Hey, people! This is Kohaku-chi! Sorry I haven't updated. I lost my flash-drive and couldn't find it! I cried for a while! BUT I FOUND IT! YAY! But I lost my phone, too! T-T Oh, yeah! last chapter, the word bakemono means monster!

I only do a disclaimer once per story! (Is that allowed?)DISCLAIMER: Me no own puppies or anyone else

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Going to the tree, the girl quickly hid in the ooki tree's hole. She gently placed the chisaii boy in the soft hollow of the tree. As the girl peeked out, booming footsteps shook the ground around the ooki tree. The earthquake stopped the girl checked to see if they were coming back. The girl quickly grabbed the chisaii boy and ran away. Once she found the path again, she followed the bit of hikari she could find in the kuroi mori.

Running and running, the girl rushed to the hikari but it seemed as if the she never gotten closer. The rumbling footsteps were coming back and disappearing over and over again. Her heart pounded in her chest, suddenly it seemed the hikari was closer than it was before. The girl ran as fast as she could, feeling the steps of the bakemono get louder than before.

Hikari came closer and a wave of small relief went through the was not long before she burst out the mori and in to the hikari. The first thing that caught her eye was the ooki, kireii, shiroi hana filling the huge field. The two children stared in fushigi and awe at such an amazing thing. Looking around the hana, the boy noticed something moving and silently pointed it out to his nee-chan.

The loud booming returned again and closer than before. Turning the way her otouto pointed she darted off hoping to hide them before the bakemono came. The onna watches as something move away farther in to the hana. Hikari from the tsuki fell upon the moving being, a kagayaku gazed the form. The onna rushed forward to meet the unknown from

knowing anything or one is better than the bakemono.

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Ooki-big

Chiisai-small

Hikari-light

Kuroi mori-black forest

Bakemono-monster

Kireii-pretty

Shiroi hana-white flower(s)

Fushigi-wonder

Hana-flower(s)

Otouto- little brother

Onna- female [I could hav put onnanoko which means girl but it didn't seem right]

Kagayaku-shine

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Hope you liked it! So tell me does it look better? I worked hard trying to make it as dramatic as I could! Tell me how I can improve and I'll see what I can do! Since I'm really happy right now I'll tell you what anime I was watching while typing this! I was watching Kuroshitsuji! I'll stop now just so you know I will never leave a story of 'cause I don't like it when others do it. Oh, and check out some of my MMD pictures on my DA! The username is kohaku-chi!

Jya matta, ne?