Sorry for the long period w/o updating. Here's a new one. Enjoy.
Can't You See It?
Can't you see it?
The look I hold
My face lights up
While yours remains cold
Can't you hear it?
The thud of my heart
A soft, longing beat
Yet we stay apart
Can't you feel it?
The chills down my spine
A cold, restless shiver
When your hand brushes mine
Can't you see it?
My sad, gazing eyes
Perpetual sorrow
The look you despise
Please review to tell me what you thought. Constructive criticism always welcome.
