It's practically my life! Right now I'm on Aero Elite All Starz! I absolutely luv this team! Anyways I gotta go! Write more later!! Luv, Carly!! ;)"

Haha, wow, this is going to be easy

. I typed Aero Elite All Starz in on the Google search bar and hit enter.

I clicked the first link to the website and it said the location.

This is too easy. "guys! I found her. Lets head out." I said as I grabbed a bag and headed up towards my room.

I put as much stuff into the big bag as I could and went back downstairs.

I saw everyone else had done the same.

"Let's go," I said and walked outside and popped my wings open.

We flew out in the same formation as before. I knew where the town was, so it wasn't that far.

This could almost be fun…


Heya!! any suggestions?? i know you do!! please please tell me!! thanks soo much for reading this chapter!! did cha like it?? love it?? hate it?? please review!! i know you see that pretty purple and mesmorizing little review button!! CLICK IT!! i know u want to!! it wont bite... hard. please please review!!

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