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A quick note,this is mostly describing Lloyd and what he's thinking...and I feel like I've overused the word smirk.
Chapter 1,Part 2
His Oni side had won.
The thing that surprised Lloyd the most was that he didn't really mind. He wasn't bothered by the fact that his Oni side was taking over. It was part of who he was after all. Whatever happened to him now didn't bother the grandson of the First Spinjitzu Master, because it was who he was. The Great Grandson of an Oni from the first relm, so if he were to become more Oni-like,then so be it.
As he thought this Lloyd looked out at the Sons of Garmadon and his vision became blurred with a black smear. At least that's what Lloyd and the SOG initially thought it was. But looking closer at it,everyone noticed it was black smoke/sand/dust (mostly smoke with sandy dust mixed in) and it was swirling around like a hurricane with Lloyd at its center. The SOG all backed up,afraid of what was happening to the son of Garmadon,their enemy.
"I said,PUT ME DOWN!" Lloyd yelled,but his voice sounded different,deeper than it had before. Killow dropped the son of Garmadon by mistake,the swirling black sand had been slamming into him at high-speed,and he had to get away from it,the only logical option had been dropping Lloyd.
When Killow had finally let go of Lloyd,the Green Ninja hadn't hit the deck as everyone had assumed he would. The Sons of Garmadon weren't able to see what happened to Lloyd next,due to the mass of swirling black sand obscuring him from their sight. The sand tornado seemed to be gaining mass and speed very fast.
When Killow dropped him Lloyd felt himself suspended in midair. Then he felt his body begin to change.
At first the process was painful,causing Lloyd to let out a scream of agony (that most likely put the SOG on edge),but after a few seconds the pain became bearable. The pain was mostly centered around Lloyd's upper back,he had a feeling he knew why... His upper jaw was also aching and blood trickled from his mouth in two tiny streams. Also Lloyd's eyes briefly stung but he didn't really notice that due to the flood of pain that had taken over his body.
Then,with absolutely now warning the pain stopped. Lloyd hadn't made a sound for about 4 and a half minutes,and he wasn't about to. If the SOG thought that the still swirling storm of sand had killed him it would make his dramatic enterance that bit more fun.
Lloyd smirked at the thought of what he was going to do,then he saw movement within the storm that surrounded him. Lloyd focused on the dark impenetrable wall of sand before him and a mirror was formed in the eye wall(A.N. sorry about my geographic terminology,the eye wall,if you don't know,is the part of a hurricane that surrounds the calm of the eye of the storm.). Lloyd was a bit confused as to where the mirror had appeared from,but then he realised it was made from glass,and glass is made from heated sand.
Shrugging off his confusion,Lloyd inspected his new apperance using the mirror. His skin was considerably paler,almost white,he had dark bags under his eyes,giving him a tired look. Then Lloyd looked his reflection dead in the eyes and his smirk widened. His eyes were the exact same shade of crimson that his father's had been. Speaking(well,thinking,he was doing this in silence after all) of crimson,two lines of his own crimson red blood running down his chin caught Lloyd's attention. He wiped them away using the sleeve of his Gi(the entire thing was torn almost beyond recognition,if he'd been a female he would have been embarrassed) and found that his top gum had bled. It had bled because he now had two razor sharp fangs that had forced their way out of his upper gum.
The change in his skin tone,eyes and teeth combined to make Lloyd Montgomery Garmadon,The Green Ninja and saviour of Ninjago look extremely evil. The idea that he looked evil made Lloyd smirk with satisfaction,after all his Oni side was the more dominant side now,rather than his Dragon side,or as it had previously been,his human side. Lloyd guessed he'd lost a bit of his humanity now that his Oni side had taken over. Not that he cared though.
Lloyd's hair had changed just a little. The top half of it(the roots) had turned purple,the colour of destruction,and it looked like it was bleeding out of his scalp.
Lloyd also felt less confined with his new apperance, it felt more fluid and changeable. So he experimented with this feeling a bit. He willed his new fangs to grow a bit longer,to make them more prominent,and to his delight they did. Lloyd made his fangs go back to how they had been, satisfied with the knowledge that as an Oni he now controlled his appearance.
Lloyd remembered yelling at Killow,his voice had once again gotten deeper. Then there was also the matter of his back.
Lloyd ran his hand over his back,it had some extra bones and joints that were only separated from his fingers by a single layer of skin. These new bones and joints were symmetrical on either side of his spine. Lloyd smirked. He knew what they were and he blamed his Dragon side for worming it's way into his new apperance,but it wasn't a bad thing.
When Lloyd was satisfied with his Oni sides manifestation the sand storm swirled,the mirror vanished and the sand began to glow. Lloyd felt himself pushed through the air and he landed with all the grace of a ninja on the central mast. He looked down at the SOG. The dark storm exploded in a mass of nearly blinding purple light. When Lloyd or Lloyd's dead body were nowhere to be found the SOG all looked around in confusion.
Harumi was furious. She needed the Green Ninja to bring Lord Garmadon back,and that crazy tornado had taken him away from her! She'd assumed it had killed him when his screaming had abruptly cut off. She had at least hoped to be able to retrieve a hair from his corpse,but noooooooo! The black sand had other ideas... Although the last time Lloyd had yelled about being put down his voice had sounded considerably deeper,almost as if it were coming from another person altogether. The Quiet One glanced over at her generals, Ultra Violet shrugged,Mr. E was silent,as usual,and Killow had his gaze dropped,he knew he'd done wrong when he let the Green Ninja go.
"Where is he?" Harumi demanded.
All of the Sons of Garmadon backed up in fear. No one wanted to face their leaders wrath.
"Well? Answer me! We need him to bring back the great Garmadon."
They all backed up further,there was now a considerable distance between the Quiet One with her generals and the rest if the Gang.
Harumi marched forward a few steps,when they heard a deep chuckle above them. It made her stop in her tracks.
"I'm right up here,your majesty" Lloyd called down, putting as much emphasis as possible on "your majesty". His deeper voice made it sound as if he knew exactly what she feared.
The voice made Harumi uncomfortable. This made Lloyd smirk,he was getting his own back.
Harumi dared to look up, she couldn't see the owner of the deep voice properly,just his silhouette. But the man gave off an aura of power.
Her mind processed it all in only a second. The figure made her feel an overwhelming sense of fear. Harumi showed her fear in the form of a brief gasp.
