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I am sorry if my first chapter was a little confusing for some reason my page breaks would not go in but I (Note from Laura: When she says I, she really means Laura) have fixed the problem.
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Lorelai didn't know what to do. She was naked laying in her best friends arms. This was the man she always wanted something more with but promised herself it would never happened. But it did. Only she can't remember anything. Her pounding head wasn't helping. She needed to get out of there before he woke up.
Somehow, Lorelai was able to wiggle out of Luke's grasp. She had to get out of there. She turned and looked at the clock. It was 6:00 in the morning. Oh god I need coffee!
Lorelai had just gotten dressed when she heard a groan coming from the direction of Luke's bed. All she had to do was put on her shoes and then she could get out of there. All she had to do was stay quite and she was home free.
"Lorelai"
She was busted. Luke had seen her. Oh god what could he be thinking. Most likely the same thing you thought. Stop! There is no proof that we had sex!
"Lorelai what are you doing here?" Luke asked "And why am I naked?"
Lorelai being Lorelai and not knowing what to say decided to make something up "Oh this is just a dream go back to sleep."
"This is a dream?"
"Yes"
"What the hell is going on Lorelai and how can you think I'm that stupid?"
"Ok I don't know what's going on. I just woke up here in your …bed with you, and …naked like you." Lorelai said with her head down not being able to look in his eyes.
"So we…I mean we had… I am…" Luke said not being able to find the right words.
"Well there's a chance but it's not for sure I mean we might not have."
"Wells there's a really good chance that we did, I mean do you remember anything form last night?"
"Well" Lorelai said coming to sit next to Luke on his bed. Only when she sat down did she realize he was still naked and only covered be a very thin sheet. "I remember that you asked me up stairs to talk and then there was beer and then more beer and then a hangover."
"Well I definitely remember that part but do you remember anything between the beer and the hangover?"
"I don't know all I can think of is my headache"
"Ok I have some aspirin in the kitchen let me get dressed and will talk over breakfast."
"No I have to go home she said" Lorelai said as she got up and headed to the doors.
"Lorelai we need to talk about this"
The only reply he got was her slamming the door and running downstairs.
"Well that didn't go to well" Luke said talking to himself.
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Lorelai went out the back door of the diner so the wondering eyes of Stars Hollow wouldn't see her. When she got home, Rory was there on the couch.
"Mom where have you been I've been up all night waiting. I was worried." She said jumping up to see her mother.
"I'm sorry I was at Luke's," She said and immediately regretted it.
"You were there all Night?"
Knowing what must be going through her daughters head she had to explain. "We had a few beers and I slept on his couch." Or lie!
"Oh well next time you better call young lady."
"Yes ma'am"
Lorelai went up stairs and toke a shower and got dressed. She wanted to go back to bed but her mind kept wondering. What was Luke like in bed? Shouldn't she know since last night they… you know. She couldn't stop thinking about what it was like to kiss him. She couldn't remember but that didn't stop her from wanting to know. She kept picturing it in her mind; she could almost feel his hands on her body.
"Stop this Lorelai there is nothing between you, just one stupid drunken night!"
Then it hit her like a car crashing into her. We didn't use protection. Oh, god I'm going to get pregnant and everything is going to be screwed up. What if he doesn't want anything to do with the baby? No wait this is Luke not Christopher. He's going to be a good father. Wait you don't even know if you're pregnant yet.
Lorelai walked around like a zombie all day. She couldn't think of anything but what had happened. How could I be so stupid! It didn't help that her day was crap. Michel had talked to some of his relatives so he's accent was even thicker than usualLorelai just wanted this week to be over with!
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It was Friday night dinner. Great! Lorelai hadn't had any good coffee in days. She didn't want to go to the diner because she didn't know what to say. Rory had noticed that Lorelai had been avoiding the diner but just thought of it as Luke and Lorelai in another fight because they're too stupid to get together.
Lorelai rang the doorbell not being able to convince Rory to say that they just got a phone call from the hospital saying that Lorelai was switched at birth. As always, a new maid answered the door. Why can't Emily just keep a maid! Drinks were pleasant maybe because Richard wasn't there so Emily couldn't just focus on Rory. The real trouble started when Emily started to smile.
"Why are you smiling like that?" Lorelai asked
"What are you talking about?" Emily asked trying to be clueless.
"You're smiling"
"I'm happy"
"That's not your "I'm happy" smile"
"Well what smile is it Lorelai?" still playing dumb
"It's your "I've got something on Lorelai smile"" come on lets just get it over with.
"Rory your mother must be very tired," Emily said now ignoring Lorelai.
"She works a lot and I don't think she has had much coffee lately," Rory said thinking of Luke and how he to had been acting weird and even avoids Rory.
"I know that smile; I grew up with that smile"
"Tell me about school" Emily asked still smiling
Well, my French final went pretty well"
"You can't change the subject. I know the smile." Lorelai said. She was going to get to the bottom of this.
"What ever you say dear" Now she was bating Lorelai
"I've even used it a few times myself"
"Mom" Rory wanted to stop this before a fight broke out. It had been a good dinner so far and she wanted to keep it that way.
"So tell me about parent's day," Emily said dropping to bomb!
"What?"
"Parent's Day? Next Wednesday? When all the parents are supposed to go to the classes with their children all day long?"
"The Chilton newsletter came out today" My god Rory just needs to give me that dam letter so I can skim the first page before we come here.
"Yup" Rory said
"Right" Lorelai said
"You didn't read yours?" Emily asked knowing the answer
"Not yet"
"Ah"
"But you already knew that"
"Well…"
"Hence the smile"
"Lorelai, you're really being silly. There's no evil plan a foot here. I simply brought up a subject I thought we could all talk about. "
"Oh right." And Hitler loved all the Jewish.
"I'll try another subject - the color blue is very pleasant isn't it?"
"Mom not everybody can wait outside the mailbox for the Chilton newsletter to arrive and then instantly memorize the contents in three seconds."
"I'd like to weigh in on the blue color subject please." Please don't fight.
"You have your priorities far be it from me to question them. "
"Just because I don't read the newsletter doesn't mean I don't care about my daughter."
"So are you going?"
"To what?"
"To parent's day!"
"Why don't we talk about it next Friday when I've actually read the newsletter. I guarantee it'll be more fun."
"We could except for the fact that parents day is next Wednesday."
"Wednesday?"
"Yup."
"If we talked about it on Friday then you would've missed it."
"Wednesday huh?"
"Its ok mom, you don't have to be there."
"I guess we can talk about how you missed it."
"I'm won't miss it." My god woman why are you so cruel.
"Mom it's not a big deal, you're busy."
"You know what, I'll go!"
"What?"
"Why not? You have to work. I, as you have insinuated, have no life, therefore I will go sit with Rory at parent's day."
"I'm not busy, I'm going. I will be there, that is it. End of story ok?" I can't believe you want to go to this thing so bad, but it is Emily!
"Fine."
"Fine."
"So did you read on page two about the mother/daughter talent show?"
Lorelai chokes on her food. Of course. Lorelai knew there was no talent show but you have to wonder with Emily.
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It was Wednesday! Parent's day. Great! She couldn't even get a good cup of coffee. I mean in all the years of drinking coffee she cannot even make a good cup. What did Luke do to make his so great. Now she had to go see her ex. Stupid parent's day. Now that Max and Lorelai were broken up Max had been grading Rory harder than other students. She just had to go and talk to Max and straiten things out.
Of course, Mr. Medina's class was first. Great no time to prepare. After class, we talk.
The end of class came too soon for Lorelai.
"So you go on ahead ok. I'm going to talk to Max for a second."
"Please be nice."
"I will, I will."
Then it was just Lorelai and Max.
"Hi" Lorelai said trying to break the ice. But he didn't even answer. He looked bed. Like he hadn't slept in days. "Ok we need to talk"
"About what" He said in a bitter voice.
"Ok you can be mad at me for breaking up with you when we hadn't even been on a really date but you can't take it out on my kid!" Lorelai said now mad.
"I haven't taken anything out on Rory"
"Really cause I've read her last few papers and they sound like A's at least B's and she can't get above a C."
"You have to say that"
"Max!"
"Fine I'll change her grades, she is one of my best students, and it's not fair to her"
"Good"
"But I thought we were good I mean we had a great date and I like you and you like me. Are you scared? Did I come on to strong?"
"Max no it's just… I was thinking that I once promised myself never to let my dating life and my mom life to cross. Now your Rory's teacher and she has to respect you and see you and she can't do that if I'm dating you. We're just not meant to be."
"But I think we are!"
"Well I'm sorry but it's not up to you"
"Like hell it isn't"
Max grabbed Lorelai and kissed her. Lorelai tried to push Max away.
Just outside Paris was walking by. She heard something coming from Mr. Medina's room and decided to check it out. She heard the fight of Lorelai wanting to break up. She saw Max grab Lorelai and kiss her. She saw Lorelai trying to push Max away. Then finally, she saw Lorelai break free from Max and smack him hard across the face. Paris ran when she saw Lorelai coming to the door. She didn't know what to do. Although now she did have something on Rory.
The entire school knew that Rory's mother had been dating a teacher and now broken up with him. He was ever student's favorite teacher and now he was heart broken. Paris decided that it was best to leave the part of him forcing him self on Lorelai out of the story. Finally, everyone would stop talking about her and talk about some one else. It had been a great day.
When Rory hears commotion, she looks up. Paris comes up to her with an evil smile.
"What's going on?" Rory asked
"Oh, everyone's just talking about the mom Mr. Medina was seen kissing."
"What"
"And the weird thing is, she looks a lot like your mom."
Oh no. She said she was just here to talk to him and now they're making out!
Lorelai finds Rory in the cafeteria. She decided to not tell Rory what had happened. Max was going to fix Rory's grades. It was all over.
"Hey did you save me some jello?"
Lorelai and Rory fight about what happened and Lorelai tried to explain but Rory wouldn't hear it. Now they weren't speaking. Lorelai and Luke weren't speaking. Now Lorelai had no one to talk to and no coffee. Life was great!
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Ok I know you wanted an explanation of what happened to Luke and Lorelai and it will be in the next chapter but I couldn't fit it in to this chapter so I'm sorry you will just need to keep reading.
Please review it. Even if you hate tell me so I can know if I should crawl in a hole and die!
Note from AndyPrueForever(Laura): LukelovesLorelai is a cheater. She's taking advantage of the fact that I'm sick and updating before me. So as soon as my throat stops feeling like it's on fire, I'll update.
