AN :Hey guys! OMG! YOU GUYS! I ALREDY WITHIN 30 MINUTES OF POSTING HAVE 4 REVIEWS! I LOVE YOU GUYS! I update pretty quickly unless I'm busy or forget. So anyway, here is another chapter! And don't forget, Constructive criticism is helpful! So are reviews! Oh, and unless I say differently, It's in Tris's POV

It has been 3 days since Tobias cheated on me. I am staying at Christina's place because, and I quote, "After a break up, a person is in a Critical condition and can't be left alone." However, I feel like such a burden. Will has to sleep on the couch, and Christina on the floor, so I can have the bed. I have tried to talk her into letting me sleep on the couch or floor. But Christina refuses to let me. "You are in critical condition. Especially since you guys broke up in front of the WHOLE compound." Wow. I forgot everyone in the compound ate at the same time. Great, more people that I was hoping knew of the break up. Tobias is out probably sucking EVERY GIRLS DAMN FACE OFF! I tear up again. "Oh, honey. Come here!" Even though I hate it when she calls me honey, I need a shoulder to cry on. Don't we all? I sob for what seems like hours, only to turn out to be 20 minutes. I look at Christina's shirt. "Oh! I am soooo sorry Chris! I know how much you love that shirt!" I felt bad. She wore that shirt everyday after she did laundry. Now there is a big black stain on the shoulder of the soft lavender colored shirt, from my mascara. "It's ok Tris. There were A LOT more in the store. I can always buy a new one." That makes me feel better. "I'm going to get us so breakfast ok? I don't want you running in to him." Chris says narrowing her eyes when she says 'him'. She leaves and i sit on the couch next to Will. He's watching Family Guy. I tear up again. WE used to watch this. Will notices and wraps an arm around my shoulder. I cry into his shirt. "I can change it if you want." I shake my head. "no, it's fine. I don't wanna ruin your fun, just because we used to watch this ."I say through tears. I don't like to say his name. It just reminds me he did not ever want me. He probably told me his real name so I would ether get scared away of dating him thinking he would beat me like his father, or blab it to everyone, and break up with me by that. I hear Christina open the door, but I'm still crying into Will's shirt. "Oh honey. I knew I shouldn't have left you!" I look up. Will has a look on his face that says, "I've was here the whole time." Sure enough, "I've been here the whole time!" says Will. "Christina shrugs. I laugh. It's been a while since I laughed. "Hey there's a smile!" Will says. I laugh even more. Something pops in my mind that abruptly makes me stop laughing and think. "What is it Tris? What are you thinking?" Christina says. "We should throw a party on the Senator Building." I say. They both are taken aback by this. The building is 20 stories high but wide. It will hold many people "W-what? A-are you sure?" I nod. "Ok well, Will run down the halls and tell everyone, I'll go to the cafeteria and Tris..." "I'll go to the pit." We split up, I run to the pit. I stand in the middle of the pit and yell, "party tonight! Meet on the Senator Tower tonight at 10:00! Alcohol will be present!" A bunch of cheers spring out from the pit. I walk back to Chris's apartment. Many people give me pity glances. I hate that. One person even says, "He was a jerk anyway." I never found out who said that.

FOUR POV

I hear a feminine shout coming from the pit saying there's a party on the Senator Tower tonight. I think it was Tris. I feel HORRIBLE for cheating on her. I don't know what came over me. I had such a beautiful, brave, kind, honest, smart, and selfless girl, and I through that away for some red headed slut. I am coming to that party. I am coming alone, but by the end of the night, I'll have the girl of my dreams back in my arms.

SECRET POV

Tris is now single. Yes, I have my chance. However, I must make my move quick. She is up for grabs by any person. I must be the first. I do not want her to be someone like Zeke's or Uriah's or worse...Four's again. I have always liked Tris. No one knew it. Not even her. But I have to have. She's in my dreams. In my eyes. She just needs to be in my world.

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-Trissypoo64