Hey all, thanks for all the wonderful reviews. I know so of you wanted me to use names but i find it eaiser to write it without them.
Here is the second chapter, i hope you like it.
Time seemed to speed up, poeple became flashes of light, voice were just a blurr of sound. The others had tried to talk to him, they had even moved him but he just looked straight ahead, barely blinking.
They had called in his family but even his daughter couldn't get through to him.
The only thing he could thing about was how he had left her, when she had need him, he had left her, alone.
He mind kept think to what she would have done if they had switched places, she wouldn't have left him, she was had fought for him, but it was his last thought the stuck in his head.
She would be looking for him.
So why was he not looking for her.
He mind was racing, why wasn't he looking for her, why had he given up so quickly.
His mind clicked, he was going to find her.
He seemed to be able see and hear his surroundings for the first time in hours.
He was sitting in his normal seat, across from her desk, the other and his family were gathered together, all looking concerned, they were saying how they needed to find the van that had been parked outside the warehouse.
"PK07LDV" he whispered at first, then he stood and said it again, louder so that everyone could hear him.
They just stared at him, in complete shock at his sudden movement and outburst.
Once the shock ware off, two things happened. His daughter and mother almost ran towards him, tears now falling down their cheeks, their arms outstretched, ready to incase him in a hug.
The others instead went straight to their desk, typing furiously on the computer, searching desperately for the white van.
He welcomed the familiar, warm embrace,returning the hug, his mind almost forgot her for a minute, until he realized that last time he felt this way, it was with her.
His minds flashed back to her mangled, lifeless body which was the last time he saw her.
His body started to shake as tears were once again unleashed down his cheeks, his knee buckled and he dragged the mass of his family to the ground with him.
Only one voice broke though the moment that he was holding onto so tightly, "we found it." He looked up through his watering eyes to see the others standing over him, they pulled him to his feet and they rushed towards the elevator.
The car rush was quiet and filled with tension, he could only hear the sound of everyone checking their guns and strapping on their vest, so the could jump out as soon as the cars stopped.
As they turned the last corner in the car the white van came to sight, it seemed innocence parked among other cars, but he know better.
He felt a rush of energy as the slowly drove closer, he didn't wait for the car to stop, just as it reach the van, he jumped out, racing towards it.
He held his breath as he reached for the handle at the back and gave it a large tug to open it.
He whimpered, they were too late again.
The inside of the van seemed dark yet it was completely clean. There was only two items in the van and they were completely different.
There was a large tv connected to the back of the van, but this was not what he couldn't take his eyes off.
It was her favorite white jumper, he didn't need to guess what it was stained with, she had been wearing it the last time he saw her.
He didn't know what to do, he couldn't breath, the other had finally court up with him and he heard their two very different reactions, one just gasped, shocked by the scene before them, while the other lost his temper,punching the edge of the van as hard as he could, the bang making them all jump.
He noticed the screen for the first time as it came to life, words starting to flash, 'Detective Kate Beckett' it read and he clinched his fist as it continued, 'Youngest female to ever make detective' 'Homicide Detective with the highest closure rate' the last words struck him the most, 'how far can she fall?'
The tv flickered, turning to snow before it changed to a live video. They all gasped in unison, they were all feeling a mix of relief and horror, she was alive but she was going to be for long if she didn't make it to a hospital soon.
She was barely able to stay seated in the wooden chair, her face glistened in dull light, her arm still at an awkward angle and it was clear on her face that she was in a huge amount of pain.
A figure appeared from the shadows, he voice was concealed, "Evening, as you can see the detective here is a little worst for wear, you will have to find her before she suffers the same fate as my son, but not before she goes through the same pain I did when she took him from me." As the figure turned, they could see what he was hiding behind his back.
They all shuddered as he advanced towards her, they closed their eyes but that didn't stop her scream from echoing through their heads.
They were still shaking once the screen had switched off, they eyes closed as tighly as possible,willing their minds to forget the horror they had just seen.
What do you think? If you liked it let me know below.
Also I don't really know where to take it from here so if you have any ideas then please let me know below.
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