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Lemmonluver |
2002-08-06 |
16 |
Anonymous |
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I hope to see the next chapte out soon. This is a great story |
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Kawaiidbgirlie |
2002-08-05 |
16 |
Anonymous |
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Eep! I'm sooo
glad you're back! You have to update this story again soon! I've been waiting
and waiting! I can't wait till they *finally* get together! |
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moonsaiyanprincess |
2002-08-03 |
16 |
Signed |
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This was awesome! What otehr twists could you possibly add to this? |
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lil debbie |
2002-07-28 |
16 |
Signed |
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glad to see an update. . . and nice twist to make it all a dream sequence! |
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Unsuspecting Victim |
2002-07-28 |
16 |
Anonymous |
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It's been so long I had to reread to figure out what was happening. I can't wait to see what's in store in the Bulma v. Vegeta battle ahead. It would be a little disappointing if she gave into him happily =\. Please don't do that like many have before you. More soon, awesome job. -Uv |
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TTrin |
2002-07-27 |
16 |
Signed |
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Very well done! |
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dbzkeri |
2002-07-27 |
16 |
Signed |
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luved it!!!!! go veggie!!! ^.^ |
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dbzkeri |
2002-07-16 |
15 |
Signed |
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that was some sweet lemony goodness!!! ^.^ update soon!!! |
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ashley |
2002-07-15 |
15 |
Anonymous |
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hahha! poor vegeta! it'll take a while for him to get 'em off, and then i will pity bulma when he finds her. lol |
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moonsaiyanprincess |
2002-07-15 |
15 |
Signed |
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This was great! I loved it! The lemon was great! Add more soon. :) |
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ren-chan (lilxren@aol.com) |
2002-07-14 |
15 |
Anonymous |
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yay yay
yay!! you updated!! hehehee |
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trunksgf513 |
2002-07-14 |
15 |
Anonymous |
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woooooooooooooah!! tricky tricky girl!! verrry nice chappy tho, i LOVED it!! ^_^ |
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Ren-chan |
2002-05-08 |
15 |
Signed |
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hey this is a great fic!
you're a very |
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Condesa |
2002-05-04 |
15 |
Signed |
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Can you put me on your mailing list? |
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Mahou of Mana |
2002-05-03 |
15 |
Signed |
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I will wait. I understand about the wait, so take as long as you
need! |
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leo lioness |
2002-05-03 |
15 |
Signed |
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I hope that you feel better soon! Rest up and don't worry about your readers. We're still eagerly awaiting you next chapter, but in the mean time there are many talented authors out there keeping us entertained. Thankyou for taking the time to update on the news and we all hope you start getting better! |
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Mahou of Mana |
2002-05-02 |
14 |
Signed |
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Write more! That was really greaT! Loveeeeeeee it! |
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Majin Danielle |
2002-04-22 |
14 |
Signed |
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Girl! You had better get to it! I want more! Writw
Write Write! |
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Majin Danielle |
2002-04-22 |
9 |
Signed |
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Well, I've gotten this far so far, and I plan on reading the
rest when I get the kids down. But the babies just woke up from their nap and
I need to get to them. So far I really like it! I love the idea of Bulma and
Chichi being Saiyan! Beautiful! And I don't like the way the king is acting.
But this is very intreguing and I can't wait to
finish it! |
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Frozenflower |
2002-04-13 |
14 |
Signed |
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Wow--this is a great story. Very--explicit, but good! Looking forward to the next chapter. |
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SaiyanMad |
2002-03-29 |
14 |
Signed |
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o_o |
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Baby |
2002-03-21 |
14 |
Signed |
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cool |
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Shadow Phenix |
2002-03-19 |
14 |
Signed |
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Well, Veggie burst her bubble, ne?? This is still good, so continue soon! |
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Gina |
2002-03-19 |
14 |
Anonymous |
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Yay! I'm so glad you updated! This chapter was really Kawaii! Keep it up! |
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moonsaiyanprincess |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Signed |
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That was great. Got any more? Please! |
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Ifonly |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Signed |
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O Wow! That was so cool! |
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dbzkeri |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Signed |
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cute chap! luv
getting bulma mad!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!! go veggie!^______^! |
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maxine (killaloe5@aol.com) |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Anonymous |
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ohhhhhh naughty naughty bulma! hehehe ^_^ and what is her brother going to think? hm.......... and by the way, does bulma know chichi? j/w ya know. |
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may |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Signed |
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This is awesome! Totally love this! So happy that Vegeta was able to rescue Bulma at the nick of time! |
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Kei |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Signed |
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Kei & Yuri: Ooohhhhh...SCANDALOUS!!! |
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caged bird |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Anonymous |
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uum, that was good. emotional rollercoaster but hey, themepark
rides are fun. |
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waterdragon |
2002-03-18 |
14 |
Signed |
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love the story, can't wait to see what bulma has in store for the king. :^) |
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Kelly |
2002-03-17 |
14 |
Anonymous |
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LMAO! oh man, great way to end a chapter! lmao |
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Shadow Phenix |
2002-03-16 |
13 |
Signed |
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wow! excellently written. serious and emotional. vegeta portrayal perfect! |
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Dee-Chan |
2002-03-16 |
13 |
Signed |
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Wahh the King is scary *hides* 0.0. Atleast Prince Vegeta came to the rescue before worse had happened to Bulma. Anyways have a great day and I'm looking forward to Chapter 14!! :D |
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kawaiimegami |
2002-03-10 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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awww how cute bulma in veggies arms!!=^^= finish it already!!! this is one of the best ive ever read and i want to finish reading it -pouts in a corner- im not movin til its done. |
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Arlia Ashton (arlia_ashton@hotmail.com) |
2002-03-02 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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OMG!! this si so good!! please, email me when you have the next chapter up!! i LUV your story!!! |
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Kelly |
2002-03-02 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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grea chapter! totally intense and I love this story! keep on writing!!! ^_^ |
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random person |
2002-02-28 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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woah..... great story. u really have talent.. WRITE MORE....i'm gonna check to see that this is updated .... i can't wait to read more.... so continue... and fast.. please? |
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Kiija (kiijaisis@hotmail.com) |
2002-02-27 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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*waves to everyone again before clobbering Kiyasha
with a mallet* BAKA! You have a great knack for leaving things off in the
worst places dontcha? |
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moonsaiyanprincess |
2002-02-26 |
13 |
Signed |
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Neither can I! This was good! Don't stop, I wanna see more! |
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Khris (khris418@yahoo.com) |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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Thank U 4 updating, I was afraid U had decided not 2 continue the story. I'm glad U R, cause it's really good. The King is so dead!! Can't wait 4 more. Thanks again!! Read U later. |
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AiTeAnE |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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hjehehe, this one's goin
into my faveorites... good stuff... not one miuch for lemons, but still good...shit, i hate having a limit on my intenet,
i gtg soon, u..keep writing cuz this be good stuff and i
hate you cuz you write too good and i wanna steal your writing
powers. hehe that'd be
cool! hehe anyways, Ain't
King Veg head gona be
slightly mad at Veggie-chan? wat's
he gonnsa do? What's bulma
going to do? WHat's Veggie gonna do? AHHHHHH! write more!!! |
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Kiija |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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^---- This is a link that will lead you to an email address that
all PERSONAL FLAMES can be sent to from now on. |
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Camilla |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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Poor Bulma. (Though I must say lys003 shouldn't go calling names when they were warned, they need to learn to read warnings or heed them!) This story is great, I can't wait for more! Oh, and a common mistake but one I like to point out to people, it is a throne room, thrown is an action throne is a noun. Amazing how often I've seen that though! ;P Keep up the good work! |
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Maxine (killaoe5@aol.com) |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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AWWWWWWWWWWW POOR BULMA!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe it either! Please, Please make the King die a slow and painful death by Vegeta! The Bastard!!!!!!!!!! Vegeta was really sweet, probably one of the few times that he is ever like that in any fic! Please hurry with the next chapter!! |
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lys003 |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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you bitch how dare you write something like
that the king raping her euuuugggg(shudder) |
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lilxninja (lilxninja@yahoo.com) |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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*YAY* you've update! great story!! i can't wait to see what happens on the next chapty!! hehee! keep up the great work! hurry!! hehee |
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dbzkeri |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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ehhh... very
disturbing... BUT I LIKED IT ANYWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe. |
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MintlytheBADgoddess |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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*tear* bulllllma!! why didn't you defend yourself. poor bulma. I hope the king didn't break her spirit :(. write more soon! -kris |
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dragon's moon |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Anonymous |
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I really love your ficcie! Such an original plot! Please hurry with chappie 14!!! (^*^) |
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Kei |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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Whoa, that was...dare I say it? That was ah...great. Forgive me
but uh...I normally don't read rapes, due to my own personal experience, but
I read yours out of support and because the only way to get over my feelings
is to confront them. Anywho that was still good and
hope that King Vegeta dies. DIE YOU SONUMBITCH! DIE! MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAA!! |
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Kei |
2002-02-25 |
12 |
Signed |
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*blinks and looks around at everyone in the computer lab* Oh if only they knew how I felt. Damnit now I need a nice cold shower. Grr...when will I learn never to read the lemons while I'm at school? Oh, that's right...NEVER. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAAA!! That was an absolutely delightful lemon. Lemonade anyone? Hehehehe. Well onto the next chapter. |
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Daniela |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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Oh, poor Bulma!! I hope king Vegeta will have a terrible death!! However, now the girl is clearly afraid, so Vegeta will have to console her, right? |
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SaiyanMad |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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O_O omg!!!!!! how
cool is veg????? i luv e story and am glad
tht u r carrying on wiv dis story. i
betta go, im @ school and
were not sposed 2 b on the net ^.^ |
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Sorceress Fujin |
2002-02-25 |
13 |
Signed |
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WOnderful story so far! Must continue soon! |
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lilxninja (lilxninja@yahoo.com) |
2002-02-23 |
12 |
Anonymous |
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we want more!! we want more!! COMON it's been about a month already and when will the story continue?? wahh.. great story, can't wait until the next chapter comes out.. will it? WE WANT MORE!! WE WANT MORE!! hurry pleasE!! bye |
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Selenity Jade |
2002-02-15 |
12 |
Signed |
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Damn.... *has to learn patience now* More would be nice. *grins* I want to see how B/V get together. *hee* Nice job!! |
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Dee-Chan |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Anonymous |
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With Chi Chi bonded that pimp daddy(well he's a mack daddy too or maybe a slut..can a guy be a slut?) Yamcha can't get his grubby first class hands on her. Come on Yamcha is going out with all those different girls. :D |
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Dee-Chan (Polgara_17@hotmail.com) |
2002-01-21 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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I'm review #100!!!!^______^*dances around happily* I keep on thinking that Kakarott is gonna kick Yamcha's ass..0.0* after what happened in his lil regen tank dream. :D |
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MintlytheBADgoddess |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Signed |
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more b/v! |
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veronica (veroki1125@aol.com) |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Anonymous |
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well im glad kakkorot and chichi finally mated and that hes not having disgusting thoughts about his sister anymore! cant wait to hear more about vegeta and bulma though! |
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Lady Dark Mark |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Signed |
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Oh that was great! I was hoping... more like praying that his dream wouldnt occur! Oh gosh am I glad that didnt happen, and this was like a dream for Goku anyhow come true! Superb |
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leo lioness |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Signed |
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Sooo... Kakarotts got some kinda masterbation fetish... heh heh, kinky I can't WAIT to see what is going to happen between Bulma and Vegeta.... that will be interesting to say the least! Please hurry and update more, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
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kelly |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Anonymous |
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not bad, not bad at all!!! |
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mary (kumary0518@aol.com) |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Anonymous |
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great chapter. |
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dbzkeri |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Signed |
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great chap!!! update
soon plz!!! |
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Yatsuna |
2002-01-21 |
12 |
Signed |
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Yay, Kakarott
and Chi bonded! I can't wait for the next chappie I
wanna see what happens between Bulma and the
Prince! |
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Senaca |
2002-01-20 |
12 |
Anonymous |
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That was a beautiful lemon/chapter. Please continue. |
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NightZone |
2002-01-18 |
11 |
Signed |
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i love your story it's very well writen and it isn't like every other b/v get together out there please hurry up with the next chappy |
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Kiyasha |
2002-01-17 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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I just finished chp. 11. I thought it was great, the whole story I mean. Anyway, please write more. I'm looking forward to the rest. ^_^ |
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Lady Dark Mark |
2002-01-16 |
11 |
Signed |
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Oh dear! I thought that was real for a minute! You had me worried! Oh well, will continue to r and r as the chapters come! |
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2002-01-14 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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kewel chap!!!^_^!!! update soon!!! |
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mary (kumary0518@aol.com) |
2002-01-14 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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great chapter. |
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MintlytheBADgoddess |
2002-01-14 |
11 |
Signed |
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I really like this fiction. :D I can't wait to read what happens next. More B/V please! -kristy |
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Polka Dot |
2002-01-13 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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Well of course Goku will get there in time, I mean Chichi would have to be and idiot to really bond with Yuchy Yamancha. |
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Senaca |
2002-01-13 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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That wasa very good chapter. Please so continue. |
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Sally |
2002-01-13 |
11 |
Anonymous |
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Sometimes I really worry about Kakarott. |
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Gohan's Girl |
2002-01-13 |
11 |
Signed |
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Oh my GOODNESS. T-the begining, it nearly gave me a heart attack. chichi/yamcha.....ok, just now right. But you had me going. I was like "NO WAY!". But none-the-less it was good. Keep up the good work. |
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Kei |
2002-01-13 |
11 |
Signed |
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OH. MY. GAWD. The beginning was so evil. I thought that ChiChi had actually mated with Yamcha.
At first it seemed like a dream, but when they turned around and saw Kakarrot there I-I didn't know what else to think. Kakarrot better get there in time, right guys? *Kakarrot and Turles stand
behind Kei growling menacingly* |
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jeniffer (jenifferperez@yahoo.com) |
2002-01-11 |
1 |
Anonymous |
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hey email me at jenifferalonzo@msn.com so u can tell me how to submite my fan fic plz and ur fanfic rocks!!!!^_~ |
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Penchy-chan |
2002-01-07 |
10 |
Anonymous |
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Yay!! More, more, more!!! I want him to hunt her down, claim her, mate her and brush it in his otousama's ugly face for good!!!! Uh, what happens to Kakaroto and his trauma over watching Bulma in the bathroom? And I want Vejiita a SSJ, K? K... Ja.- |
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Daniela |
2002-01-07 |
10 |
Signed |
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I don't think I like very much King Vegeta in this story.(Well, that's obvious, he seems too much interested in Bulma). I hope Vegeta will keep an eye on him! The story is really captivating, I'm waiting for the next part! |
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Senaca |
2002-01-06 |
10 |
Anonymous |
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Ooohhhh! That was a ver interesting chapter. Please continue. |
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Kei |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Signed |
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Sugoi. But what about Kakarrot- *Turles clears his throat and stares at Kei* I'M ASKING ABOUT HIM AND CHICHI! SHEESH!! You're not going to totally forget about them are you? I hope not...because they are my all time fav couple ^-^ what else can I say? Keep it up. Ja'ne. |
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Kei |
2002-01-05 |
9 |
Signed |
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YAY!! BULMA KICKED SOME TAIL!! What about Kakarrot
and ChiChi? Will ChiChi
take Kakarrot back? There's just one great chapter
after another. Keep it up you two. Psst...if she doesn't I'll take Kakarrot.
Hehehe. |
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Kei |
2002-01-05 |
8 |
Signed |
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That wasn't much of a strike back was it? ROFLMAO. Yamcha just can't seem to catch a break, can he? Not that
he deserves one. Hmmm...I wonder what Kakarrot is
going to talk to ChiChi about? Possibly bonding?
Hey Turles! You wanna
bond with me? *Kei asks sitting down next to Turles
as her tail wags teasingly between them* You know you want to. |
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Kei |
2002-01-05 |
7 |
Signed |
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He nipped her? Why the hell did he do that? I wonder? *Kei
extends her hand to Turles as he just looks at her*
Grr...FINE THEN. BE THAT WAY!! Stupid baka. This is
another great chapter. |
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Kei |
2002-01-05 |
6 |
Signed |
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Poor Raditz-chan. Don't worry I make
it better. *Kei runs over, bandages Raditz's tail
and kisses it* Is that better? |
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Kei |
2002-01-05 |
5 |
Signed |
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*Kei stares blankly at her screen* Wow. That was a *swallows* interesting chapter. Ya-ya know I think I need a shower. Yeah a shower would be good right about now. Oh! And before I forget don't let ChiChi bond with Yamcha. That's just not right. |
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Dee-Chan (Polgara_17@hotmail.com) |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Anonymous |
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Bulma a queen? Wouldn't more than just pride make up the personality of someone with royal bearings? Seems like Ou Vegeta is up to no good. |
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Gohan's Girl |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Signed |
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OOOOOOOOO! Good plot. Luv it. hurry with the next ch. |
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Dee-Chan (Polgara_17@hotmail.com) |
2002-01-05 |
9 |
Anonymous |
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Lol looks like that guard might be having children anytime soon *smirks*. |
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Dee-Chan (Polgara_17@hotmail.com) |
2002-01-05 |
8 |
Anonymous |
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Wahh I didn't know there was a new chapter out but theres 3 of them 0.0 lol oh well that's just more for me to read! |
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Celipa (ssj2_celipa@bbzmail.com) |
2002-01-05 |
6 |
Anonymous |
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just thought u ud like 2 no that turles is a clone of goku. but an interestin story |
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SaiyanMad (can't b bothered 2 sign in) (laz_b2001@hotmail.com) |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Anonymous |
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yay keep it goin' in there!!!! Man check out freaky attitude of King V.!! anyway, luv fic, HURRY UP WIV NXT CHAPPY |
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trunksgf513 |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Signed |
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ooooooooooooh...wats gonna happen? please write more!! more more more more!!! |
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Baby |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Anonymous |
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i think its quite good. please hurry with the next chapter! |
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Yatsuna |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Signed |
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Hehehehehehe that was a cute
little pubishment my only quam
is that I feel Buma was too submissive for her
character, but then again there's alot of OOCness in my story too so I dun blame you. Keep writing, I am really enjoying this story. |
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dbzkeri |
2002-01-05 |
10 |
Signed |
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great chap!!! plz update soon!!! |
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SaiyanMad |
2002-01-02 |
9 |
Signed |
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this story is just soooooooooooooooooo ultra gr8!!! keep ritin, yeah? and a bit more lemon wud b nice *^.^* rite more soooooooonnn |
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Senaca |
2001-12-25 |
9 |
Anonymous |
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That was 2 very good chapters. Please continue. Merry Christmas and Happy new Year. |
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dbzkeri |
2001-12-25 |
9 |
Signed |
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PLZ write more soon!!! luv the story!!! *^_^* |
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may |
2001-12-24 |
9 |
Anonymous |
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Wonderful story! Exciting chapters! Amazing Bulma! |
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Sally |
2001-12-24 |
9 |
Anonymous |
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This is getting very good! Put the next chapter out soon! |
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POAS |
2001-12-24 |
9 |
Signed |
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Oh Darn... no MORE?! MORE!! |
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Baby |
2001-12-24 |
9 |
Signed |
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really, really, good. please put out another chapter soon. |
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Yatsuna (fatalbeauty69@hotmail.com) |
2001-12-18 |
7 |
Anonymous |
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Great story! I like how you go into so much detail, it really adds to the story. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I'm dieing to find out what Vegeta has in store for Bulma. |
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Senaca |
2001-12-09 |
7 |
Anonymous |
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Wow! That was a very good chapter. Please so do continue. |
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bulma16 (too lazy to review) (clairesse0123@yahoo.com) |
2001-12-09 |
7 |
Anonymous |
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good! i liked it a lot! more and keep up the good work! dont forget to tell me when u update@! |
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Lady Dark Mark |
2001-12-09 |
7 |
Signed |
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Wonderful! I just love the Prince's aditude! It just... suits! |
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mela989898 |
2001-12-09 |
7 |
Signed |
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Ooooooooooh Next Chapter Please! |
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Dee-Chan |
2001-12-09 |
7 |
Anonymous |
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The reaction to what Bulma was wearing..twice sent me into a fit of giggles, I could just imagine it entirely in my head, that happening. |
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Dee-Chan (Polgara_17@hotmail.com) |
2001-12-09 |
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yay! A new chapter it's nice to see some plot development a fic that just has sex in it just isn't as good as one with some plot too! ^_~ |
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Daniela |
2001-12-09 |
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Uh uh! Things seem to get VERY interesting! I'm eagerly waiting the next part. Keep going!! |
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mary (kumary0518@aol.com) |
2001-12-03 |
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great story keep it up. |
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Lady Dark Mark |
2001-12-03 |
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REVIW??? Why would nt we review? Besides this fic is insanely wonderful....... The sex is great as well as accurate and the general plot line is wonderful! Thank you |
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Senaca |
2001-12-02 |
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Very cool. Please continue. |
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BULMA16 (2 LAZY TO SIGN IN) (CLAIRESSE0123@YAHOO.COM) |
2001-12-02 |
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KEWL STORY! YOUR POOR FRIEND U HIT HER!! AH WELL, I KNOW HOW U
FEEL! :) :) LEMON, NOW!! GR8 JOB JUST HURRY WITH THE
NEXT CHPT, OKAY? |
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celeste jacobs |
2001-12-02 |
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great story!! It is so interesting and i'm waiting for the next chapter!! Hurry!! |
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Penchy-chan |
2001-12-02 |
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Now... That was weird... Goku getting aroused on Bulma? Please, don't tell me you're gonna put incest in here!!!?? Isn't this supposed to be a B/V , G/CC? Enlighten me here, oh, wise one... Cause I don't get what you're trying to pull up. Though I don't mind, hanging in suspense just makes things more exciting. Oh!! And the lemon did get to me, MORE!!! |
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veronica |
2001-12-02 |
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i am curious as to why kakkarot is thinking about his sister in this way. that is really gross! does him being a nasty perve have any relavance to the story? i really like your story alot and im very curious and scared as to where u r going with that. eeeeewwww! i love chapter 4 it was not lame at all! i think you did it perfectly! |
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Honzo |
2001-12-02 |
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Not a bad not at all pretty good,Valger and a tad bit distasteful and the sister thing was a bit over board it shattered my minds eye other than that it was good but in the future no more getting excited over sisters just too damn freaky..but I must admit I kinda like naughty freaky things just not thinking about relatives it's too beyond me....forgive me if I sound too disgusted with this chapter I'm not just didn't like the sister thing well enough of that please continue more of this story it's pretty good |
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Baki |
2001-12-02 |
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This is a good chapter my favorite to be exact that's why I reviwed it,you captured the Princely manner of Vegeta quite well I love how he was disgusted by the low level saiyan trash,woman below his standards"rotten woman" extremely funny I was laughing so hard ah....any why great story your right it is different from the others nice twist tehe ^_^ |
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Dee-Chan |
2001-12-02 |
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I never really thought of it but last chapter it didn't say it
was Vegita..atleast I
don't think it did, could it have been Yamcha?o.0 |
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eve |
2001-11-30 |
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well you lost me with the last chapter but the story is still good please update soon |
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Dee-Chan |
2001-11-30 |
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*blushes* ahhhh was it just a dream?o.0 |
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Dee-Chan |
2001-11-30 |
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Gah Vegita's turned into a stalker!! Lock up your daughters!! Hide the food!! Hope he beats up your brother because his name reminds him a carrot. j/k |
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Dee-Chan |
2001-11-30 |
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It just gets more and more interesting.. hehe ^_^ a suicidal Yamcha lol |
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Dee-Chan |
2001-11-30 |
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You're right that was different with a twist..a lemon-twist..yep I'm drinking a pepsi lemon twist.. ^_^V |
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Polka Dot |
2001-11-29 |
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I think there was something missing between chapters 3 and 4. Poor Bulma, I think. |
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mela989898 |
2001-11-29 |
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Great lemon !! I wish you would get another chapter out sooner but if not I will be looking for 5 around x-mas |
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Senaca |
2001-11-26 |
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Wow!... That was a damn good chapter! Please do continue. |
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katie |
2001-11-26 |
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This is good. a anouther chapture would be nice |
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SSJChibiB (SSJChibiB@Lycos.com) |
2001-11-26 |
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Was this chapter supposed to be a dream sequence? |
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Kei |
2001-11-25 |
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AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! My God are you evil. EVIL, I TELL YA. EVILLLLLLLLLLL!!! Turles:Kei, you've said that about all the cliffhanger stories. Kei:I just want attention. ;__;. Anyway that was a great chapter and I hope you update before Christmas. Raditz? (Raditz walks in munching on a turkey leg) I want you to write this down and remember it, okay? Promote Kiyasha's fic 'Imperial Amusements' in all of my next updates. Let's see that means I gotta work on...1,2,3...4 fics. Damnit. Anyway this is a great story. Ja mata. |
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Kei |
2001-11-25 |
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YAY BULMA GIRL!! Show that punk ass, poor excuse for a Saiyan guard Yamcha what's what. This was an excellent chapter. I'm really loving this story and if ff.net still had fav authors & fav stories up and running. You would definitely be on the list. Anyway let's get to chapter 4. ::sniff sniff:: Do you smell that, Goku-chan? Goku:I smell left over turkey and dressing. (Goku starts to drool) Kei:(sweat drops)No, not that you bottomless pit. I smell a lemon. Goku:That's only because she said there was going to be a lemon. (Goku's points at the quote) Kei:Go eat the left overs before Raditz, Turles and Chibi Goku do. (Kei watches as Goku runs off giggling) Kami, why do I love the man? Chapter 4 here I come!!! |
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Kei |
2001-11-25 |
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So that's why Yamcha's dating Bulma. That rat...both of them. I wonder how Kakarrot and Bardock will react when they hear this news? If they're like my father and brother they won't like it at all. |
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veronica (veroki1125@aol.com) |
2001-11-25 |
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i love this story!!!! you are too cruel for leaving it off the way u did. cant wait to read more!! |
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Kei |
2001-11-25 |
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Oh...this is really interesting. I agree that is a dumb law but when your species is killed on purging missions. I guess you gotta find some way to perservere. Anyway this is a great chapter. Onward to chapter 2! |
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Inei Tenshi |
2001-11-25 |
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Wow. I really like where this is going. ^_^ Not to many good writers left out there. I'm lucky to have discovered a new one. ^_^ I hope to see the next chapter out soon! |
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Penchy-chan |
2001-11-25 |
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INTENSE!!!!! I love it. Update soon. Make it double soon. And try to be a little slower the next time, more foreplay, more intercourse!!! And care to explain how did Bulma get to the forest, naked, and Vegeta was already hunting her. Ja matta ne.- |
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kiyasha (kianomi@hotmail.com) |
2001-11-25 |
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hi all, I want to think all of you how have read and reviewed my story. I am diligently working on the next chapters. I may take pity on you and post them before christmas. i haven't made up my mind yet. *evil glint in her eye* so until then enjoy!!!! *winks and waves* |
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Quimberly |
2001-11-25 |
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I'm really enjoying your story and that would be wicket and cruel to make us wait that long. Plaese be nice and have it out soon!! Ja ne! |
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Diamond Girl |
2001-11-25 |
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Wow! That was rough. Good chapter, can't wait for the next one. |
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Vincent Nicoladse (v.nicoladse@worldnet.att.net) |
2001-11-25 |
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These stories were great and i have read all the ones you have written please tell me about any new ones you make and send and e mail to me as soon as you get this |
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Dbz fan |
2001-11-25 |
4 |
Anonymous |
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great who was the guy i thought it was vegeta but not sure? i know that the female was bulma. |
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silver |
2001-11-25 |
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it is great please make the next chapter soon |
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Kiyasha |
2001-11-25 |
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Hiyas! Just to let you guys know we fixed some of the oddities in chapter four! I want to know how this chapter made you feel? O.o You don't have to go into details. Just tell me if it excited you or not... ^__^ |
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moonsaiyanprincess |
2001-11-25 |
4 |
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Woah! I want more. Please continue. |
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ronin (veggiechan@xtra.co.nz) |
2001-11-25 |
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Anonymous |
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Yes please write more!!! |
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Dbz fan |
2001-11-24 |
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Anonymous |
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Great, write more k!?. |
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Omocha |
2001-11-24 |
3 |
Anonymous |
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Thi is really good. Please continue, I cant wait to read more! :D |
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Kiija |
2001-11-24 |
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*waves* Hi all!! I am the draft editor for the story. I am amazed at how many reviews we have already. I am posting here to let you all know we have chapter three done and she is slaving away at chapter four as I speak! *evil grins as she beats Kiyasha on the fingers with a riding crop* Back to work woman! Yeah!! Oh and any grammatical errors are caused by the Word Html translation in ff.net. I slaved through both chapters fixing those things. other than than you can email me as well if you find anymore of those, I would really like to know about them. I control the compy she sla... works on so I can fix them easily. ^__^ Chapter three should be up in a day or two. |
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jess |
2001-11-24 |
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wheres chichi ??? |
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Tiffers |
2001-11-24 |
1 |
Anonymous |
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Pretty, please put up the next chapter an I'll love you 4-ever!!! ^_^ |
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Sally |
2001-11-24 |
2 |
Anonymous |
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Please put your next chapter out soon! This is the best story I have read so far! (Well part of the story anyway) |
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Linzy (AngelWillow2000@aol.com) |
2001-11-24 |
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Excellent, The plot flows well, and the descriptions are perfect. My one nitpick is that I've noticed that you have a few grammatical and structral errors, but those are easily fixed. Keep writing, and feel free to e-mail me^.^ |
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Baby Trunks |
2001-11-24 |
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just please post the third chapter |
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