Hey everyone. Hope you enjoyed to first chapter. Also, I would like some suggestions on what I should call this series. Thanks! For now the beginning of this chapter will have to descriptions of the characters.
Nick:Pure Breeded Sayian
Age:9 years old.
Hair:Short Straight up Black Hair.
Eyes:Black
Clothes:Blue and Black Sayian Armor. No scouter
Personalitie:Joyful, happy, enthusiastic. Isn't a fan of fighting but when he does he is focused.
Normal Tone:Joyful,Happy
Favorite moves: Kamehameha, (Spirit Bomb, but that come later in the story)
Jeremy:Pure Breeded Sayian. Nicks best friend.
Age:8 years old
Hair:Dont know how to describe it but he has Gohans hair from Revival of F.
Eyes:Black
Clothes: White and Black sayian armor
Personalitie:Calm, mediocre, never to angry or happy. Really focused when fighting.
Normal Tone:Calm
Favorite Moves:Kaioken, Final Flash
Raptor:Pure breeded sayian. King of sayians
Hair:Wild black spikey hair.
Clothes:Red and Black Sayian Armor. Blue Scouter
Personalitie:Always Angry, Cocky, Loves to kill
Normal Tone, Cocky, and Angry
Favorite Moves:Death Beam, Destructo Disk, and full energy barrage blast.
I am not going to describe the parents cause you'll know why later on. But Nicks dad's name his Adam and his Moms name is Amanda.
Chapter 2: The four of them,Nick, Jeremy, Nicks mom and dad were walking up to the palace.
Raptor was on his throne talking to a solder"What do you mean and alien species will attack us with their army!?" Raptor yelled at him. He was interrupted by another solder.
My superior Raptor, Nick, his parents and that other brat are here to see you!"
"Alright then, let them in!" He yelled at the solder.
They walked up to Raptor and stood in front of him
"What is it that's so important right now!?"
"Actually" Adam said " it's really important"
Raptor just looked at him blankly and didn't say anything.
"Raptor... We quit!" Adam yelled.
"Hmph so be it, but you'll just die, I'll kill you right here right now."
"And today's the day were you die here Raptor, after betraying you fellow sayians and killing everyone you see, we won't tolerate anymore!"
Raptor stood up and as soon as he went up, he went to punch Adam. He dodged Raptors punch. Amanda came in and kicked Raptor in his side. Raptor turned and backhanded her across the face. Raptor didn't even feel her kick. That's when Nick and Jeremy both attacked Raptor they laid two punches on him but Raptor threw Nick to the side and grabbed Jeremy's arm which was about to hit him and he kneed him under the chin and fired a ki blast at his face. He turned and elbowed Nick in the face but before he could do anything else. Adam came in a kicked him in the face into the wall of the Palace.
"Argh!" "You idiot, you'll pay!" Destructo Disk! Raptors disk went towards Adam but he jumped out of the way, after dodging it , the disk went towards Jeremy just getting the side of his stomach. Jeremy yelled in pain. He fell to the ground. Nick got angry and attacked. He could feel his ki rising and he was getting stronger.
"I hate yooou!" Nick screamed, he kicked Raptor in the gut punched him in the face and jumped back and charged his kamehameha.
"KAAA-MEEE-HAAA-MEEEE...HAAAAAAAA. The giant blue blast went towards Raptor. Raptor put his hands in front of him and tried to fight off the wave, Nick put more force into it and screamed causing the blast to explode on Raptor.
Nick stood breathing heavily. All he could see was a bunch of smoke. All of the sudden "ZOOM!". The last thing Nick saw was a skinny purple beam heading straight for him and he blacked out. Nick had a hole through his chest.
"NIIIICK!" Adam ran over to Nicks lying body on the ground. Hit lifted Nicks head of the forums and Nick kept trying to breathe but couldn't.
"D-d-dad" was all the boy could say.
"Its ok son, I need you to stay strong right now, you and Jeremy need to leave. Your mother will take you to a space pod and you'll be heading somewhere safe. Your mother and I will finish the job. I want you to train hard, and if we don't defeat Raptor, then keep training with Jeremy and get really strong.
Nick was having trouble hearing but he managed to say "o-ok"
"Its been nice having you as a son, I knew you were something else and were different, your nice. now go out there and make peace in the universe.
"Are you done yet?" Raptor said impatiently.
"Yeah I am but, your gonna be done in just a few seconds! AHHHHH!"
Adam powered up and went head on with Raptor. They were both punching and kicking at each other. Amanda came in a carried to two young sayians in the space ship. It had a gravity room and was medium sized. She placed them in the ship and set the ship to take off in 5 seconds. She left with here last being "I love you son!" And she went to join Adam in the fight.
"Hmph, sending those two kids off? No matters I'll just kill them sooner or later!"
"No you won't!" Adam jumped at him but Raptor went behind him and chopped him on his neck. He then attacked Amanda and knocked here down next to Adam.
"Well, well, look at this being humiliated. Thinking you can kill me! Hahaha! What a joke. Well say goodbye and I dint ever want to see you to again.
Adam and Amanda both looked at each other and held hands. They just smiled at each other. Raptor charged up a engery ball.
"Instead I'm bored, how about I just blow up this planet! Actually why not the whole system! Hahahahaha! That sounds like a great idea!
"But sir" one of the solders said. "What about us!?"
"What about you, you guys are usless. So then I'll be seeing you guys later then!
Raptor flew up and had his sayain pod next to him. He fired his energy ball at the planet. The sky turned dark and lava oozed up form the surface. Raptor left letting the planets explode and the others as well. The space ship was fast and already out of the system. So was the pod that Raptor was in. Witnessing nothing of the explosion the boys laid in bed asleep. Not knowing there whole system had exploded.
After Nicks hometown solar system being destroyed, will Nick now prepare for what's to Coen on his journey wherever he's going? Well have to find out in the next chapter of my series.
Hey y'all, I hope you have enjoyed my series so far. I am having writing this. Again leave me suggestions of all the things I told you to leave suggestions for. For now peace!
