Here is the updated version of Chapter 1
I mainly just added a couple things so it would make more since because I have come to realize that Stormpaw, Bramblepaw, Hollypaw aren't too much older than Runningkit, Frostkit, Greykit and Blackkit, maybe 2 or 3 moons older..
So without much further ado here is Greystar's Destiny chapter 1 which will mainly only have Greykit's pov
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A dark void of warmth was almost the only thing he could sense in the world. He could feel another small body pressed against him as he moved deeper into his mother's fur. Every once a while he would hear the smaller body of warmth let a mew of protest whenever he moved, or mewing from three different voices for milk from their mothers; he only mewed when he was hungry or other small reasons that many might not understand.
He would hear voices of the older cats as well as his mother whenever they were awake. From his understanding four adult cats dwelled in this den as they called it. Also he was one four young kittens in this den; from what he could tell there was only one she-kit in this den that still spoke in the developing kitten voice that would one day grow into something that most would clearly understand.
It wasn't long till I heard pawsteps. The sound of the pawsteps quickly became muffled as the cat entered the den. The scent of blood mixed with the scent of some kind of prey filled the air.
"Father please don't tell me you went out hunting again? The clan can't risk you getting hurt. Anyways if you do end up getting hurt Icythorn won't be happy with you again.." One of the older she-cats meowed.
"Now, now Lillysun, can't a father hunt for his daughter and the rest of his clan while your mate is out on patrol? And visit the nursery to see the new members of the clan?" A tom rasped.
"Pepperstar, why don't you give me the rabbit, while Lillysun introduces you to your grandkits, then I'll introduce my two lovely toms to you.. Then we can all eat the rabbit while you tell us what StoneClan has been up to as well as the rest of the clans as well.." His mother meowed.
"Sure thing Shadowstorm. Now Lillysun would you mind introducing me to them?" Pepperstar meowed.
"Of course.. Runningkit is the little white she-kit with the diamond cat markings.. Frostkit is the black and white diamond tabby.. Far as I can tell Runningkit is the stronger one and might try to sneak out of camp like most kits.. Frostkit here opened is his eyes earlier this morning and they are yellow.. Otherwise than that, that is the only thing I can tell you so far.." Lillysun meowed.
"I see.. Now Shadowstorm would you stop eating all the rabbit, that's for all the queens, till the hunting patrol gets back.." Pepperstar meowed.
"Haha, real funny.. Well the larger of the two is Greykit, and the smaller one is Blackkit.. So what is going on outside the nursery? Has StoneClan attacked any more patrols? Are SmokeClan causing any mischief for us again? And what has HeatherClan been up to?" My mother meowed.
"SmokeClan hasn't been causing any problems for us lately… HeatherClan hasn't been making their border as often but from my understanding the clan was attacked by StoneClan.. And they ended up in a huge battle in HeatherClan camp and Hawkstar supposedly took a life from Echostar.. We haven't heard anything from StoneClan and they haven't been causing us any problems yet.." Pepperstar meowed.
"It sounds like the clans are starting to settle into peace for once" His mother meowed.
"Yes it does.. But I'm not quite sure; even if Echostar had lost her ninth life, her deputy Rosethorn was just as bloodthirsty as her.. Well I better go see if dawn patrol has anything to report.." Pepperstar meowed, then the den was silent once more.
Time slips by. I don't know how much though, because I am still in the darkness. At some point in time the warmth of my mother had left my side, leaving me cold and the one next to freezing.
I can feel his small trembling body next to mine seeking warmth yet finding none. It is almost as if we have been abandoned and left to freeze. I know we are not alone in this den, but it is almost like all the adult cats have left the younger one to fend to themselves.
"Frost where is everybody?" I suddenly hear a voice squeak.
"Runningkit, the older ones left a while ago.. Something is happening outside the den, that's too urgent to stay by us kits side or.." Mewed another voice.
"Still they have no right leaving us to freeze in our nest like this!" She squeaked.
"Even so, we are not the only kits in this den or are still blind with your sharp green glaze staring at me?" Frost questioned.
"Yeah, yeah, I saw them.. I was talking about the adults not other kits" She mewed.
"Why don't we go over to them so we are not all freezing?" Frost mewed.
"Okay" She mewed sounding happy at the idea of being warm.
He would even welcome being warm. Not just him but the one next to him as well. The little one at his side was starting to move less and less due to the cold, and it frightened him.
It wasn't long till he felt two other body's near him, well one was a tail in his face he was sure of, the other was pressed behind him. He began to feel warmth flow him and his little companion. After a while his little companion shifted a bit away from him, clearly waking up.
"Are you two going to open your eyes yet?" The she-kit squeaked.
Without really thinking about it his eyes slid open. The den was dark, but not as dark as it was when his eyes were closed. He could see the small figure next to him was dark grey with black tips.
A white she-kit next to him bounced in his nest happy to see that he opened his eyes. A black and white tabby tom kit sat next to her looking calm. After a few moments he turned back to the small figure; his brother.
The little tom kit wasn't really moving with the exception of the faint rise and fall of his flank. After a long few heartbeats the little tom shifted once more. This time he opened his eyes.
They were a yellow color. It popped out from his darker fur. After a few heartbeats he laid his head down and fell back to sleep like he had no energy, but to do just that one little thing.
After a while they all settled down once more and fell asleep around the little tom. They were afraid for him. They could tell he wasn't strong, but they hoped together they could help him become strong.
Even so this was the beginning of a strong friendship, as well as the beginning of their destinies that would lead to their fate. In this world the strong can easily survive but those who aren't strong need help to make a place in this world. It wouldn't be long till all cats began to question what StarClan had in store for them, and maybe StarClan themselves.
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