Hey again! Well, I received some VERY handy advice. I am very grateful for it; I am hoping to sort of pick up on what I just wrote and somehow fix it. Now this story really sucks quite badly but Kudos to those who reviewed whether your review was praise or advice. Either way it makes me happy and I love getting advice, because as I'm new here I want to learn the standards and stuff about writing fan fiction! So enjoy (or not) and review with your honest opinions, nothing too mean though :P
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~~~~~~Of White Wolf's And White Cats~~~~~~
"How?" asks Tsume, more to himself rather than to Toboe "Is it possible that we are wolves, and how can we tell just from a dream?" Toboe pouts, and answers Tsume.
"I don't know I can just feel that I am" Tsume glares at Toboe and looks outside the broken window of his rusty abandoned apartment.
"How can I even trust you?" Tsume turns back to Toboe; who was sitting in a corner, resting his head on his knees. "For all I know, you could be a spy. Sent from my opposition team" Tsume growls and stands up.
"You honestly believe that Tsume?" Toboe asks, maybe this guy wasn't all Toboe thought he was. Toboe was getting angry now.
"Get lost kid, I don't need ya here anymore!" Tsume roars at Toboe; who is shaking from anger and fear, when suddenly a furry white creature crawled up onto Tsume's lap "And take your… Creature with you" Tsume tosses the white cat through the air towards Toboe.
"Is that really how you feel Tsume?" Toboe pouts, looking down at the white cat he is now holding. Tsume growls and points to the door. "Out!"
Toboe gets up and walks out of the apartment slamming the door angrily behind him,
'Who needs him?' Toboe asks himself angrily 'I can find my way around the city easily!' Toboe walks out into the cold streets of freeze city 'Oh even better! It's raining' Toboe thinks sarcastically as he walks by a guy wearing a hoodie and holding a hotdog; Toboe's mouth waters at the thought of food, after all Toboe hadn't had anything to eat for hours!
"Um, E - Excuse me?" Toboe asks the guy holding the hotdog nervously.
"What do you want runt?" Toboe frowns, "I'm not a runt! Only animals are runts" Toboe mumbles.
"Yeah, yeah, what do you want kid" The hotdog guy corrects himself.
"I was just wondering if I could have some of your hotdog." Toboe smiles, the guy frowns.
"No! It's my hotdog, I haven't eaten anything in days" The guy turns to walk off.
"Please!" Toboe pouts, "Can you at least tell me your name?" he asks, but the guy had already walked off.
Toboe wondered the streets, hoping for something; anything to happen. When he hears a gunshot, with his sharp hearing, Toboe runs to where the shot came from. He sees a man holding a gun which was pointed at a white wolf. 'Wait? A white wolf?' Toboe looks at the wolf again, yes it is a wolf!
"Hey!" Toboe shouts "Don't shoot, Please!" Toboe ran to the wolf; Toboe in the progress was shot in the shoulder by the gunman, 'Wait', Toboe thinks, 'I know that man! He's Quent' Toboe frowns, that man had been trying to capture him for days on end! Toboe knows why he was hunting him now, because Toboe is a wolf…
Toboe lays on the floor in pain, he had just been shot and was being loaded into a cage, Toboe stared at the white wolf who was hiding from the humans. The white wolf stared directly at Toboe's eyes. It made Toboe feel uncomfortable. Suddenly the truck Toboe was on roared to life and pulled Toboe away; as Toboe is being carried he notices something he hadn't before, the white wolf was holding something white behind it. The wolf has Toboe's cat! "Thank you, please look after her!" Toboe shouts to the wolf; in response the wolf took one last look at Toboe and walked off.
"Damned kid, Gone and got himself captured" Tsume sighed, "Why do I care?"
Tsume stood up from the position he had been watching the previous scene from. Tsume turns around to be standing face to face with a white cat, Tsume sighs. 'Damn, I don't want his stupid cat' Tsume looks up at the white wolf that was leaving quickly. Tsume growls "Well im stuck with it now" Tsume follows Toboe's scent; He had no idea why but he felt drawn towards the place where Toboe had been taken to…
~~~~~WRITERS NOTE~~~~~
So what do you think? If you have any suggestions of things you want to see happening in this fiction, please feel free to PM me! And thank you to my reviewers, I love any help on my stories. It is appreciated a lot! In the next chapter you will learn a lot about the gangs life stories and thoughts. I already have most of this story planned out, but I can add small things in if you request it… So enjoy and my next chapter should be up tomorrow or a little later! So R&R and I'll post a new chapter… If I don't have enough reviewers I wont be posting a new chapter: P
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