((First of all when I read my first review I would like to say something's:

First of all Nyx is not real! She is a fan made character that is not real, and will not be any of my stories. Considering she is not very original, and is not worth writing about (now don't hate me for this, it's an opinion). But I never said that she was in the story, just read the summary!

Second, reading that made me somewhat sad…. I was so happy that I thought of it! ~ And how you wrote that review was kind of rude…. And I don't like it… Now I am not going to block you. You can still read, and review just be nicer next time…..

No one can have an opinion on my story yet because I haven't written any of it yet.

I am planning to make this fun, and awesome, so don't put me down because I am a happy person, and if you make a happy person sad, they get SAD! So be careful of what you say!~

That is all I am not mad or anything, like I said I am a happy person. Plus this was inspired by other writers out there so don't complain… Now on to the story! ~))

-Chapter 1: Adopting

It was a lovely day in ponyville, and one mare in particular was reading a book.

"Hmmm… It's so lonely in this house I just wish that I had a filly or colt to call my own…" She put down her book, and stood up. Wobbling from the lack of stand she toppled over, and landed on her face. "Ow…." She groaned. She pushed herself up, and wobbled over to the door. She stretched her legs, and left to the adoption center.

_This line means time skip/skip_

"Hello! ~ How are you miss?" A green mare asked from behind the counter.

"Oh! Um I was looking into adopting a foul from here! ~"

"Oh of course! ~ Sure, anything in specific? Like a filly or colt?"

"Well no not really, I just want a unicorn that's all!"

"Oh of course, sure. Just follow me this way!" The mare went over to a door, and opened it. "This is where we keep the unicorns! You can go in here, and look at the fouls, and I'll be waiting at the door for you, when you're done come to me, and we'll talk. ~"

"Ok! ~" Twilight ducked into the room, and looked around. There were many fillies, and colts playing together. She approached two colt that were playing together. "Hello you two! My name is-" She was interrupted by one of the colts hitting her in the face with a toy. "Ow!" She rubbed her snout. "Ooook…." She turned, and looked around. She spotted a filly in the back holding a teddy bear, with a teddy bear a cross from her leaning against the wall across from her. "Hmm…. Maybe I should try her! ~" She walked over to the filly, and as she approached she could hear the filly talking. She knelt down so that she was eye level with her. The filly just looked at her in the eyes, with a look of fear in her eyes that was to clearly noticeable. "Oh! I am sorry; I didn't mean to scare you! ~ My name is Twilight Sparkle! What's yours?..."

"U-um…." The filly swallowed. "S-sparkling N-night!" She ducked, and placed her hoofs on her head.

"Oh um ok! ~ At least you you're not throwing anything at me!"

"Huh?"

"N-never mine. Um so what are you doing, eh were you doing?"

"Um well before you came over here I was playing with my bears, and my friend Bitter Tart, she's an imaginary friend…." She pressed her muzzle to her bear, and looked down.

"Oh, well it's a little sudden but would you like to, um be my daughter?..."

Spark looked up at twilight. "Would I like to? No… I would love to! ~" She hoped up and hugged her tightly.

"U-uh ok! Shall we?" Spark nodded, and let go, and they both walked to the door.

"Did you find someone? ~"

Twilight nodded. "Yup! ~ And I would love to take her home! ~"

"Ok!~ follow me dears~" The mare turned, and headed back to the front desk. "So today you said?"

"Mhmm! ~ Today!"

"Ok!~ then sign here! ~" She pointed to the spot on the paper, and twilight signed. "Oh! And you might want this….." She shoved a bag over the counter.

"Ok!"

"And we're home! ~"

"You live in a tree!?"

"Mhmm, follow me! ~" She walked inside with Spark following. "It's a library too! I study here all the time! Now follow me to the other rooms"

Spark, and Twilight had just finished going around the house when there was a knock on the door.

((Ha ha! I finished it! There is some miss spelled/failed words, but I can fix them... I left you guys with a cliff hanger!~ The first chapter seems kind of rushed, but every time I write something that ends up happening... But don't worry I won't it gets better! The picture on the cover thing is what Sparkling Night looks like, and her imaginary friend is seen only a little. Ignore the gem in her eye for now, 'cause it's not part of her right now, 'cause how the gem got their is explained later on in the story. ;) Ok then um tell me who you think is knock on the door, and you get a hug, and cookie from me! And keep your ideas coming to help me out! Thank you for following my story! I won't abandon this story like others! ;) ))