Obviously the first haiku, disregarding the last, were in reverse, thus making them not true haiku. That format is easier for me, gives me the best room for expression, but I've settled back into the traditional 5,7,5 now. Also, for my last reviewer, I apologize that the change bothered you. Perhaps I'm a rebel? lol! Please review and enjoy! Also, I plan to have chapter 11 of my A Dream Lived And Lost out soon!
On a side note, I assure you I'm not suicidal. Some have thought so upon reading my work. I use figure of speeches, so don't take those so seriously, rather look at the meaning behind them. PLEASE REVIEW!
Why is the fire first
Never the water that soothes
Only time can tell
A fake smile for them
Frees me from great annoyance
Questions bleed me dry
Worried glances pierce
Soft whispers constantly heard
My eardrums grow tired
Too much noisy sound
Seeking soft tranquility
All searching in vain
Writing on paper
What weakness imprisons tight
Never strength to speak
Trapped in my own love
My wrists bleed golden liquid
Gone now is my peace
Breath a painful wheeze
Depression pulls me under
One day I'll taste free
Wants to make amends
Can't breathe to swallow my pain
How do I say yes
How is this to be
Can't seem to remain joyous
Simple fix nowhere
