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I have a sudden realisation that that means I need to jump off as well and my stomach does a flip. Jumping on to a train going at full speed is one thing, but jumping off one? I don't think that is humanly possible for me to do. At that moment, the doors of the train open up and the cool air rushes into the train, allowing us to see what is out there. Outside there are tall buildings with flat roofs that are covered with stones and rocks. All around me, I see Dauntless-born initiates jumping off and onto one of the roofs. I decide to jump off quickly and sharply, like pulling off a band-aid and before I know it, I am leaping off the train with all my might and the wind is blowing against my face harshly. Although I used all my strength in that jump, I'm still a half a metre short of the roof and I'm about to fall onto the pavement about fifty metres below me when I feel a hand against my hand. That person then begins to pull me up and onto the roof of the building. Soon, I am on the roof along with nearly all of the initiates, (some of them didn't make it to here and as a result they are now lying on the pavement below me, dead). I look up to see who was the one who caught my hand and I see a tall boy, my age, wearing a yellow shirt with dark red shorts. He has dark brown hair and light blue eyes.

"Hey," he says to me casually.

"Hi, thanks for catching me," I say.

"No problem. I'm Christopher." He says, shaking my hand.

"Amanda," I reply.

"Ok, everybody listen up!" A man with light blonde hair and jet black eyes calls out. All of the initiates obey and gather around him.

"Hi, my name is Daniel and I am the Dauntless leader." He says to everyone.

"Okay, if you want to be Dauntless, you've gotta jump off this thing here." He motions to behind him where there is a large hole in the roof.

"What's down there? Is there water or something?" I hear one initiate say, concerned.

"Only one way to find out," Daniel replies plainly.

"Okay then, well who's gonna go first?" He stares at all of our hesitant and scared faces.

"Well? C'mon, anyone?" No one says anything for a long time until I hear Christopher's voice next to me.

"I will." He says nervously. He walks up to the edge of the hole and looks down there before stepping off quickly. We hear a faint scream before it is cut short and we hear someone from down there call out,

"Daniel, first jumper!" We hear some cheers from below and then it's time for the next person to jump.

"Okay, who's next?" Daniel asks.

"Me." I say. I go up to the edge of the hole and jump straight off. Thrill washes over me as I fall through the air at an astounding rate until I land on a strong, elastic net. The Dauntless pull me off of the net and then Christopher and I wait for the other initiates to jump.

"Well done." I say to Christopher.

"Same to you," He smiles back.

"So, I take it you're from Amity?" I ask.

"Yeah. And you're from Abnegation?" He says, reffering to my grey shirt and pants.

"Right. Why did you leave Amity?" I ask inquisitively.

"I dunno. I guess it just wasn't my style." He shrugs,

"Why did you?" He asks me.

"I find Abnegation too refined."

"Yeah, from what I've heard there are so many restrictions."

"Tell me about it." He laughs. We talk for a bit longer until we hear Daniel announce that everyone has jumped.

"Okay, everyone. Dauntless born initiates come with me and transfers go to Jess." Daniel says, motioning to a young woman with light blonde hair with streaks of black in it. The transfers go over to her and she leads us to a big, round and tall mass of space with rooms and ramps on each side.

"Okay, this is the Pit, guys. It's basically the main part of Dauntless." Jess explains, her voice crisp and sharp. I look all around, taking everything in. It's so different than Abnegation so it's a bit hard to process the sight. Down the bottom there are lots of tables with Dauntless eating at them. At the initiates' entrance the Dauntless eating at the tables suddenly start cheering for us.

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