Obviously the first haiku, disregarding the last, were in reverse, thus making them not true haiku. That format is easier for me, gives me the best room for expression, but I've settled back into the traditional 5,7,5 now. Also, for my last reviewer, I apologize that the change bothered you. Perhaps I'm a rebel? lol! Please review and enjoy! Also, I plan to have chapter 11 of my A Dream Lived And Lost out soon!

On a side note, I assure you I'm not suicidal. Some have thought so upon reading my work. I use figure of speeches, so don't take those so seriously, rather look at the meaning behind them. PLEASE REVIEW!


Why is the fire first

Never the water that soothes

Only time can tell


A fake smile for them

Frees me from great annoyance

Questions bleed me dry


Worried glances pierce

Soft whispers constantly heard

My eardrums grow tired


Too much noisy sound

Seeking soft tranquility

All searching in vain


Writing on paper

What weakness imprisons tight

Never strength to speak


Trapped in my own love

My wrists bleed golden liquid

Gone now is my peace


Breath a painful wheeze

Depression pulls me under

One day I'll taste free


Wants to make amends

Can't breathe to swallow my pain

How do I say yes


How is this to be

Can't seem to remain joyous

Simple fix nowhere