I've tried to make the paragraphs shorter in this one, edited chapter one as well to make them shorter.
Hopefully this turns out as good as the first chapter.
Sorry to keep you guys waiting for so long but you know…school comes first
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"Come on Sasuke!" someone yelled.
Punch!
"You'll never keep your title like this!"
Punch, Punch!
"You are a fucking pussy! Come on! Get out of it! Just forget the woman already!"
PUNCH, SNAP, CRASH!
"Crap…"
Sasuke turned towards his substitute trainer, his blazing red, who had been shouting insults at him for half an hour. He could take anything he shouted but not that, never that. The black haired man nervously stepped back before saying "Erm…you can take five now".
Sasuke was about to advance towards the bastard, ready to mangle his face, when he felt a gloved hand touch his bare shoulder, stopping him. "Come on Sasuke, we'll start your training now" a smooth voice stated. Turning around Sasuke saw his mentor, Kakashi Hatake. His blazing eyes were slowly consumed with black, a smirk adorning his perfect face. "You fucking perv, where were you?" Sasuke mumbled. His trainer: a weird man to say simply. His hair was a grey colour and stood on its ends, one of his eyes covered with a bandana, his face hidden by a mask; hiding his nose and mouth. Yes, a complete nutter. "Just come with me Sasuke. I'd like to discuss some…issues with you" Kakashi drawled out. Sasuke nodded but not before turning back towards the substitute and giving him a harsh glare making the man shudder with fear.
"Okay Sasuke, we'll hire a new substitute since you don't 'like' this one and buy a punch bag that hopefully won't break when you decide to get pissed off" Kakashi stated, scribbling down the order onto a blank piece of paper. "Okay, well, I'll start by answering your question from earlier, 'Where was I?' I was busy rearranging you a match since it's been five months already and you need to protect your title of 'Champion Boxer of Konoha'. You're up against Gaara from the Sand City. Beat him and you have the title of being the best in two cities. Lose and…well I guess you know" Kakashi explained. Sasuke simply nodded but didn't leave the room. He knew there was something else his mentor wanted to say. "The match is in a week and yes I know this is short notice but that Sand bastard wanted the match earlier, something about his girlfriends' birthday coming up. But anyway, there is something else I would like to talk to you about…this Sakura girl…" Kakashi trailed off when Sasuke glared at him. This conversation was over. Sasuke stormed out of the room and into the showers.
'Bastards' Sasuke mentally cursed. He was standing under a shower, the warm water providing a soothing feeling on his aching muscles. He glared at the tiled wale with pure hate. Why couldn't they understand! He loved her so how could he just forget! Yes the Uchiha was in love but was too stupid to know at the time. Figures that something like that should happen to him! Either way, the world knew that Sasuke Uchiha was bonkers for a girl but of course…no one knew who the girl was except for his close friends. Karin? Bah that bitch had been on his case, ever since that day 5 years ago. But like he gives a shit! All that mattered to him right now was protecting his title of Konoha City's Boxing Champion and finding Sakura. That Sand prick Gaara would die in the ring and then Sasuke would sneer in his face with victory. His thoughts then darted back towards the pink haired nerd. It was her birthday next week as well. Yes, he did remember, for 5 years straight. He would give anything to have her by his side once more…anything. You should choose your words carefully though…
Kakashi was still sitting in his office thinking about what Sasuke did. 'This Sakura girl really has him pent up. I've known Sasuke all my life and this is not the Sasuke I knew. The once carefree lad who would smile his fat egotistical head off has been reduced to a shivering ice cube, a heart of stone with only room for two ambitions in his life. One is earning the World Champion Boxing Title and impressing his parents. The second is being to have his ex girlfriend Sakura cheering him on. Or is that three? Either way…I hope he finds this girl. Poor lad, if only she knew what he was going through…what she had turned him in to.
2 DAYS LATER:
Sasuke was currently performing some knuckle press ups, his new trainer sitting beside him. His name was Orochimaru and frankly Sasuke did not like him but he was undeniably a great trainer. "All right Sasuke that's enough. Take a five minute break and then we'll start on the weights" he stated, his yellow eyes trailing down Sasuke's form. Sasuke simply nodded and made his was, as fast as he could, towards the locker rooms and away from the deranged man. His match was 5 days from now and Sasuke felt very confident. He glanced at the calendar hanging on the tiled walls. Today was Sunday. He had something planned for today but he couldn't remember. 'Damn Naruto, the bastard, is coming to the gym today' he thought miserably. Naruto was another boxer and Sasuke's best friend. They were complete opposites. Naruto was loud and annoying and ate way too much and he wore orange trademark boxers and…the list could go on. Suddenly, Sasuke's phone began to vibrate as he was rooting through his locker for his wallet. Picking it up and pressing the green telephone button he greeted the caller without glancing at the I.D.
(A/N: a very long phone conversation so get ready and read on)
"SASUKE-TEME"
Oh no.
"Naruto you loud Baka" Sasuke yelled back.
"That's not very nice Sasuke!" he whined.
"Dobe, why are ringing. Don't you know I'm training today?"
"Yes I do actually but I think you forgot that I'm coming in today to help you!"
"I was so close to forgetting but you had to remind me"
"Bastard"
"Dead last"
"Sakura lover"
"…"
"Sorry…"
"It's ok"
"You still like her huh?"
"Duh"
"Che, what about Karin"
"That bitch can go screw herself"
"She'd rather have you do it for her"
"Gross"
"Tell me about it"
"No, why did you have to say it!"
"Because it makes you unbelievably uncomfortable"
"Prick"
"Thank you"
"What time are coming to the gym?"
"I'm out the door right now"
"Alright"
"It's Sakura's Birthday next Sunday you know"
"How could I forget…"
"Poor Sasuke, Sakura whipped you bad and unintentionally too"
"Shut up"
"Whatever"
"Where's Hinata. Aren't you supposed to be taking her out today?"
"No she cancelled since her family need her today, she's got relatives coming over, but she felt bad so I'm going with her next Saturday, I'm taking her to watch 'Drag Me to Hell'"
"Isn't that a horror movie?"
"Yup"
"Dobe Hinata shits it off that kind of stuff"
"Yeah but she'll have me to cling on to whilst were watching so…yeah"
"Idiot"
"I know I'm such a genius"
"You wish"
"Have you met Shikamaru or Neji yet?"
"Nope but I think they may be coming to my match against Gaara, this Friday"
"I think every Konoha boxer is, especially Lee and Kiba"
"Nice to know I have support"
"Yup even Ino and the girls are coming"
"Great…" Sasuke sarcastically groaned.
"Ino said she's meeting her long lost friend or something at the match"
"Really…"
"Okay, I'm inside the gym now…why is the receptionist drooling"
"Ignore her, she always does that"
"Right, is she new?"
"Yeah"
"Hey I'm inside your training room. Where are you?"
"Locker room, I'm on a break"
"Well get your ass here!"
"Trust me Naruto this break is all I have to get away from my new trainer"
"What happened to the old one?"
"Sacked"
"Ah. You got Orochimaru?"
"Yeah, is he there?"
"Yeah he's talking to some red head dude"
"What red head…"
"Oh shit…Gaara"
Sasuke snapped his phone shut and bolted out of the changing rooms. 'That bastard, what is he doing here!' he mentally raged. As he approached his training gym doors, he slowed his pace before opening them. True enough, he saw Gaara, smirking at him. Sasuke glared in reply. "Sasuke-teme!" he was suddenly jumped on by Naruto. "Gah NARUTO!" Sasuke fumed. "Yeah dude I know you missed me too" Naruto grinned, and ducked when Sasuke attempted to punch him. He tsk-ed before saying "Wow Sasuke I think your loosing your touch" but felt a hard punch on his head. "MY BRAIN CELLS" the blonde yelled.
"You don't have any to lose Naruto" a new voice stated. They all turned to see Kakashi walking through the doors. "KAKASHI YOU PERVERETD MAN!" Naruto yelled before enveloping him in a hug. Kakashi sighed.
"I'm not a pervert Naruto"
"And I'm stupid" Naruto sarcastically stated.
"HEY!"
"What ever Naruto" Sasuke smirked when the blonde fumed. How he loved aggravating his best friend.
"Any way, why are you here Mr. Gaara?" Kakashi openly questioned. No point in beating around the bush, he guessed.
"I'm here to speak with Uchiha…in private" Gaara replied, his devilish smirk, still stuck on his face. He was up to something.
"Fine" Sasuke mumbled, before walking towards a corner, Gaara following.
"What the fuck do you want?" Sasuke seethed.
"I'm only enemies with you in the ring Sasuke so I asking to have a civilised conversation" he stated.
Sasuke glared at him before nodding.
"I'm here with a proposal. A shadowed wager if you will" Gaara explained. A shadowed wager was like underground dealing between boxers, trainers and managers. They could offer money, cars, titles, anything to bribe their opponent to lose. Sasuke had been offered many but always refused but something about Gaara's proposal intrigued Sasuke and inflated his already large than large ego. Gaara was afraid to lose! He was afraid of the mighty Uchiha!
"Go on" Sasuke urged, attempting to not show his interest.
"I want you to lose the match on Friday"
Sasuke sneered.
"You have something to offer or did you come empty handed?"
"I have something that I think you'll find quiet interesting" he whispered, noticing Kakashi, Naruto and Orochimaru were looking in his direction.
Sasuke quirked an eyebrow
"My girlfriend" Gaara stated, a large smirk on his face.
"What the…fuck?" Sasuke muttered.
"Before you judge the offer let me-"
"I could have any girl I like any time Gaara so why should your offer interest me?"
"Because-"
"And no I'm not a virgin either, if you have bribed this 'girlfriend' of yours to take away something 'precious' from me-"
"Look, it's nice to know that you're not a virgin and Sasuke only girls cherish there virginity and no she ain't some hooker either. Quiet the opposite actually-"
"Right but how is this bitch supposed to impress me?"
"This 'bitch'-"
"No" Sasuke stated.
Silence
"I would consider it one last time before you actually repeat your answer"
Now Sasuke was confused. Why was this girl so special?
Just then the double doors opened up. Sasuke felt his heart stop when he recognised who walked in.
Sakura…
No please! This can't be happening…
He turned to Gaara in shock. "Her name is Sakura…someone you have been searching for, for 5 years" he stated, enjoying how the tables have turned.
"I'm willing to offer her as a wager, if you lose you get her, but you know that would also mean, me gaining your title. If I lose however, you gain the Sand title but…lose something you've been chasing for years"
Sasuke couldn't believe it. He looked towards Sakura. She was wide eyed, her jaw slightly open. She was shocked to see him as well. This made Sasuke's heart flutter. Would she be happy…or reject him…
Sorry again, that I made you wait and all.
Hope you like it.
Next update hopefully won't take as long.
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Oh and here's some previews to some stories I've written. Give me a shout on which is best: I'll post the story when I've updated all the other ones, like when i'm way ahead on the otehr stories.
The Satanic Star: (Horror)
Screams erupted from the dark church that lay high on a tall mountain and yet the village was deserted. Not a person in sight as the mist clouded the desolate streets. Thunder clapped and rain pelted down on one of the Church's stained glass windows and as the lightning flashed, the image of a satanic star with a four horned goats' skull inside it appeared. A small stream of blood flowed out from the skull and underneath it was a woman quivering; her legs spread open to reveal her womanhood and her eyes completely black as blood flowed into her mouth. On closer inspection you could notice a red liquid flowing out from the edge of the glass which looked too much like blood. Again, the scream erupted from with in the stone walls of the Church mixing with the dark organ music but this time a maniacal chuckle played with the tune. Inside the Church, the only difference was that it was dry with patches of blood and candles provided an eerie light, making every object seem like an enemy. Sobs resounded through out the hollow room of prayer. As you looked down the Church, benches which had once been used for prayer now had blood splattered across them; stars and odd writing were drawn in blood on the once holy walls. As you carried on to the end of the room where the cross was meant to be for everyone to see, two figures could be noticed. One was pinned to the symbolic cross, the other watching in sick amusement. It was a woman who was tied to the cross, her arms bound by a metal wire which had dug into her skin, making her bleed. Her black hair was plastered to her face with sweat and blood, tears falling from her blue eyes onto her bare chest before dripping off from her nipples. She was bare for the world to observe but in truth she would rather let the world see her like this then the man that stood before her.
A Pirated Tale: The White Witch Ruins (Adventure)
"Come on" Sakura mumbled, pulling him inside the tower with her, failing to notice the darkly dressed figure who was scaling the side of the building at a very fast pace. 'Akito was really that worried?' Sakura thought, a small smile on her face as she ran down a corridor, Darien following closely behind. "Our village is about to be destroyed and your…smiling?" Darien muttered. She blushed but continued running up a flight of stone stairs which curved in a spiral manner. 'This bell was the best idea yet! Hopefully our neighbouring villages will hear us and come to our aid' Sakura thought as she pushed open the bell room door.
Darien walked passed her and stood in the middle of the room, between the bell and herself. "You know they should really think about redecorating this UGH!"
Sakura's eyes widened when a sand bag flew right into Darien, sending him skidding across the floor and into a stone wall. She ran towards him, kneeling down she shook him wildly. "DARIEN YOU BASTARD WAKE UP!" she yelled but stopped her rant when she heard the creaking of rope, turning around she saw another sand bag coming towards her. On instinct, Sakura readied her fist, before smashing it into the object, breaking it from the rope and letting it fly into the wall across, sand bursting out. Her eyes suddenly widened. 'I so have to be hearing things'. A chuckle echoed through the room. She was officially freaked out. Wasting no more time, she pulled out one of her twin blades which rested in a holster at her waist and ran for the bell. Just as the dagger was about to make contact, she felt a large hand grasp her own. Looking up, she was met with the most beautiful sight she had ever seen. A pale man with onyx eyes started into her own green ones, his jet black hair, tickling her face since he was so close to her. He was a head taller than her and she could feel how muscular he was. He smirked at her, and that was all it took to make Sakura wrench out of his grasp.
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