Chapter 2
Firepaw was covered in scratches. He was battle training with Tigerclaw. He had made Firepaw keep his claws sheath, while the brown tabby fought with all his force . . . claws unsheathed. Since Firepaw didn't know anything about training he assumed this was the normal why to train an apprentice. But he decided not to mention it anyway.
When Firepaw got back he went straight to the medicine den. He hadn't seen the medicine cat yet so he was just going to tell them that he ran into a bramble thicket. He pushed his way into the medicine den and instantly stopped. He was staring straight into the eyes of the most beautiful she-cat he had ever seen. Their eyes were locked. He felt this emotion but he didn't know what it was.
"I . . . I'm s-spottedleaf, the medicine cat." she stammered.
"Hi, I'm F-firepaw, I ran into a bramble thicket." Firepaw explained.
Their stare broke. "Ok, I'll get you some herbs." She squeezed into the herb storage and got marigold out. Then she gently applied the politic.
"Thank you Spottedleaf," Firepaw said.
"Anytime," she replied
For a moment they held their gaze, but Firepaw had to go.
Three sunrises had passed and Firepaw was already picking up on clan ways. He grabbed a mouse from the fresh-kill pile and settled down to eat.
"Hey Graypaw, do you want to share?" he called out.
"Sure," said Graypaw sitting down beside him.
When they were done he and Graypaw went to catch up with Tigerclaw who was leading the sunhigh patrol. As they were patrolling the shadowclan border Firepaw smelled something.
"Tigerclaw, what is that, I've never smelled it before?" asked Firepaw.
Graypaw answered "that's fox, and it smells fresh." He explained to Firepaw.
"We should report it to blu- " but he never got to finish.
The fox, which had been hiding behind him in the undergrowth, pounced on Firepaw and ripped off his head.
The End
Hope you guys like twist endings, hahaha!
ok ok, i'm joking,just joking.
sorry about the whole dyeing thing, I had serious writers block last night. I might have the rewritten part of chapter 2 posted tonight but it will probably be up tomorrow. tell me what you think comment or PM me
-Frostheart
