1Yellow ninja of the storm
chap 1
see A/N for prolog and key.
DBL: hi again! Here is Chapter one! Enjoy! I give permission for you to draw my characters. All I ask is that you send me a link to it.
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Sagan took out four weights from his backpack, each looking like they were ten pounds. "I figured I'd start you off small."
Kitsu tied them to his hands and feet. In true Naruto fashion he said, "These are nothing, Believe it!"
Sagan snapped his fingers and Kitsu fell to the floor in a face plant. "Those weights are keyed into my Chakra signature. So, you won't be able to take them off unless I want you to." he snapped his fingers again and the weight lessened. "Now, focus your chakra to your feet and climb that tree." He pointed to a tall oak.
Kitsu said, "Da..."
Sagan snapped his fingers again and once more Kitsu fell to the ground. "Swearing is one of the things I consider vulgar. Don't do it in my presence." he took out a kunai and put it in front of Kitsu. "Use this to mark your progress." he snapped once more and Kitsu stood up again.
Kitsu did a hand sign and ran at the tree. He got to like five maybe six feet, before he started to fall. He cut a line with his kunai. He fell on his butt. "Stupid tree!" He looked over and saw Sagan playing chess with himself.
Sagan stood up and took something out of his seamlessly bottomless backpack. It looked like an instant raman cup. He said, "You need the proper motivation. Fetch." he climbed the tree effortlessly and placed the raman cup on the top branch.
Kitsu saw him and ran at the tree and nearly doubled his performance. When he began to fall, he cut a line in the tree again. This time he rode down the tree with his hands. (Why don't you help me?)
Because this is not my test kit. I can only help you out some. Try again.
Kitsu spit on the ground and looked at Sagan. He was back to playing chess. Kitsu ran at the tree one more time. Somehow, he managed to reach the raman cup and began eating it while sitting on the branch. He heard clapping and looked down. He saw Sagan looking up from his chess game and clapping his hands. Kitsu climbed down and smiled. Sagan also smiled and snapped his fingers. Kitsu fell and asked, "What was that for?"
"You spat in my presence." answered Sagan. He snapped his fingers and Kitsu stood up. Sagan took off his backpack and was searching through it. "It couldn't have moved that far. Where is it?" he grabbed something and felt a kind of jolt. "There we go." he took out a yellow bladed katana with a hilt covered with yellow bandages. "This is the sword that helped make your father famous. I was told to give it to you when you mastered chakra control. It seems that you have done that." he handed the sword to Kitsu.
Kitsu grabbed the sword and felt a little jolt through his hand. Sagan took out another scroll and handed it to Kitsu. It read,
Dear Naruto,
This is where you'll learn a little bit about your family history. When I had my sword drawn I was called the Yellow Flash. The Kazama clan is known for our talent with lightning jutsu. I came up with several to use with my sword. The Rai Ken no jutsu, listed below, is one such jutsu. Preform the hand signs listed and slash at a tree. If you're like me, you'll like the results.
Arashi
Kitsu, eager to begin, performed the hand signs and said, "Rai Ken no Jutsu." (A/N: Lightning blade technique.) He slashed at the oak tree he was climbing before, and a lightning bolt shot at it from the blade. It went through one tree and dissolved before it hit another one. Leaving a burnt mark on the first tree. He lay flat on his back from exhaustion.
Sagan whistled slightly. "Not bad, for a beginner. Hopefully you can train on the road. We'll rest here tonight. I have one more gift to give you." he once more reached inside his backpack and brought out several pieces of clothing. A black jacket with a lightning bolt on it, a yellow shirt with the kanji for thunder god on the front, and black pants. He also brought out shades and a red face mask. "Put these on in the cabin."
A few minutes later, Kitsu came back out looking almost completely transformed. He still had on that dorky smile of his. He had his red arm hanging out of his jacket. (A/N: think Auron from FFX.) He had his sword at his side hanging from a bandage. Sagan said, "We'll have to get you a decent sheath at the next town. Other than that, not bad." they heard a cracking of a stick and turned towards the sound. "Come out. We know you're there, little one."
A little girl wearing rags walked into the clearing. She had green hair and sad black eyes. She seemed to be the same age as Kitsu. Kitsu asked, "Where are your parents?"
The girl's eyes came alive. "None of your business, dandelion."
"What did you call me you little..." asked Kitsu before Sagan snapped his fingers. He fell down.
Sagan sighed and said, "Don't worry about him. What is your name?"
The girl said, "The name is Saka Elementos. Just call me Saka. What's your name?"
"I am Sagan Hiten. And this is Kitsu Kazama." said Sagan. "You have a house guest, don't you?" he saw the look of surprise on the girl's face and explained. "Minds are like open books, if you know how to read them. Why don't you demonstrate your talents? I promise you we won't run away from you."
Saka performed two hand signs and said, "Kasai ibuki seme." she blew out her breath and a ring of six flames shot out of her mouth. Each one hit a different tree. "Mizu ogawa." a jet of water shot out of her mouth extinguishing the flames.
Sagan clapped, Kitsu was muttering from his position on the ground. Sagan snapped his fingers and said, "You seam to have talent. Would you like to train with me and Kitsu?"
Saka said, "why should i?"
"Because if you don't master control, you are likely to kill yourself." Said Sagan.
Saka said, "You okay. Dandelion, no."
Sagan smirked. "Yes well, we can work out the kinks after a little sparring session between you two. Mostly because I want to see you're talents."
Saka and Kitsu faced each other and got into their stances. 'This will be simple' thought Kitsu
Don't use you're father's sword, kit. You shouldn't need it.
(Scene change: Konaha)
Saratobi couldn't believe what he was hearing. Iruka had just told him that the village hero had killed Naruto and had disappeared. Iruka finished, "He could have been a great ninja, if he hadn't done so many pranks."
Saratobi sighed. He decided to take this time to read the letter that was on his desk.
Dear Geezer,
today is the day Kitsu will start his training. I've already told him the big secret. There is no telling when we'll return or if we'll return. Tell the villagers whatever you want. Tell little Ino that I'll miss her. See ya!
Sincerly,
Sagan Hiten
Saratobi smirked. "I don't think you'll have to worry about Naruto's future. It's still very bright."
(Scene Change: back to the cabin.)
Saka faced Kitsu. She said, "Bring it on, dandelion."
Kitsu took out a kunai and threw it at Saka. Saka did a quick hand sign and spit out a medium sized rock. The kunai hit it and bounced off. Kitsu dodged the rock and stretched out his red arm.
Kit, focus little chakra into you're arm and throw it.
Kitsu did as instructed and saw a fireball form in his hand. He threw it towards Saka. Saka performed her Mizu ogawa jutsu and extinguished it. Sagan smirked. Kitsu ran at Saka and punched the ground with his red arm. Saka jumped back and Kitsu hit the ground she was once at. He formed a small crater from the force.
Saka whistled and smirked. "I love challenges." she performed several hand signs. "Kasai Ken ame." (A/N: Fire Blade Rain technique. Not to be confused with the chidori technique.) She thrust her hands in front of her and streams of fire flew from her fingers.
Baka, block with my arm!
Kitsu did as he was told and after the streams hit his arm, it started glowing.
Now, preform this hand sign and swing at her.
Kitsu did the hand sign and the motion. A black and red ball, the size of a fist, shot at Saka. Saka seemed to disappear. Kitsu heard her voice say, "I see your house guest has been awakened. You have a chakra advantage and the advantage of having a silent teacher. I on the other hand have the advantage of training myself in the wild. And having a little trick up my sleeve. Kage ogawa no Jutsu." (A/N: Shadow Stream technique) all Kitsu could see where shadows. He felt a flicker for about a second but it disappeared.
Kitsu took a chance and drew his father's sword. He did the Rai Ken jutsu and swung at nothing. He could feel the lightning bolt disappear after going about an inch.
Baka, behind you.
Kitsu did a back kick and hit something. He heard a grunt as his foot connected with skin. The shadows started clearing and Kitsu could see Saka in front of him panting. He turned and saw Sagan grabbing his stomach. Sagan snapped his fingers and Kitsu fell. "Let's call this a tie." said Sagan. "Let's eat. I'm afraid I only brought raman. I didn't expect to need anything else. Sorry for the inconvenience."
Saka smiled and said, "Raman will be just fine."
Sagan snapped his fingers again and Kitsu slowly stood up. Sagan asked, "You mind lighting the fire? I forgot to bring matches."
Kitsu focused very little chakra into his hand. A fireball formed once again but it looked like a slight breeze could put it out. He quickly lit some wood on fire before it went out. They ate raman that night in silence.
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DBL: Hi! The votes stand thus far.
N/Ino 1
N/Ten 1
N/ Fem Haku
N/ hinata
anyway, I thank you for the Kyubi ideas. Now I need help deciding on Saka's houseguest's abilities. I'll give you a hint as to what it is. It's big and has scales. Please continue to review! Ciao!
