Just to make it clear I suck at details, I'm trying my best. I really am. If anyone wants to help me by giving me advice it would be really appreciated.

He was standing in front of the great marble tomb. Inside was the second most, foul being ever. Kronus. The young boy took of the lid. There was a great roar and a scream. The boy was gone the lid was back where it was in the first place. Blood was scattered across the room.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGG," Nico bolted upright in bed, sweat dripping down his face. He was in his room that he had in the Underworld. He was trembling.

Then He smiled, The Underworld. Home. The place I belong. This is where I'm respected and not judged.

Then it hit him. Like when he got in that fight at school… But he wasn't thinking about that. He was thinking about the way he had to get to Percy. He had to get to Percy alive.

Alive. One word could be the hardest thing to do. But that didn't matter. What mattered is how to get there. After thinking for a few minutes he decided a cab was safest. For now that would have to do. Until he could get: a train ticket. He was desperate he would take anything. At least; He thought he would… That was about to change.

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