A whole new world
This is my first attempt at a fan fiction/story at all so any reviews /constructive criticism is welcome to help me improve my writing skills.
Disclaimer unfortunately I don't own any characters from either the Harry Potter series or the Chronicles of Narnia series.
Sorry about the wait I was in an area where my computer couldn't get any internet access.
Previously
I gasped at the sight before me as I knew I was no longer in London.
Chapter 2
I stepped of the platform and tucked my wand back in the holster hidden in the sleeve of my arm, I looked around the place and realised it was no longer the back wall of the station but a huge beach of sorts but it looked beautiful. The blue-green see washed up on the golden sun-kissed beach and the high rocky cliff. I turned around to find the other 4 passengers looking around in awe. "Do you think we're back Peter?" asked the smallest girl and by the looks of it the youngest of the 4, she was about 5 foot in height and had bright blue eyes that had a youthful shine to them, her long mahogany hair was held back by a single flower encrusted head band that was pushed behind her ears. She smiled brightly at a golden haired boy with the same blue eyes that matched her own.
Peter looked around in taking all the sights before him and muttered "yes". I stood aside from them watching as they nattered between themselves, I smiles to myself as they reminded me of Harry and Ron during our time as the 'Golden trio' back at Hogwarts. My smile quickly turned sour as I thought back to Ronald, the back stabbing bastard I growled mentally. The last member of their group was a girl no scratch that a woman around the age of 20. She was taller that my 5ft 3inches she was about 5ft 9inches or so. Long mahogany hair, presumably like her sisters, which flowed freely down her back and ended near her slender hips. Her bright green eyes looked around and absorbed everything in; a look of concentration plastered on her face as she ignored the others bickered between themselves.
Taking a deep breath to calm my nerves I walked up to the group. "E-excuse me?" I asked in a hopefully friendly tone and not a shy and small one which would have shown how nervous I was to be in a stranger place with these strange people for company. I must have really shocked the one named Peter as he turned and blatantly stared at me as if he forgot that I was on the platform waiting for the same tram so him. However that didn't last as he quickly composed his face and demanded, "Who are you?" in a deadly serious tone. Standing my ground, like a true Gryffindor, I stared right back and replied in a strong voice "Hermione Jean Granger. But who are you and where are we?", as I was saying this I gestured to his companions and to the beach we were standing on.
He looked at me for a while, as if debating I was telling the truth about who I was. And if I really didn't know where we were. "I am Peter Pevensie. This is Lucy", he gestured to the smallest girl in the group," Susan", pointing to the other woman, before Peter could continue the boy that caught my eye interrupted his introduction, "And I'm Edmund Pevensie, a pleasure to meet you Miss. Hermione", he smiled as he walked over to me offering his hand to shake. However he surprised me completely when he took my hand and kissed my knuckles, feeling his soft lips against my hand caused shivers to run down my spine. I got lost looking into his onyx eyes, we must have been staring at each other for a while as we the attention of the others, as Peter cleared his throat, I reluctantly pulled my hand free and looked away blushed bet red, my discomfort didn't last long as the one Lucy exclaimed," Welcome to Narnia".
I looked at him like he'd lost his mind, what in the hell was Narnia. I know every country, state and town there is in both the wizarding world and muggle, so he had to have hit his head one too many times as there was no such place as Narnia that I can recall.
"There's no such place as Narnia…is there", I questioned them and myself. They gave each other worried looks, "Do you mean that this is your first time here, you've never been before, because we have," Peter opened his arms wide to suggest the open area we're in, as if he was trying to jog my memory of this place but it wasn't working, so I just stared back with a blank expression.
Peter sighed and ran his hand through his hair; he started to open his mouth to say something, "Really!" Lucy exclaimed beating him to it, "Yeah, why have you been here before?" I asked, "Yeah, we were brought here a couple of years ago when Narnia was ruled by the White Witch", replied Lucy, her smile fading a bit. "Who's the White Witch?" I questioned, feeling self-conscious, as I was a witch myself, I really hoped this so called White Witch was a good guy, so that they don't have any prejudice issues against other witches and wizards so that I'm safer strange in this place.
Edmund replied this time but exhaling loudly, "The White Witch was evil and wanted all of Narnia frozen, covered in ice and snow, but us and Aslan defeated her in this big war". So much for her being a good witch, sigh. During my inner dialog Edmund continued, "That's why we were chosen by Aslan to become the new kings and queens of Narnia". What they were royalty; I stood gapping at Edmund and the other Pevensie family members. Seeming unaware of my confusion, "I was named King Edmund the Just", stated Edmund proudly, sticking out him broad chest. Glaring at Edmund, Peter continued for him, "I was high King Peter the Great, Queen Lucy the Valiant and Queen Susan the Gentle".
I stood, my gaze traveling from face to face, debating whether they were telling the truth, judging by the serious looks on their faces they were telling the truth. I let out a loud breath, "Ok then, why were you in London then, if you rule Narnia". This time Susan spoke up, "Well you see we ruled Narnia for about 20 years, and then whilst we were outriding we came across a lamp post that Lucy thought looked familiar," she paused to see if I had taken that information in, I nodded to tell her to continue, " Well anyway we recognised it at the lamp post that was near the wardrobe that we first came through to get to Narnia, we went through the wardrobe and fell through the door, we were expecting years to have passed but it was only a couple of hours in the normal world, we looked to see if we could go back but it had turned back into a normal wardrobe."
I shuffled on the spot taking in what they had just said; it was believable as I am a witch so I know all about weird thing happening, so I believed her. "Ok then, do you think we should look around for help than". Susan smiled, "Yes, I think that's a great idea."
If only I knew what I was getting myself into.
Thanks for reading my second chapter, please leave reviews of how you thought it went thanks again.
Thank you for giving me a chance.
