I am editing all the chapter I wrote 3 years ago...wow 3 years...
reviews are welcome, specially if is for makig the story better.
This is the episode 2 of the season 5, I don't own SRMTHFG
"chiro's pov"
I was telling the rest of the monkeys about what Antauri and I saw yesterday. they still were sleepy because of those spikes, so they weren't so interested about it...
Gibson was fixing Antauri's foot and Otto was fixing the super robot.
When Gibson finished fixing Antauri, they came to the room main room where we were sitting.
"Chiro , Antauri was telling me about that drawing,it seems odd to find a painting of monkey in such a deserted planet, perhaps if I go there to investigate it?". Gibson asked.
" Sure! We will wait here".
he immediately headed to the exit of the super robot.
Meanwhile:
"Mandarin I want you to get rid of those monkeys! they escaped their doom for the last time ". Skeleton king screamed, his voice as evil and cold as always
"But my lord how I going to that? I have tried and..." mandarin said softly but SK interrupted.
"Easy, go to the super robot and irrigate this ashes there, then come here as fast as you can." SK. Said grinning.
Otto entered to the room very tired and really dirty.
"where's Gibson ?" Otto asked
"He is on a cave to go... ". Nova answered.
" Why Gibson is in a cave? is he trying to catch some bugs? , no it can be… he HATE bugs! ...why gibson is in a cave?
"He is investigating some paintings or something." nova said. he jut gave her the 'I don't get it' face.
an hour later the team was just chilling in the main room, really bored when we noticed that sparks started looking at nova's eyes like 2 minutes and she started to creep out.
"why are you staring at me sparks? its kinda creepy"
"Because they are cute ". Sprx said quietly, Nova got red hugged him but sparks just ruined the moment with a
"they are kinda strange, you know, who has pink ayes!? "
nova PUNCHED sprx face living him all bruised. Nova went to her room marching to get away from him.
"great going romeo" gibson said
sprx got a bit confused, what he said was so wrong?... he just sighted and continued to relax on the floor.
I decided to go to Antauri's room, I found Antauri floating.
"Hi Antauri , what's up?"
"I just decided to meditate over what pix told me, I never heart it before. I just.." he said very softly.
whats it so important, it looked more like ancient jabbering to me.
but then the alarm went off and all the monkeys ran into the control room (except Gibson)
"what's wrong?" nova asked
"there is an intruder alert, it managed to open the super robot robot's entrance " antauri said
"the super robot ' s cameras recorded... mandarin!" sparks screamed
"Mandarin! Monkey team let's find him, he can't be far away!" I said
Chiro:
"monkey team , is chiro, have you found something?"
" no kid , I think it was a old video or something, probably he hacked our sistems and ran away an hour ago". Sprx said.
" or maybe it is gibson?". Otto said
"I don't think so otto, he was clearly orange". I said
" but we still have to keep looking, just in case" antauri added
Minutes passed of fruitless search whenI heard a small sound on my back.
"who's there! SHOW YOURSELF!"
"Chiro? It is really you?!". Someone said and I turn back and I saw a old woman, she started to hug me...okeeey
"Chiro a man told me that you were here, I can't belive you are alive! my dearest son". She said
"son? you mean...no but how...but". was this what pix meant? was this the right moment, then...
"wait, why are you in this planet , and why you abandoned my on shuggazoom? something is not right".
"I live here with your father , hiding from SK, we didn't wanted you live like us so we left you to in orphanage , it was so hard to us! I am so sorry!." She cried.
"well, he fond me, so... let me tell do sometin quick". I said, she could not possibly be my mom could she?
"monkey team , this is chiro , do you reed me? Monkey team?...there's not singnal".
"Chiro I am so happy you are here,look at you, you are so big! do you want to meet your dad? he has being waiting for you for so long my dear!"
I was holding back my tears, I never had a mother, she...i had to go, i figure out how to tell the others later
I went out of the super robot and she took me in to the dessert when it is assumed that house is. something wasn't right...but what if it was true?! its all I ever wanted, so I was willing to give her a chance.
Sprx:
[that kid is insane! We have looked 1 hour for mandarin, for sure he escaped]
"Sprx, stop talking to yourself and keep looking and keep looking". Nova said
"I am sure he escaped but we have look 1 hour! the super robot is not so big! ".
"c'mon Sprx don't be so exaggerated , we have searched 15 minutes ". Nova said
"maybe if we split we will find him faster".
"no, Antauri is already looking there, there is no need". I sighted...she was still mad at me, that's for sure
" Hey kid, this is Sparx , have you found something?... do you reed me? great, he is not answering.".
" Maybe he is fighting with mandarin, I will look for him , you and Otto stay here". Nova said
"don't worry, I will look for the kid, you stay here." I said
"I - I think I found someone!is a very shiny looking mandariiin!... Oh is just Antauri". Otto said, nova and antauri glared at him and I left
I was out of the super robot, I couldn't stay one more minute searching... I was bored.
I heard something crash on the dessert , I went a little closer to check what happend, but I saw a man walking out of the woods.
"excuse me local robot, where am I? my super advanced craft systems crashed when I was near this planet. now I am here, I need a ride". He said
"…CAPTAIN GALAXY! It… it is really you?"
"yes, I am the best pilot on the whole galaxy! nice you recognize me"
"do you want to see my spaceship, maybe you can help me fix it? if your tech is as advanced"
"YES! My name is SPRX-77, but you can call me Sparx! I am a great pilot too, you know"
"it is on the dessert, lets go...will see about that".
captain galaxy and sparx walked into the dessert, CG with a small grin in his face.
Nova
[we have to catch mandarin , then I will give him a punch …=)]
"Otto, maybe sprx was right, we need to split!". I said.
"I guess...but I hope this is not like in a scary movie that when you split up, thousand of monsters attack us and..."
"it's ok otto, we aren't in a movie...and we have fought a skeleton and million of his ugly minions, it's going to be ok"
"all right"
we went different ways searching for that sneaky pest but when 2 minutes passed and I heard a noise.
" mandarin?! Come here, don't be a coward, fight me!".
"I am not a mandarin and less a coward". A tall and muscular creamy brown robotic monkey said
"who-whooo are you!?" O my gosh...he is soooo perfect...
"me? My name is Alejandro monkey from the planet earth, and you? I have to know the most beautiful lady monkey of the universe". Alejandro said was this true love?!
"my-my name is Nova".
"you see? mi hermosa dama!"
"jejeje, you are so cute!...I am nova"
"you said that already, princes"
"did- did I? hehehe"
"do you want to go walk outside with me, damisela?"
"YES! Where to?"
"first we have to cross the woods, then the dessert and there is a beach at the end, we can go there".
"of corse we can...but I had to do something else...well, maybe later"
they both held their hands and went off the super robot.
Otto
[… waffles! ]
"mandarin is not here...". I said to myself then I felt that someone touched my helmet
"I SURRENDER MANDARIN!" I…said
"calm down Otto is Antauri".
"*wiuf* thank good, you scared my".
"I was trying to communicate with the rest of the monkey team but they didn't answer".
"maybe this is a trap!" I suggested
"probably..."
"We have to warn chiro!"
"I have tried but we are the only ones on the super robot...I can't feel nobody's presence".
and then we heard a horse whinny!
"Otto, it's me filip the waffle maker unicorn".
a freaking unicorn floated around...wooow
"...Otto what is that exactly...how?" Antauri asked
"I KNEW YOU WERE REAL! Don't you see, is FILIP!" I screamed and filip smiled
"Otto, this is an obious trap!"
"don't pay attention Otto, look I can do REAL waffles with my horn!" fillip said and he gave my a waffle...ohhhh yeahh
"hey Otto, do you want to go the waffle factory with me? it is near, we pass the woods then the dessert and the is a factory".
"Otto don't listen to him, he is lying, I sense it! plus...he is a floating little unicorn"
"okey I will listen to Antauri, sorry Filip". I said but I had a plan...
antauri rolled his eyes
"wait here filip" I whispered
"Antauri there is someone in that room!"
"otto...I did not see..."
"I am sure I saw something moving there!"
antauri looked away from us for a second and I ran as fast as I could.
"Don't worry Filip I will go to the factory with you". I took his hand...ups...hoof and ran into the dessert. yeyy!
Antauri
[I sense that something strange]
"Otto!". I said but no one answered me (he surely went to that 'factory')
I sighted...what was that?
I heard footstep on my left, someone was coming towards me, it was...chiro?
"antauri!"
"chiro! I thought you were in danger, something is wrong..."
"nothing is, antauri you wouldn't believe what just happend" he screamed really exited.
"what is it?"
"this place...is, its like paradise! in the middle of that desert! there are so many monks like pix, its so incredible, peaceful...they say that darkone was destroyed!"
could it...could there be more monks than I? could... no, I sensed something wrong, I didn't felt chiro's presence even if he was in front of me.
I got my ghost claws out as I saw 'chiro smirk'
"cleaver little pest aren't you?
that instant I felt a strange sensation in my back...I got stitched...with sleeping poison... it was indeed a trap.
I blacked out
"mi lord I have all the monkeys but I didn't locate the blue one". the ghost said
" FIND HIM, I want all of them". SK said
"yes my lord!"
Gibson
(what the hell happened here?)
"monkey team I have returned and I bring news about... monkey team?".
I looked on all the rooms for any sign of the team but it seemed as they had left...maybe they went to look for food, or maybe they are in my laboratory.
when I looked there I saw an old man with glasses looking and using my stuff.
"excuse me sir you are on my laboratory ,please if you were so kind to tell me why or how you got in the robot?".
. The man turned back and he putted something on his ear, like the on chiro gave jinmay
"oh! Wonderful a cybernetic monkey! Excuse me, what is your name little advanced friend?" he asked
"…DOCTOR SELFON FREDRIK! IS IT YOU?! My name is mr. hall gibson but please call me Gibson! I am your biggest fan!"
"really! is this your laboratory? quite Impressive, a super intelligent monkey?"
"Indeed, an IQ of 300 is quite impressive. tell me why someone like you is on a planet like this one?or in the super robot"
"why I am on a planet like this one? Because of some rocks that are found on julea's dessert, named fhr-372n. this great rocks have a material that can cure almost all illness! impressive right! your friends went there already, I just wanted to tell you this myself"
"really? Then , can I go with you to the dessert to look for this rocks too?" I asked softly
"I don't know what are you waiting for!" the I go with him to the dessert.
"this is just too easy" he whispered, but gibson didn't even heard the slightest thing
wow... this really needed to be fixed! did I wrote so bad 3 year ago!...duuudee.
well review :D you will make a very bored author happy!
chapter 3 is done, I'll try to update tomorrow.
