Editor's note: Well, even though I only got one review, I decided to update, because there is more of a chance of people reading it if there are more words... :P I'm obviously desperate. I decided that since I didn't write the story, I can't call them author's notes, so they are editor's notes, because I beta read the whole story... Sorry if I miss anything! Well, if anyone is reading this, thank you for reading, please review, my friend wants to feel loved... She needs support on her story! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!
(Iki's POV)
You had just arrived at the entrance of the leaf village.
YM- 'wow, this is huge!' You walk up and ask for entrance and of course they can't deny a cute little girl, so they let you in. You walk in and see a lot of people.
YM- 'this might make stealing a little bit harder.' You look at a clock through a store window. It was about 7am.
YM- 'well a lot of people are out in the morning…I guess.' You walk about 3 meters from a grocery store and stop. You apply chakra to your hands and feet for quick movement, and then you shoot into the store grab about 2 loaves of bread and a thing of jam and run (with chakra so your barely even seen).
Store owner- "HEY! GET BACK HERE, THEIF!" He ran after you for like 3 minutes then stopped.
YM- 'crud he saw me! Uggg…got to go faster.' You sped up and ran from roof to roof and jumped into the forest. You ran to a branch and sit down. You take one of the loaves of bread and spread jam on it.
YM- 'yummy…food.' You finish and stick the jam and bread in your bag. You walk back to the village and hope that the guy didn't see what you looked like. You just walk around town.
YM- 'how many people live here! There's like a million people!!' You come across what seems to be an academy.
YM- 'maybe I could become a ninja…or well try.' You walk up to the building and enter through the doors.
YM- 'why is everything so super sized?!' You come to a door that was a little open and see a class of ninjas who look like they're testing to become a ninja. You watch as the pre-ninjas do transforming arts. One guy came up and did the Hokage and his nose and face were totally demented.
YM- 'I wonder if that's really what the Hokage looks like? But everyone else seems to have a different pattern down pat.' You laugh at his attempt a little and you see about 20 eyes shoot at you at the same time.
YM- 'ok that's creepy!' You back away from the door and the teacher comes over and opens the door.
Teacher- "hello, who are you?" he squatted to even out your heights.
You- "STAY AWAY ROBOT PEOPLE!" You turned and began to run but the teacher grabbed your hand. He laughed at what you said.
Teacher- "don't worry we're not robots. I'm Iruka sensei, what's your name?" He looks down at you.
You- "Iki." You say as your hair falls over your face.
Iruka- "how old are you?"
You- "11! Any other questions!?" He was surprised at your sudden outrage.
Iruka- "nope, no more questions except one."
You- "what is it?" You tilt your head in a cute way and your hair falls on your face once again.
Iruka- "would you like to help me with my class?" You nod with enjoyment.
YM- 'finally something to do!'
Iruka- "very well…come on." He stood up and you held his hand and went in. You felt eyes on you.
Iruka- "ok class meet Iki." Everyone said hi and you noticed one boy who was very loud.
Iruka- "Iki's going to help me run the class today, ok?"
Everyone- "ok." He handed you a stack of papers and told you to hand them out to the children.
Iruka- "if you have any trouble matching people with their names just ask someone." You nod and look down.
YM- 'if I match physical traits with the scores and name I should get it right! Ok first one Ino…um…it's a girl, pretty smart, and she writes with a purple pen.' You look up for a girl with a purple pen, and you find one! She was sitting behind the loud mouth. You walk over to her.
You- "are you Ino?"
Ino- "Yep!" You hand her, her paper and look at the next paper.
YM- 'Choji? It has grease stains so it's the fat boy.' You walk over and give him the paper. You continue till you have your last paper and walk over to a raven-haired boy.
You- "excuse me… are you sasuke?" He nodded and you gave him his paper. You walk back up to Iruka and tell him your done. He nods and you plop on the floor cross-legged.
Naruto- "Hey Iruka why don't we see if Iki can transform or something."
Iruka- "would you like to Iki, or can you?"
You- "You bet!" You look down (your hair fell over your face) and make the hand seal.
You- "TRANSFORM!" You turn into Naruto and smile. You here a few people mention how good you were. You look down at yourself.
You- "wait, if I were Naruto I'll look like this." You transformed into a deformed Hokage. A Lot of people laughed at your joke except Naruto.
You- "sorry Naruto." You sit back down and look down; your hair had once again fallen over your face.
Iruka- "ok lunch time every, be back in a half an hour." You looked at him and he nods as in you could go outside. You walk out and eat your bread and jam.
Sakura- "Hey Iki where did you come from?" You looked at her with a cute little face.
You- "earth?" She smiled at you.
Sakura- "I mean what country." You looked confused (cute face with a tilt).
Sakura's mind- 'she's SO cute.'
You- "earth?" Sakura looked dumb struck.
Sakura- "oh you mean the earth country… hehehe... sorry." You nod and frown.
You- "I had to run from a mean person…who killed my family, I mean mommy." You looked up at her with sad eyes.
YM- 'sucker.'
Sakura- "oh my god I'm so sorry. You should tell Iruka sensei Iki."
You- "why? He can't bring her back." She looks at you.
Sakura- "so no one else will be hurt by the person, that's why." You looked sad, and then looked up smiling. She smiled back at you. You stand up and clutch Sakura's hand and walk toward the buildings. You come to the classroom and stop.
Sakura- "I'll stay here, you go and tell him." You gave a scared little look and entered the door. You saw 3 people in the room. Iruka sensei, a man who looked to be the Hokage, and a grey haired man.
YM- 'that one guy looks like me.'
You- "oops I'm sorry… I didn't mean to interrupt you. But I need to tell Iruka sensei something because I told sakura and she said I should tell him." They looked at you with different expressions: the grey haired man looked shocked.
Kakashi- 'that girl she looks like me.' The Hokage looked serious and Iruka looked worried.
Iruka- "what is Iki?" You walked over to him and pulled on his shirt so you could whisper in his ear. He bent down.
You- "I'm here because I'm running from a scary person." All of a sudden his eyes went wide.
Iruka- "who are you running from?" this caught the others attentions.
You- "demon." They looked surprised.
Iruka- "why are you running from the demon?"
You- "it came and killed my village and my mommy so I ran!" You started to cry during the last sentence.
Grey dude- "whose your mom?"
You- "Kaze, Ai, why?" This shocked him.
Grey guy- "so your from the earth country?" You nod.
Hokage- "Iki is it? you nod what is your whole name?" You do a big smile.
You- "Hatake, Iki, sir." This shocked everyone in the room.
Grey dude- "WHAT!?" You looked confused.
You- "well in the earth country my mommy told me to use Kaze as my last name but before she died she told me that my real last name was Hatake. Why?" This shocked everyone even more.
YM- 'why are they staring at me?'
Hokage- "Kakashi I didn't know you had a daughter!" This shocked everyone including you.
YM- 'WTF!!!??? He can't be my DAD!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!' You just stared at each other dumb struck.
Iruka- "but lord Hokage that's impossible, Iki said she was from the earth country!"
You- "AHHHHH!!!!!!! My mom said something of a surprise in this village but not a DAD!! AHHHHHHH!!" You fell to the floor holding your head.
Iruka's mind- 'that's the loudest I've ever heard her.' Kakashi just stood there dumb struck.
Kakashi- 'I'm a father!!'
YM- 'HOLY CRUD!' You were shaking your head in your hands.
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