Anyways, I think everyone's been… kinda… dropping hints. By leaving little retarded (no offense lovelys.) reviews like (ahem "cant wait") btw, if that was you… sooo sorry!!; and so, I decided it was time to finally RE-WRITE the first chapter of Pink. It's similar, yes, but I wanted to post it because it was needed, and it was my most popular story. Ahh. :P.

Please review, because… I had like… What.? Almost 500 reviews before? I was so excited. Now I'll be droopy if it's not quite as popular. Ick.

AN: If I owned Twilight, well… Let's just say… That movie that's coming out. DOT DOT DOT! And leave it at that.


Pink

Chapter One

Bella's POV

"Bella!" I heard my best friend of 7 years call from behind me. She came up to me, at my locker, her pixie-like face shining with excitement.

"Oh!" She squealed loudly.

Confused, I stared at her. Not that it was unusual for Alice to be happy in the mornings, but her excitement was a bit… nauseating.

"What is it Alice?" I groaned.

"My brother's coming home for spring break!" Alice squealed. So loudly in fact, I dropped my books in attempt to cover my ears.

"Uh." I cleared my throat. "Which one?" Alice had two brothers, both of which I was fond of.

"Oh you silly goose! Edward of course! You know how Emmett is in England with Rosalie, away at that function or whatever." She waved her hand around airily, smiling, her bright, straight, white teeth glinting even in the iridescent lighting of the school hallway.

I smiled, trying not to seem too excited. Truth was, I was almost shaking with the anticipation. Ever since I was five, I had a crush on Edward, who was only a year and a half older than Alice and I.

Up until he had left for College this year, he and I had been close. Not dating or anything… just friends. Close friends.

This is how our group went. Alice dated Jasper, who was Rosalie's younger brother. Rosalie dated Emmett, who was Alice's other brother; the eldest of them all. And… well Edward and I were there, but of course, weren't dating.

It was sort of sad, really, how the group was all together, except for Edward and I. Everyone joked about us, but I guess… We were just too uncomfortable to be together, or he simply didn't like me. Well, that wouldn't have been too hard to not like me… During my early teenage years, I was most definitely not a sight. (Sigh) Frizzy brown hair, braces, and a gangly body with no chest, do not go. Lucky for me, in the short year he had been gone, I discovered something called a flat iron for my hair, gotten my braces taken off, and grew a chest.(Hooray!)

Still, since Edward was like a God, and never once did he go through the 'awkward' stage, he was every girls dream. Why would he want me? With bronze hair, piercing green eyes, pale, creamy skin, strong muscular arms and abdominal muscles, plus perfect teeth, he was set for life. It came naturally to him. The charm, charisma, all of it, came so easily. It was sickening, really.

I was snapped back to reality when Alice poked me on my side. I turned to face her, startled.

She handed me my books. "Here. You seemed… a bit… out there." She smiled.

I nodded. "Yeah… I was thinking. So when is Edward coming home?"

She clasped her hands together happily. "He's coming home tomorrow!"

My eyes widened. "Tomorrow?"

"Yes!" She jumped up and down, her short black bob moving along with her.

The bell rang then, shocking us both. We hurried along to homeroom, with Alice still babbling about plans and such.

The final bell of the day rung, finally signaling the start of Spring Break. Alice and I walked to our lockers, me still silent, and her chattering about Mr. Ervanheart, our History teacher. "He's positively dreamy." She closed her eyes, and smiled.

I waved a hand in front of her face, signaling her to stop. "Alice, Jasper is coming."

She looked at me teasingly. Jasper stopped in front of us, smiling at Alice. She smiled back, and planted a kiss on the tip of his nose. He nuzzled her neck momentarily, then stepped away and put his arm around her.

I grinned. "Awe. Aren't you two just adorable yet nauseating at the same time?"

Alice leaned against Jasper, and stuck her tongue out at me. "Your just jealous."

Jasper grinned "I'm telling you Bella, Mike's got his creepy little eye on you. If you find us nauseating, maybe you should go out on a date with him."

I glared at Jasper. "You know, maybe I'll just walk home today, Alice."

"Don't be such a victim Bella." Alice laughed.

"You know you want Mikeeee!!!" Jasper chuckled.

"Seriously, stop." I smiled.

"Okay." Jasper laughed. "Fine. You want Mike just as much as you want Edward. So obviously nada. Zip zero, zilch."

My eyes widened, and I turned towards the lockers. "Yep. Zero. Goose eggs. Can we go now?"

"Okay okay… ready to go?" He nodded at me and Alice still laughing, running a hand through his blond locks.

I smiled, mumbled a quick yes, and walked along them to Jasper's shiny Black BMW. He let Alice and I in the backseat, then climbed in the front. (We pretend like he's our chauffeur, don't ask, it's weird, we know.)

He backed out of the parking lot, which had emptied due to our lingered presence in the hallway, and the fact it was Spring break.

Jasper dropped us off quickly at Alice's house, yelling behind him something about "Brazzlefrat." Whatever the hell that meant.

"Mom. Bella and I are here." Alice yelled to Esme, the most put together person I'd ever met. She was supermom. Literally.

Immediately, Esme was there, her white, pressed apron on, a feather duster in her right hand. She smiled. "I was just dusting up Edward and Emmett's rooms."

"Oh. Emmett is coming too?" I asked curiously.

She nodded, smiling. "Yes, along with Rosalie. They're taking the five o'clock flight tomorrow afternoon."

Alice and I smiled, and then Alice pulled me upstairs. "Bella…"

Oh No. There was that tone of voice.

I turned around slowly. Sure enough Alice had her puppy dog face on.

"What is it that you want Alice?" I asked cautiously. "I'm pretty sure I can't give you anything… So?"

"Well. It is spring break, and I was wondering if you could stay the night… and I would be the happiest…Puhhlease???" She made her puppy dog face again.

I smiled. "That's it? You made it sound serious."

I smiled, and pulled my phone from my back jeans pocked. I pressed two, then call. I waited, as it rung four times.

"Chief Swan."

"Hey dad!"

"Ah, Bella! You alright Bells?"

"Oh… fine… I was wondering if It'd be alright if I stayed over Alice's for the weekend? It's spring break and all… And Edward and Emmett are coming home."

"Oh…" He trailed off and I held my breath, scared he was going to say no. I panicked in my head. 'What had I ever done for him not to trust me? What if I don't get to stay? What if I don't get to see Edward' What if..?'

"That's fine Bells. Why don't you ask if you can stay Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday as well, because I'll be going on a fishing trip with Billy, and I'd rather you not be alone. Or, I suppose Alice could come over, but you might have more fun reuniting with old friends. Whatever you want. Alright Bells, have a good time, see you." I heard a click, and I let the air escape.

I hadn't realized I'd been holding it the entire time.

I looked over at Alice, who was perched on the edge of her king sized canopy bed, and nodded.

She ran up and we jumped around like little school girls. "Tonight will be fun, Bella. We'll do each other's hair, and paint one another's nails." She blabbed on. I nodded along with her, and she kept talking. "You know, it's good that you're here so much, we don't' even have to pick up clothes from your house. You left like 10 pairs of jeans here, along with like, a billion t shirts." She giggled. I love Alice to death, but she talked entirely too much.

I bit into a forth one of Esme's wonderful chocolate chip cookies. They were homemade and fresh from the oven. The chocolate just oozed from them … 'Esme is so going to make me gain forty or fifty pounds.' I thought to myself.

Alice and I were on the couch in her room, watching some random scary movie on TV. I was hardly paying attention, but Alice was into it, her long red nails digging into the white leather of her sofa. I smiled at her, watching her facial expression. I was tired; maybe that was why I barely could keep my eyes on the TV. I leaned my head back, and before I knew it, I was fast asleep.

I woke up some hours later, it was dark, and the TV was off. Alice and I were both still sprawled on her couch, but someone, I had my bet on Esme, covered us with a quilt. I quietly and carefully slipped from underneath the covers, and tiptoed from Alice's room. I wanted to get something from the kitchen.

It was weird. Do you ever wake up from a deep sleep, and have a urge for something? This one occasion I was really craving chocolate. I wasn't really worried about waking anyone, I was positive everyone in the Cullen household was a deep sleeper. This was confirmed several years ago, during a sleepover with Alice. We ran around the house with pots and pans, and not a single soul woke up.

It was weird though. Not one of them snored. They were too perfect… Once again… Sickos.

I creeped downstairs, my bare feet making slapping noises on the wooden floors. I rubbed my eyes, wiping the sleep away.

'Okay. Now.' I thought to myself. 'If I were a Cullen, where would I keep the choc-o-late? Hmm.' I tapped my finger against my cheek.

"Maybe in the cabinet!" It was more of an idea then a question. I hoisted myself up onto the counter, only really because I was lazy, not because I didn't want to cause hussle and bussle getting a chair.

Sure enough, chocolate! MilkyWay's to be exact. I tried to grab the bag but then the marshmallows came crashing down.

"Ow." I mumbled.

"Having fun?" Someone asked, causing me to hit my head on the cabinet.

My eyes watered, yet I blinked back the tears as I heard footsteps approaching towards the counter.

"Bella." Edward said softly.

I looked up into his eyes. They were piercing green. "Edward." I breathed, shocked.

"Bella?" He stood in front of me. "So, what were you looking for, the marshmallows or the chocolate?"

"Um. The chocolate." I smiled softly.

"Yeah, it kind of reminded me of when we were kids… and you used to spend the night over here, along with Rosalie and Alice. And Jasper used to stay over with Emmet and I. We all used to stay up late, after Dad and Mom were asleep." He grinned. "And we'd grab our flashlights and go on a junk food raid."

I giggled. "Yeah, and you guys would boost one of us on the counter, because all the junk food was hidden in the cabinets, like now, and we'd all be really quiet, get what we needed, then sneak back to our rooms and share what we got. Then Carlisle and Esme would wonder why we'd be so tired in the morning."

Edward smiled, looking around. "Yeah. We did a lot, huh?"

"Yeah."

There was an awkward silence.

I shivered involuntarily. Edward raised his left eyebrow.

"What? It's chilly!" I protested.

"Yes. It's called wearing a shirt, and pants Bella." Edward laughed.

I looked down, confused.

My face heated up. I hadn't even realized my attire. I'd been so preoccupied with getting downstairs… I groaned.

"Now, no need to fret…" Edward laughed. "I've seen much more naked girls than this."

"I don't want to know how much porn you've looked at Edward." I growled.

"Isabella Swan, My how you've grown. Saying big girl words and everything." He counted off his fingers. "No more braces. Darn . Guess I can't call you brace face anymore, although, that was more of Emmett's forte, however now that the option is gone it's so much more tempting… What else is new? No more Miss Frizz! Aw, did Alice teach you how to do your hair?" He teased lightly.

"Oh shut up!" I jumped off the counter to push him, and when I did my hands came in contact with his chest. We made eye contact momentarily, then looked away.

Gah. This boy is going to kill me.

"Well, let's see how you've changed." I said.

I crossed my arms over my chest, and gave him a once over. His bronze hair was slightly longer, but not much, it was tousled messily. It was like sex hair.(Yum.) His face had a light dusting of brown hairs along his jaw line. Without quite realizing what I was doing, I reached up and brushed my hand over the hairs lightly.

I could see him gulp, and I immediately withdrew my hand. He stared at me, then looked away.

"Well, I'm going to bed, you coming?" Edward grinned.

"Wha-?"

He leaned down and whispered in my ear. "I'm going to bed, you coming?"


Kay. Um... Reviews? For the doodoo author who never updates and Seeeeukkkess at writing.... Well, kinda does. Anywhoee. Love you lovies. ;D. Muah. I actually forreall, did workk on the next chapter. Yay me! Oh btw, if you review, please tell me which part of the re-write you liked BEST. thankies.