hi everyone i didn't get good feed back on my last chapter so i am goin to try again

anywayz i just like to say that im new to writin this sort of thing so if anyone has any advice or comments plez dont hesitate to tell me

lets get started

then a huge gust of air came and koga's wolfs started to howl and bark in greeting. To the figure standing before them. Everyone looked to see the figure of that of a beautiful young girl standing before them. This girl was dressed in short black mini skirt a small dark violet top and black dolly shoes. She was accompied by two large black colored panther like cats. She had dark purple eyes almost like the night sky in color, her hair a equally dark color, which was very long and had it in two small meatballs and was divided into long pony tails (similar to sailor moons ). She had a nice build with a skiny waist to compliment her nice slim figure. She also wore two golden chains around her neck one which had a couple of fangs and the other longer one had a skull on it which fell a little above her belly botton.

when she spoke her voice ws filled with mischief and an air of desire for something. She spoke directly to Inuyasha and to no one else.

"you are the one named Inuyasha are you not?"

''What of it" was his response

With this answer a smile came across her lips and said " I am May-lin, I am to be your new gaurdian seeing as that bitch Mimi has failed to make her presence known. Fear not for I will protect you from your enemies." She said all of this with a tone that was filled with the upmost confidence.

"What makes you think i need your help or protection from anything and if i am to have a gaurdian it would still be Mimi."

"As we speak your Precious Mimi is getting what she deserves. An 'A' class ticket to hell."

"She was never worthy of taking care of the son of the great lord Inutaisho''

she started to get closer to him. The group had found that they could not move and as they tried to get away from the girl.

"inuyasha she has placed a paralyzing spell of some sort" miroku stated.

"Inuyasha help" Kagome pleaded as the girls large cats started to circle around them

'don't worry Kagome i'll take care of you '' Koga muttered as he struggled to take control of his body

"That will be the day. " inyasha shot at him

The girl known as may-lin placed her arms around Inuyasha and whispered in his ear in a very husky and lusting voice " I'll take care of you if you like i will kill them all to prove my devotion to you" As she was about to give him a kiss, she was struck by yet another girl.

"WHAT did I say i would do to you if you ever came to see MY Inuyashi?!"

Everyone stood there starring at her mouth open no one said a word. Inuyasha simply starred at her with a look of annoyance and a small smile across his lips.

"its about time you got here"inuyasha said to the girl

This girl was much lovlier than May-Lin. She was dressed in short jean shorts, a black top, and black and white addidas. This girl was followed by two large silver colored wolves with blue clear eyes. Her eyes were a light honey brown that could be mistaken for hazel and equally light brown hair which she wore loose and came up to her shoulders it she had one bang on each side of her face that came up to her cheek. She had large breast that complimented her hourglass figure. She like the girl wore two chain but hers were made of silver and she also had a fang on one of hers but along with the fang were two dog tagsand on the other that reached down to her belly bottonwas a silver crescent moon.

" Inuyasha your awake" she said before running to him and giving him a big hug. by that time the paralyzis spell had worn off. To everyones surprise he hugged her back

"Where you been" he asked " I've been waiting forever for you to come."

"Sorry, I had to take care of this thing with this guy" she answered. She reached up and started playing with his ears

"ummm... hi who are you" Kagome asked shyly.

"Are you the girl named Mimi" Sango intervined

Befor she could answer she was thrown down by May-Lin and the both of them started to...

thats it for today tell me wat u think

I know this was a sucky chapter i'm still setting up the story. - bye!